Series: Twines of the heart [OS 6- P 20]

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

meri comment ko like bhi nahi kiya

phir bhi am here.😃

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Veil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: dqno1
meri comment ko like bhi nahi kiya

phir bhi am here.😃

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I am so sorry. I read each and every comment and cherish them. Since I come from mobile frequently, I couldn't like them all

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Veil

I am so sorry. I read each and every comment and cherish them. Since I come from mobile frequently, I couldn't like them all

No sorry needed dear

Am just being silly

For such exquisite writing, you can ignore me every day..😆

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Your writing is exquisite..

I am spellbound by it

For a few minutes I was transported to the life in a place far away with the mango trees and the parrots and the music playing in the background.

Savitri Devi is astute and intelligent

These two are giving off sparks like there was no tomorrow.

The way you described her putting on the bangles, I felt a pinch when she hurt herself.

His apparent unconcern dissolves at the sight of her hurt and the mark on her cheek.

Do update soon please

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mhappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Read the first os of the series

That was simply BEAUTIFUL

awesome writing

and very different concept

using kirtan in your story

👏

never heard this as don't understand this language but loved the translated meaning

simply brilliant story telling

Geetanjali iyer and her sarcasm

too good😆😆😆

their convo was indeed very interesting

poor muthuswamy

loved this os so much

thanks dear for such a wonderful piece

🤗

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

read the updates ...loving it

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

i am fell in love with ur writing style...
loved maan and geet moments...
i eager to know maan agreed to marry geet because of his elders wish or he also feels for her...
geet buried her feelings long back seeing him roaming with girls
now how she gonna open up with him