Series: Twines of the heart [OS 6- P 20]

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Disclaimer

These would be a series of One shots, each of them inspired by Keertanas, tyagaraya, annamacharya and others. This work is entirely fictional and the keertanas are used only as a means of inspiration, the interpretation isn't changed, or is intended to. My intention wasn't to offend anyone. Also, each one shot would be accompanied by the aforesaid Keertana, which i request you to play while reading.

Someone asked me what a Keertana was. It is a poetic barb. Feel free to ask questions about anything you find difficult to understand, the traditions, the lyric or anything.

Index

Ela Nee daya radu? - Scroll down

Brochevarevarura

Jagadananda Karaka

Natanala Bramayaku na manasa

Raghuvamsa sudha

Marugelara O Raghava


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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats! update soon! interesting concept 😊
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interesting...continue soon
waiting for next update
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Babaji!
God yaar that was too good!
Hmmm... Should I say more. ..
Forget it im going to read it again. ...😃
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lovely!!!
hadn't read your works since a long time!
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wow that's an amazing start
loved it to the core
geet has feelings for him but seeing his closness with girls she masked her feelings and always behaves with indifferntly..
maan and geet parents wants them to get marry
now what will be geet's reaction...eagerly waiting for the next part


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terrific start! wonderfully written! update soon
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That was a super narration 👏
updat ur other works too pls
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My myyy 😳
Simply awsm wowww
So he an arrogent jerk n she a cutie who fall for him years back
I just luvd the way he replied his "reply" 😉 M I even making sense here😆
Luvd it ❤️
Waiting fr their next mulakat at her home with his family😳


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absolutely lovely story!!!!
looking forward for more😊

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