STORY OF MY LOST HEART! (Completed!)

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Updating!

I know it's getting too quick but after this week I don't know when I will give the next !

So u have to cope up with me. ..😳

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Priyasi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Wow, so many updates... And I loved it... Can we get another update??? soon???

Love this story, an altogether different concept...

So, Leela is Maan's sister and she was her distraction... But what I loved the most is the respect he held for her as an individual... Loving it... Waiting for more

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part# 12

He very carefully placed me on my bed... covered me n then slowly patted me to sleep. .. I didn't even know when sleep took over me...

I guess he left making sure I was comfortable. ...

Next day I went to my mother's chamber n told her my decision. .. giving only the things which were needed at the moment...

So next few days went away in the wedding preparations n the most enthusiastic person was chutki! She was all jumping from one corner to other asking everyone what they were doing n if she could be of any help! But I've already instructed every one that no one will give her any kind of work!

Almost everything was done except for one thing I thought smiling!

So it was the time to invite our king!

Hmmm... it would be the first time I will visit his place. ... my stupid heart was beating a bit too fast even at the thought of it!

As I entered his land I was spellbound with its beauty!

Across the river.. surrounded by water ... proudly stood his kingdom ... as we entered ... I was so lost in every thing the people who were so friendly n the respect he held for there guests. ... Every little shop had atleast one flower plant hanging at there doorstep! I only heard there respect towards there king but seeing it was so overwhelming!

It's said that there queen loved plants. .. so in her memory every one had put up one...

Now even the palace it had its own charm. .. There was no doubt it was magnificent but what added to it's beauty was the waterfall which was just few miles away from the main city! As it played the role of the backdrop!

I was escorted towards the court were the king was present along with his ministers. ..

I explained the reason of my vist in short n let him know that we would be waiting for his presence n blessings to the couple. ..

It was night n I was left to think about today's events. .. Seeing his response anyone would say he was not much interested in attending such occasions. .. but I knew it very well what ever work it may be he would definitely be there as he knew chutki will be waiting for him!

It was time for the kanyadaan ceremony n all were in thoughts .. n gossips were going around. ... chutki was just about to cry when Rajveer entered. .. claiming to be her brother n was struck with the guests. ...

Rajveer! Y didn't I think of it before, even he was Maanveer's family! Now there's another story to unfold!

Rest of the ceremony went in peace. .. n even Maan made his presence. .. all went well ...

But the major problem started now... as the guests started talking about my wedding !

No no !.. That's not what bothered me ...as I knew it was next to impossible to even look at me forget marrying. ..I very well know the consequences of laying eyes on Maanveer Singh Khurana's possession!

It was the talk about some princess that bothered me!

It seems she was so beautiful, lovely n what not...waiting for maan from so long n him being the arogent king n too particular about his life wasn't even giving a head to it!

Come to think of it I know I was being silly but... y was someone waiting for him even after knowing about his decision. .. which is almost impossible to shake!

N moreover who was this princess who dared to enter my story! That too without my knowledge. ..

To be continued. ...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

What an interesting update... hmmm queen Geet is wondering and me too...

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Priyasi
Wow, so many updates... And I loved it... Can we get another update??? soon???

Love this story, an altogether different concept...

So, Leela is Maan's sister and she was her distraction... But what I loved the most is the respect he held for her as an individual... Loving it... Waiting for more

Thank U so much for liking! 😃

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: caller123
What an interesting update... hmmm queen Geet is wondering and me too...

Oh !

Then keep wondering. ..😆

Thanks for liking anyway!

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

read all 12 parts right now

lovely story

a real fairy tel

very interesting

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: aparna3011
read all 12 parts right now
lovely story
a real fairy tel
very interesting

God! Aparna. .

I just said you missed few parts!

Now u don't have to read them all !😲

That too right now as I know u r quite busy. ..

It's ok u could have read it when you were free!😕

Thanks for liking anyway! 😊

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

God! Aparna. .
I just said you missed few parts!
Now u don't have to read them all !😲
That too right now as I know u r quite busy. ..
It's ok u could have read it when you were free!😕

Thanks for liking anyway! 😊

its my need to read something every day to end my day happily.

so try to read atleast one story each day

thanks for daily update so i can read every day

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: aparna3011

oh
its my need to read something every day to end my day happily.
so try to read atleast one story each day
thanks for daily update so i can read every day

N I thought only I was crazy!😆

Happy reading!

Will give next in the morning if time permits that is..

U can read it in the night!😊

It's late now n tommorrow I have a busy day so Good Night!🥱🥱