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Originally posted by: kabslocks
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Part # 9
It's been 4 days since the war started! n it was no ware to stop even having Yeshverdhan's army with us ...
They seemed much more powerful! At some point I can understand our view that we were fighting for our land but them! They were fighting for there loss their king!
Which proves only one thing even if we loose we will be at gain as well have our land in safe hands... now at least this is what I think!
Today I fought with him! He was too good in his moves n way too powerful for me... But what surprised me was he prolonged the fight till the evening n then bowing h retried to his camp!
I was alone in my tent n thought to attend to my wounds... as the days were passing it was getting difficult for me to even stand!
When I was about to open my dressing I heard my messenger call me ...
On enquiring I came to know that I was called to the field where we were to meet the king for talks...
It was quite calm n scary night... There was a tent made up in thecenter of the field... as I entered I saw that I was not the only one I the tent Yeshvardhan , Rajveer, n few of my ministers were already present! N on the other end Maanveer n few of his trusted men I suppose...
As I entered every one rose from there seats n greeted me with so much respect... I dint know what I did do deserve such a welcome!
As my eyes met with his I could clearly see he was very proud of me but y?
As I took my seat he gestured his every one else to leave...
Yeshvardhan gave me a reassuring nod n left out of the tent with others... we weren't alone In we both know it very well that they were very close to the tent trying to hear our conversation! But what they didn't knew was we dint need words to communicate!
He was proud of me even that feeling was out of the world!
He gestured me to have my seat made sure I was seated by now I guessed he knew about my injury. I looked up to see him lost in me seated in the far end! I silently let hem feel my presence...
Its been so long I've seen him tears just flowed from my eyes... as it brought back the beautiful memories of that night which I treasured!
I wiped my tears n smiled at him looking in his eyes ... suddenly his loving gaze changed in to a cold one... he called rest into the tent!
He declared the end of the war!
Before any one could question he maintained his demeanor n declared that from now on even our land will be under his kingdom but still will remain ours...as we both mutually decided that we didn't want our people sacrificing there lives...
Its been few days that the war was over... n we were back to our places... nothing much changed except few things were we would consult him for the decisions... n he took care of the rest from his place... he ordered he would have his own chamber in side the palace where he would stay when he visited ...
I know even though the changes were minor it would take time for people to adjust with the fact...
My wounds got worst after getting back I realized I needed proper medication... I couldn't walk with out support as the physician said it would take time for me to heel
With things settling I was still left with LOTS of doubts few will be cleared with the time I guess but the major one was how did I reach the palace that night as I only remember drowning!
To be continued...
p.s: keep checking the thread if u want to read more as the updates will follow!
Originally posted by: caller123
Sporthy this story is so nice and really sorry for the late comment.. I really love it. It was after a long time I'm reading this type of a story and I could not stop loving it. As I told you I already bookmarked it as I missed this so many times. Well done Sporthy. Keep up this great work dear.
Part # 10
It was slightly drizzling out side I was passing the corridors after having a chat with my mother... where I saw something which shocked me beyond my wits!
Leeawati with Yeshvardhan!
Babaji what's happening around me... it seems like he was teasing her about something n she was shying away... they looked too comfortable with each other...
As far as I knew this should be there first meeting but... it didn't seem so ...
Yeshvardhan was more of a family now so him being here didn't surprise me... but Chutki! I didn't want to get in to any more conclusions...
So I made my presence clear!
They immediately straightened themselves n as expected Chutki came rushing to me... held her ears n said that Yesh was her to be Husband as there marriage was fixed Long back... n she was here as her brother insisted!
Oh! So you'll leave now! I said faking disappointment... to which she hugged me tightly saying never!
Oh really not even when your Yesh wants to take you home? I asked teasing her a bit...
Rani Di! She wined n pouted
I kissed her forehead n walked away smiling leaving them alone ...
I think that was enough for me, as I didn't want to know more as most of it I guessed by now
Now all I have to do is wait!
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God! she looked eternal sitting by that pond n watching the moon her long locks flowing by the wind those beautiful fingers playing with water n most importantly the ornaments she wore as it was something close to us... my first gift to her!
I didn't want to disturb her thoughts, as she looked so much at peace...
I sat by near by tree watching her, recalling what all transpired between us!
I knew it that he'll go to Yeshvardhan for the political alliance... but what surprised me was he not knowing our relations... n Rajveer not opposing the decision...
