Birds with broken wings:Maaneet OS Part2 Pg6 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
nice story with sad ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
U killed geet 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Birds with broken wings Part 2
I know all are angry with me for the last part.Hope this part will cheer you up.


After a year...

Dev came to Shagun.
D:Shagun...where is Maan bro?And where is his better half...?She is also missing.It's getting late.Today is their first Anniversary party.
Sh:What to do?They both are so romantic that they can't reach anywhere on time.

Maan entered the bedroom.He saw his wife dressing up.She was wearing earrings.He embraced her from back.She blushed.
She:How do I look now?
M:Very beautiful.
She:Can I ask you something?
M:Ya.
She:Do you still remember Geet?
Maan kept quiet.
She:I know you have not forgotten Geet yet.We are together.But still you love Geet.Right?
M:She is my first love.But I love you more.
She smiled:Thank you so much Maan.

Flash back..

Maan cried embracing the life less body of Geet.
Suddenly he felt different and looked at Geet.Her hand moved a bit.Her lips shivered.
G:Maa...Maa...Maan...
Maan couldn't believe it.

Dev was trying to wake up Shagun who had fainted.
D:Shagun...get up.
Slowly she regained her consciousness.Dev was relieved.
S:Geet?
They looked at Maan-Geet.They ran to them weeping.
Shagun cried:Geet!
M:Geet is breathing.
They were surprised.
M:We have to take her to the hospital now itself.
D:Ok...I will bring the car now.
They took Geet to the hospital.

...

After hours...

Geet opened her eyes.She felt someone was holding her hand.She looked at that person.She couldn't believe her eyes.It was Maan.
He was very emotional:Geet!Thank God you are alright now.I got scared.
Her eyes were full of tears.
M:I am sorry Geet.Please forgive me for misunderstanding you.
Geet couldn't believe it.Tears rolled down her cheeks.Seeing Maan's tears she felt sad.
G:I forgave you Maan.I am not angry with you.
He was very happy.
Maan took care of Geet so well that Geet got surprised as she wondered how Maan could look after her so well as he did not love her.
Maan took Geet to the hospital garden for a walk.He helped Geet to walk.Maan was holding an umbrella to protect themselves from heat.Geet felt comfortable walking close to Maan under the umbrella.She rested her head on his chest.He held her close.

Suddenly Geet realized that the sweet embrace was only her imagination.

Geet looked at Maan:Thank you so much for the care Maan.
He smiled:You are my responsibility.
She just smiled.
She thought in her mind:You don't consider me as your fiance.Then how can I be your responsibility?

3 months passed.Geet recovered completely.

Once Niranjan and Shagun had gone for a function which Geet avoided due to taking rest.
She heard some sound in her house and went out of her room.She was shocked to see Maan.
G:Maan...
He kneeled down in front of her.
M:I hurt you without understanding you.I made fun of your love.But now I regret a lot.Because I love you.
Geet became very emotional.
M:Do you love me now also?
Geet's eyes were teary:I never stopped loving you Maan.I love you now also.

They both became very emotional.
M:Geet!
She kept her arm on his shoulder:And I will love forever...till my death.

Maan held her hand and wept.

G:Maan...make me yours forever by marrying me.
Maan became serious:Yes...but on one demand.
Geet got tensed:Demand?What demand?

M:You have become my darling...my sweet heart.So from now onwards you are my Mishti and I will call you only Mishti.
She smiled:Done.
They both laughed.

Present...

Geet looked at Maan sweetly:After becoming your Mishti I forgot my real name.I forgot that I myself is Geet.
Maan looked at her romantically:You are my first love Geet.I fell in love with you when you were my fiancee.But as I told you I love Mishti more as Mishti is the one who became my beloved and wife.But since Geet is my first love I can't forget her.
She smiled.
He pulled her closer:Happy Wedding Anniversary Mishti.
G:Same to you Maan.

Dev and Shagun came.
D:If romance is over come down guys.Party is going to start.
S:There is one whole life for romance.
Maan-Geet smiled and went with Dev-Shagun and celebrated their first Wedding Anniversary.

The End

I was laughing at your comments on Geet's death.Somebody guessed that Part 2 is meant to show Maan's death.I thought since you all knew there was going to be part 2 you all hoped for Geet being alive.But nothing happened.Only a few had hopes about Geet being alive.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
👏👏👏beautiful part...i really thought we lost geet..finally maaneet are together..tk you👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
u always give shock
but awsum. ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Chalo acha h !
Now she's alive n happily married!
Thanks for the happy ending!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
thank u for making all of us happy
happy to see maneet together
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
awww lovely beautiful mishti haan 😉loved its was cute and emotional OS thx for making that happen loved the part where Geet was calling on Maan to make sure to him that she is alive love your OS a lot!!!!!!!!!Hoping for some new work from you Do keep continuing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
loved the update
so funny how you had us all going about geets death
excited when i first read her whispering maans name
loved how maan helped her get better & then proposed
the way her gave her a new name was adorable
hoping for an epilogue as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Nice one
really i dont like to see the hero or heroin dying in stories...
but now its soo good
loved it

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