Birds with broken wings:Maaneet OS Part2 Pg6

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

awesome start dear...but why 2 shots...u can make it a ss...

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

awesome start dear...
nice one but little sad...
maan and geet ,dev and shagun engaged..
ho god maan misunderstood geet and said all those to geet...
ho god bechari geet...
dev and shagun love eachother..
thank god they cleared to maan...
but it is late for maan to reach geet...
ho gosh the accident and maans imaginary part stolen my heart...
it was really very painful...
eagerly waiting for the next part..
continue soon...
great work yaar... 👏

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Nice OS
but geet ko kuch bhi karke bacha lete na dear
First maan ne bina kuch Jane geet ko hurt kia
And last geet left the world 😭

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

loved part 1 of the OS

super nicely written

feel horrible that maan misunderstood geet

waiting to see what happens in part 2

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Hiii...congrats on da os...Awesome update...Loved it...Sooo sad...poor maaneet...is geet dead...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

So will Geet be alive in the next part. Please let her.

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

sad os
I want geet alive in next part

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

part 1
nice...
poor Geet...
OMG why did u do this to Geet?
plz let this be happy ending...
cont soon...

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

nice os...
but d end...😭😭

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
I thought at least u wud understand my point of view as u r a writer who showed Geet's painfuldeath in KYPH.Like u r going 2 bring a twist in adhuri kahani who knows there may b a twist in the 2nd part of my os too
😉

dear i understand as writer... but jb mein read krti hu..toh lost ho jaati hu😉...as viewer comment hote hai...

😉 so dont worry... am with you...