MG SS 'remember,we broke up?' NOTE on 48 - Page 5

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Loving the story 👏
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Oh may be its geet's plan to make maan jealous
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Interesting teaser and now waiting for the update. Take yout time to update dear..
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read both parts...
loved it ...
nice concept...
wonder full teaser...
eagerly waiting for more...
update soon...
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interesting teaser ..
Waiting for update...
Continue soon...
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SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE GUYS. I AM VERY BUSY IN MY UNIVERSITY LIFE, THE CLASSES & ALL. PLEASE STAY WITH ME. I AM TRYING TO BE REGULAR. I AM GIVING A BIG UPDATE . SO I KINDA EXPECT A BIG COMMENTS & LIKES. SO PUULLEEEJJJ LIKE & COMMENT GUYS.NOW, BACK TO UPDATE.


PART 3. PLANNINGS



Maan looked at Geet who was now dragging Pinky towards their place. He just sighed remembering what took place moments back. He smiled a little remembering his feisty princess in action. That's what always made him love her. She was always different from others, be it her dressing sense, her approach to people, her thinking style...everything. This is the reason what made her different from the rest of people.

He looked again at Geet who was also looking at him. She diverted her eyes as soon as it meet his chocolate pair ones. She so wanted to go back to his arms where she was moments back. She looked at him longingly when she thought he was not looking at her. She so missed him these days. Meeting him after almost 3 months made her realize that. It wasn't like she wasn't thinking about him. All her days & nights were spent thinking about him. But now looking at him in flesh & blood made her thinking about the decision she took about forgetting. She knew it was impossible for her even before. But now looking at him made her realize about the strength of the feelings she had for him. Even all the things happened between them she was still madly in love with him.

Maan noticed the longing in her eyes. He smirked inwardly knowing Geet thought he wasn't looking at her. Only if she knew she can never be out of his sight, heart & mind. He knew she loved him as much he loved her. After what happened between them he still tried to manofy her, make things right, but she won't budge. In all of their fights, He was always the first one who tried to make thighs right. He was always the one who tried to bridge the gap between them. Then after that again they will again get into a silly argument mostly because of their different way of thinking. It was another thing that this is the first time that they were away from each other for such a long time. So he knew if this time again he tries to go to her it will again end in the same result. So enough is enough. This time he will make to him & that too for good. And after that there will be only love no egos.

With that thought Maan started to think about ways to get Geet talk to him. He was thinking about various ideas when suddenly a bunch of girls approached him. One of them sat beside him saying seductively "hey handsome, want some company??" Maan was going to snap at her when an incredible idea hit him. How can he forget about his sherni princess who can pounce on any girl who tries to come close at him. He can his princess talk to him. So he flashed his most charming smile saying "of course beautiful, come take a seat.." The girls giggled & sat near Maan . Maan was talking to them but his eyes were as usual on Geet. As he looked at her he found his mission working in the perfect way. The way geet was shooting glares at the girls he knew his work was done.

Geet was still cribbing to Pinky about coming here & seeing Maan. Though she was happy seeing her love after such a long time, she was still angry on him. Pinky was looking elsewhere while listening to her calmly & cursing on her luck trying to get Geet take a vacation. She just wanted to make things easy for Geet. But she had no idea destiny would play such a game with Geet. Suddenly she frowned not hearing Geet & looked towards Geet. Then she noticed Geet boiling like a lava & looking somewhere. She looked towards the same direction & gulped her saliva seeing Maan surrounded with girls. She knew how much Geet was protective about maan. Hell, she didn't even like her best friends talking to him. She can kill anyone coming close to maan & can destroy anything. She looked at Geet who was ready to blast so she quickly moved away saying "geetu, who I wanna have an ice-cream, main abhi ai..." Saying this she ran away from there before she becomes a victim of Geet's wrath.

Geet was burning in anger seeing Maan flirt with the girls. "yeh dekho is besharam ko, delhi me thin a wo samera, uski waja se kya kuch nahi hua aur yeh hai k sudrharne ka nam hi nahi lete,abhi yaha ake bhi inki besharmiyan khatam nehi hui. Mera samne,mera samne he's flirting with those bimbos. I mean inki itni himmat..."

She was going to march towards him when she remembered about their situation. How can she go to him. But she can't stand here doing nothing. She have to do something. She was planning to make those chipkus stay away from maan when a guy approached her. "hey beautiful, may I know ur name..??" He didn't get any response just noticed her looking at another location. Now this is the height of insult. No girl has ever denied the Yash Malhotra. Obviously she was absolutely gorgeous, may be the most beautiful girl he has ever seen. He was noticing her for quite sometime. She was with no guy he was sure about that. So when her friend moved away, he decided to make a move. It wasn't wrong to have a little nice time. So he tried again "ahem, hey...I am yash malhotra, nd u r ??"

Geet was totally irritated with a person who was breaking her concentration which was on planning murder of the bimbos. She was going to snap at him when she noticed Maan's whole attention was on her now. She got confused when she looked at the intruder. Oh so this was the reason. She smiled inwardly at the situation & decided to put through Maan what he made her feel. She flashed her most charming smile saying "hi, I m geet handa.." and that was the start of a new game.

Maan was enjoying Geet's restlessness when he saw a guy just in his swim ware. He knows for sure that he was trying to hit on his innocent baby. He knew she'll be ignorant of this. But when he saw Geet smilling at that dickhead. Now it was going bad. And he will surely hit him before he tries anything with his Geet.

Geet & Yash were talking their hearts out. Yash wanted to be flirty with her but it was kind of next to impossible. She was a great girl with a great sense of humor. He didn't have a conversation like this for a very long time. And he really didn't want to ruin this for some silly flirting. He can really use a friend like her. She was charming, had a bold personality & had some brains which was really rare in the worlds of bimbos.

Yash "so, geet, wanna try water skying?? It's great fun& msure u have never tried that. "

Geet smiled saying "yeah..i never had. But isn't it scary..??"


"are nahi...it's kind a cool.."

Geet was going to reply to that when she noticed a furious Maan coming towards them. So to give him a medicine of his own Geet took Yash's hand in her lovingly saying "tum hoo na mere sath??? Then I won't get scared."

Yash was confused with this kind of behaviour from Geet he looked shoking at Her.

She continued to look into his eyes which were staring right back at her. She looked downwards blushing batting her eyes. Suddenly a punch threw him a few feats away from Geet. Geet was shocked with the turn of events & looked to the source of the punch only to meet the angry eyes of Maan.

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Ye geet n her ideas!
Bichara yesh!😆
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Yarr although the update was too good, and I enjoyed it, you shouldn't have ended if there... I Want to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome
loved it
wow maan wanted to make geet jealous but he got taste of his own medicine 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so interesting update dear... Possessive Maan and Possessive Geet.
Loved this chapter so much now waiting for the next.
I think this holiday will change everything between them and they will come together but waiting to read your way.

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