Series: Twines of the heart [OS 6- P 20]

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Dia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Awesome OS.. Loved your writing style.. Waiting for next..😊

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

amazing part...love the way you describes the entire the place...the way you write makes the place looks more beautiful...and maan is soo confusing...the way he showed his concern n dislike on seeing her bruises...lovvving the story...😊😊 cant wait for more

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prema_ks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

You took me to the typical Iyers house with that carnatic music playing background.

Such a beautiful story. Simply loved it. Can I have pms for all your other stories too..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

wonderful updates! JS read OS 2 n OS 3 nw! Her dad slaps her after she says she wi;; agree of he forgives her sister! Her sis ran away n gt married to someone from another community! She nw has a child bt her dad has nt forgiven him! Geet spoke up! So that's hw SD met Geet! n Maan meet Geet! Maan notices the slap marks n the woud o her forehead! She has also gt hurt wen she was putting on the bangle! Maan puts a plaster! Maan upset seeing her hurt! Geet sarcastic! update soon! Well written! Pls do pm me! Thanks

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Dia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Awesome.. Waiting for next already..

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Lovely heart to heart between the sisters

Thanks for the pics, they make the unfamiliar things clear😃

Meena has a point about Geet's stand in this. Will it matter 50 yrs later?

So are we seeing the groom's side next?

please continue soon

your writing is addictive😃

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.Tulip.

@.Tulip.

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Awesome update

Liked d ornaments n d pattu, it was cute thank fr posting pic both dsisters are very close to each other, I wonder how they spend these 6 years without seeing each other BT m happy that they met finally😊

Hmm so who's this who don't like red color on her

Fantastic job luv ur writing👏

As always waiting for next😳

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-Gemini-

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Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Lovely update

Geeg & meena convo...too good

Eagerly waiting for the next part

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AshelySpinelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Nice part so maaneet r gettng married nd geet's sis was acceptd dats gd nd geet wore blue sari coz smone tld her red doesnt suit her hmmm nice waitng 4 d nxt part update soon