Series: Twines of the heart [OS 6- P 20]

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

First chapter 3. Thank you for giving us the grandmother's point of view. I found it very helpful. Esp the part that had to do with Geet's father.

From the previous chapter, I thought Geet's dad had selfish motives for what he was doing to Geet. But seeing it through the eyes of Savitri, I was very surprised.

I had not taken into account what Geet's father felt when his oldest daughter ran away. I did not think about the humiliation and the FEAR he had for Geet's marriage.

Geet's family really ended up suffering a lot.

Maan and Geet's next meeting was also interesting. Maan is definitely interested but Geet still seems wary - cautious.

But Geet is Geet and she is adorably defiant.

Chapter 4.

Meera is back. And no one is gossiping??? Wow. What felt like the world ending turns to become a little wave and everyone goes back to normal.

I liked the time between the sisters. Meera had a lot of courage to do what she did and I am glad it worked out for her.

But I do feel for Geet and her parents. Meera was gone, it is they who had to deal with the consequences.

Also this chapter showed me that Geet is taking a positive step forward in her marriage to Maan.

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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Excited for the next part

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

omg beautiflu lovely chapter...glad to see meena back ...finally she has someone to whom she can speak her heart out...ohh am lovvving the story soo very much...do continue sooon

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

superb update! Well written! Meena n Get have a heart to heart talk! MEena is happy wid her life! she wants Geet 2 b happy! She is surprised tht Geet still has feelings 4 Maan! Its true hw ppl 4get everything wen there is something else to c! update soon

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

awesome update...loved the moments between the sisters...I loved the bond between geet & her sis...So geet is getting married to maan...hope to get maan's monologue & his feelings towards the marriage decision...

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

read all the parts..interesting story, the Keertan songs are weaved nicely within the updates...loved it.

the holidays and starting of school example was much appropriate for the contradictory feelings...so Geet is not completely reluctant about the marriage, and same is true with Maan, may be it is more than that for him...

PS - next time Maan should try the reverse psychology therapy on Dr. Geet such as 'I do not like red color on you' 😊

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

The convo between two sisters told a lot about their story/stories. It doesn't matter after 50 years, she has a point but it can matter to others as in her fathers case unfortunately, we live in a society where plus minus are extremes,
but well now everything is normal, though for Geet who has contradictory feelings, I think not for some time but since we know Maan a little bit, it will get better...
But Geet took a risk, I think had it not been for Meena she wouldn't have agreed...