Birds with broken wings:Maaneet OS Part2 Pg6

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Sydell

@dellzcreationz

Rocker

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Nahiiinnn why did u did so Geet and Maan u seperated loved it but dont make them seperated in ur next part make them as angels

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Geet died...😲😲...Y did u make Geet die...😡😡😡...I didn't like it...😒😒...U made them separated...😭😭😭...I don't like painful stories of Maaneet...thank u 4 pm...😊...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

What did he do

He realised his love too late

Damn it was heart breaking

Poor geet

She lost the one she loved

As did maan

He should have asked his brother what really happened

But no he just accused her without knowing the truth

Now suffer dude

Cheers for pm

Sorry for sounding harsh

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awsum os
jaldi 2nd part update karo

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maaniqra

@maaniqra

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

sad ending

why u killed geet😭

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

why u kliled my angel

firslty am so happy

u write some thing

after long time

but now

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

u killed geet and now next maan😲

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I thought at least u wud understand my point of view as u r a writer who showed Geet's painfuldeath in KYPH.Like u r going 2 bring a twist in adhuri kahani who knows there may b a twist in the 2nd part of my os too

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