STORY OF MY LOST HEART! (Completed!) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

I am waiting to read 😊...but you can decide if you want to update now or later.

also, regarding pics -- next time you can also check that the image does not have copyright...but ye ek chalega I guess.

Hmm but download karo phir upload phir forum me post. ..
It's a long process. ..
I've decided I'll complete this one first😃
It's more simple than the other one...
Will update in the morning!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
ok, will wait..😊
pics - yehh, download / upload is time consuming...better to use those available on internet...but may be you can avoid those with copyright mark on it or written as copyrighted, though I do not know how strict the rules are on IF...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part #7



Rani di!

There u go again I thought rolling my eyes. ... how ever busy I might be don't know why I couldn't ignore her... it's just a day since she's with me... but she had bonded with everyone so well that it's really difficult to say we've met her only yesterday n we don't know who she is!

Strangly enough we couldn't find way to her home. .. I think she's never been out of her home alone. .. coz the direction she gave us were of no use... so I asked my men to inform someone near the temple so that if someone comes searching for her we could be informed!

She never let me be alone. .. Even at the night she insisted that she'd stay with me... guess she was too tired ..she slept as soon as I asked her to sleep. .

On the other hand the preparations for the war were on full seing.. As Yeshvardhan singh said he sent us his troops n sent us a message that he'd join us a day before ...

Every thing was set but I noticed there was something that was amiss in the soldiers camps...

As slowly the no. of men in the camp were decreasing ... I was not sure though. ..until one day where I saw Rajveer talking to some of his men I suppose. ..

It's just two days from the war n I didn't know what was happening around me any more. ...

In the evening I heard my men they found someone near the temple search for his sister! Seeing the situation around I thought it would be better if I check in person. .. Chutki was too innocent ... n didn't want to take any kind of risk regarding her!

The temple was closed for a while. .. For security reasons!

It was dark n there was no one in the surroundings. . I asked my men to stay alert n walked into the temple!

I offered my prayers n looked around for someone only to find someone sitting under the tree in roughed clothes. .. it was too dark I couldn't see his face clearly..

Seeing his dressing I doubted if he was really related to Leelawathi! As she didn't seem to belong to a poor family!

As I approached him I was hit by something hard on my head!

Before I lost my conscience I only heard him command ... to walk from the back entrence...




To be continued. ...



Hay pep!
I know it's little short I'll give another part soon today!
We'll complete this one by tomorrow!
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
The story is getting interesting now... Waiting for another awesome update...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyasi

The story is getting interesting now... Waiting for another awesome update...


Thank U! 😕
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part # 8

It was time I thought n got ready to enter the battle field!


I smirked to myself looking at the shocked faces of few ... n few were like they were seeing some ghost!


Recalling last night I wonder how far could people go in there greed maybe it was the power the throne carries,, ...as I was about to exit my chamber Chutki came running to me with Prasad! With her face clouded with worry still trying to be brave... I know she was quite shaken up from the previous night's events...


I didn't want anyone else to know that I was wounded specially in the battle field... It was first day of the war n it was important for me to be present in the field as being the queen I have to represent my land!


It was quite difficult for me with the wound still fresh... Generally they say people fight for love in my case it was quite confusing as I was fighting with n for my loved ones as no one was ready to let go...


I saw him today after a long time... I dint even know how to react! Coz he wasn't my Maan standing in front of me but King Maanveer Singh Khurana who was our enemy! The cold look in his eyes was so scary ...


With fierce battle bloodshed every ware... Lives lost... I was left thinking about the destruction it brought!


It was evening n as per the rules we broke for the day ... by the looks of it I know it would take a long time for the battle to end!


My wound was almost hurting as it was soaking wet! I carefully removed the old one replacing it with the new one as my vision was blurred with the flowing tears ...


It was only place where I could let go my grief ... I dint understand y God put me in such a situation ... I dint even like the thought of answering him back n here I'm fighting with him...


But then coming to the positive side of it I can have the privilege of seeing him fight which no other women will have... I thought chuckling wiping my tears... Chutki would be worried ... Its better I send her a message...


Now that thought brought me back to the previous days happenings...


If it wasn't yeshverdhan I would have even managed to survive!


It was dark in the woods I think due to the heavy downpour I gained my conscience... I just saw Yeshvardhan fighting with few men... As they were more in no. he pulled me up fighting few n started running ... I know it would be futile attempt to fight! It was heavy rain ... n the soil was too slippery!


On the way I only asked him one thing


Who? Though I knew the answer...


Raajveer! He said...


By now we were at a safe distance... before I could ask more an arrow hit me n my leg slipped in to the deep valley into the river...



to be continued...


p.s: keep checking the thread if u want to read more as the updates will follow!
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Part 7
so that was a trap, interesting...but where are her men and who gave the command, hope he is not Maan, that's unfair move but I am also feeling let him be Maan only, at least he will not harm her 😆 Nice update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 7

so that was a trap, interesting...but where are her men and who gave the command, hope he is not Maan, that's unfair move but I am also feeling let him be Maan only, at least he will not harm her 😆 Nice update.


Maan! 😆
Let's see. ...
Thanks for liking anyway!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8 -
oh no..Rajveer, my guess was wrong 😭 😆
what is he? a backstabber or Trojan Horse..

but good she was saved by Yashvardhan...
loved the lines - she had to fight with her love for her loved ones..and when she thought, she got a privilege of seeing him fight in the war...

and what is in Maan's mind, what was he thinking and what did he feel when he saw her in the war on the enemy side..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 8 -

oh no..Rajveer, my guess was wrong 😭 😆
what is he? a backstabber or Trojan Horse..

but good she was saved by Yashvardhan...
loved the lines - she had to fight with her love for her loved ones..and when she thought, she got a privilege of seeing him fight in the war...

and what is in Maan's mind, what was he thinking and what did he feel when he saw her in the war on the enemy side..


Sweety don't you think ur reading all the nonsense I'm writing!
Chalo sojao next kal padlena!🤓
Bechari thak gai ho gi!😆

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