By then I knew there must be some thing going in his mind!
But her fathers sudden dismiss was like a big blow! I knew she would be broken n was not so strong to withstand such a loss of her father so to distract her n keep her occupied I preponed my plans... I convinced every one saying enemy were weak at the moment n it was right time to attack!
I badly wanted to distract her so I sent Leelavati! My sister though not biological but she was no less...
That night in the temple when I saw her all lost n tired I just wanted to leave every thing aside n rush towards her... but then things were not that simple as they seemed! N i trusted Leela!
My thoughts broke as I noticed a shy smile playing in her lips a very small one though!
Oh! So she sensed my presence... Interesting princess... lets see how long you'll play!
I got up n stared leaving noticing her expressions from the corner of my eyes... god she was so cute... as I watched her expressions changing from confusion to pouting!
To my horror she got up suddenly rushing towards me totally forgetting her injury! She was about to lose her balance as I caught her from falling...
God princess! Careful... ur too precious to lose!
Saying so I lifted her in my arms n walked back towards the pond still making sure she was all right! N cursing my stupidity!
I settled down with my back to the pillar n her still in my arms... its been so long I didn't want to miss this feeling of us together I thought tightening my hold around her!
To be continued...
p.s: please imagine few creepers n a flower garden near by as its Geetanjali's wing n i suppose it must be a bit girly!😉
and keep checking the thread if u want to read more as the updates will follow!
Part #11
It was a peace full night after a long n having her in my arms was nothing less than heaven!
Princess!
Princess! Y isn't she responding did sleep by any chance... I lifted her face in my palms noticing a frown on her face, which I didn't like a bit!
What's wrong? I asked a bit sternly she ignored my question n started looking around... searching for some one I guess!
Princess answer me! Who are you looking for?
I thought someone was around ... that's y u weren't calling me Geet! She said pouting... I laughed loud hearing her explanation...she twisted her lips in annoyance n snuggled back to my chest!
Geet!
My Geet!
Umm...
Move let me look at your wound... saying I lifted her skirt till her knee... it was properly bandaged... I guess it was just done... I kissed her wound n pulled her dress back properly... only to c her shying N all red...
It must be hurting right!
Yes... so much... she said with tears in her eyes... I know she was referring to her fathers death!
So I let her cry... even I was waiting for this moment to take away her grief, which she was hiding, from the world!
After a wile she calmed down a bit! When I heard her mumble something ...
Hmm??
U aren't taking care of ur self! C u've become lean ...n these dark circles... u know its ok to rest for a while... she said frowning...
Which only made me smile...
I don't like it!
Ok ok ! I give up here after I'll take care of myself happy now?
Very!
Umm... Maan ... How did you know about my injury?
God how much I missed hearing my name... it feels even I belong some ware n even I'm home...That's when I heard her call me again
Maan! How do you know about my injury?
I think she felt me stiffening so I immediately relaxed!
Geet! Please lets not talk about anything else now... I only want to feel u close, as I don't even know when we'll be able to meet next!
She nodded n shifted a bit placing her head in my lap n closing her eyes with my palm...
Such a beautiful creation of god ... those long lashes which closed the path to reach her soul ... her milky skin... So smooth n tender cute button nose n her petal lips... I thought running my fingers on them ...
Geet!
Umm...
Leela is my sister!
Hmm!
U knew it ! I asked getting shocked...
Hmmm... Today morning I caught her with Yeshverdhn!
Oh! So don't want to ask anything about it?
She opened her eyes in response ...looking straight in to my eyes... n I knew my answer...She suddenly tried to get up...
What?
She pointed towards the pool...
Always at ur service princess...
I lifted her in my arms n took her towards the pool I carefully made he sit by the pillar making sure she doesn't hurt her self n moved away... she pouted spreading her arms.. Towards me...
I shook my head n laid in her lap! Playing with her bangles...
Maan! Did babaji sent you all my messages. ...
Yes your every little joy n slightest pain were conveyed ...
I said cupping her face n brushing my lips on her fingers. ..
Geet!
Umm...
I want you to arrange Leela's wedding!
Umm...
I wont be here for a while make sure u send me a invite with the guests!
Any thing else...
Yes...
N what is it! she asked rising her eyebrows...
You will miss me! I said kissing her palm...
To be continued...
Originally posted by: caller123
Wow another nice update.. Thank you so much Sporthy dear
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