STORY OF MY LOST HEART! (Completed!) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Sorry yaar
I can't pm u coz im on mobile. ...
N it gets too complicated to send pm.😕
U can bookmark it though as I will be giving regular updates😊

N yes thanks for liking!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Interesting updates. By every update story is becoming mysterious.

Thank U for liking! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: divydecember

⭐️ 👏 a fairytail i feel like reading abt marida from brave


Now what is that!😕
If it's some ff do tell me would love to read!
N if its some book then please fill me the details so that I can grab it from the near by store...😳

N not to forget Thanks for liking!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
⭐️ its not book or ff 😊
its a cartoon film
called brave and the lead girl name s marida
u read the plot of the film in google 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: divydecember

⭐️ its not book or ff 😊
its a cartoon film
called brave and the lead girl name s marida
u read the plot of the film in google 😉


Thank U!
Ab this sunday is booked😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part # 13


It was time I usually visited Gurugi...

But now things we different then I was a princess but now I'm the queen! Most of the things changed even peoples outlook towards Maanveer... as I thought, he proved to be the best for our land n after that war thankfully I won't be facing such situations...

Being rainy season it was all cloudy n too windy reaching the ashram I took blessings of guruji n talked about some political matters...Guruji had been with my father all his life ... I used to accompany him during those visits...

Thinking of those days which I used to rarely step out of the palace. .. as guruji says i was born after a long wait. .. lost in thoughts was crossing the jungle after my vist to the ashram I almost forgot I wanted to talk to Guruji regarding Yeshvardhan n his minister. .. as something was wrong n wanted his advice regarding it...

So I thought it was better to talk now as after the wedding things were getting all more weird!

Chutki was supposed to come n vist us for the after wedding rituals n didn't turn up. .. we were supposed to be meeting Yeshvardhan few days back along with other kings... which suddenly got postponed n most importantly there was no news from our King, Maanveer Singh Khurana!

But by reaching the ashram back... the site which awaited me almost knocked the breath out of me!

The whole ashram was on fire!

Though we tried to save it but most of it was already burnt. .. Thank fully everyone was safe... I didn't even know what to take of it as on enquiring no one had any idea of how it happened!

It was getting dark n would pour any time. .. I was thinking about the next step when I saw the most unexpected person at the moment Rajveer!

He carefully checked everywere came to us n asked in the most polite tone ... one I've never heard from him to move from there as it was about to rain better we head towards some shelter. .. I knew it wasn't the time to question him so I silently gave my agreement to it n we started to the nearby village. ...

It was raining heavily with cool breezes. .. n someone knocked my door it was a small village but safe from the strom outside. ..I somehow know it could be Rajveer on the door n I didn't like the thought of being alone with him in his room. ... But letting my personal opinions aside n looking at the positive aspect of the current situation. ..I asked him to come in...

As expected it was Rajveer. .. he greated me n handed over me a letter n a chain left immediately. ...

On opening the letter I found it was from Maan!

There wasn't much in the letter but few words saying I should reach the kingdom which is at the east end of my land as early as possible. ... n not to mention about the letter to any one. .. n rest will be taken care of. ..

I've met the king of that kingdom in few occasions he was quite elderly person. .. almost the age of my grandparents they're no more though... but heard a lot about him... he didn't have any sons n didn't want to give his land to any outsider. .so he continued being on the throne...

N the chain what was it for... may be I can know more when I reach there...

Next morning we were back to our land I asked Guruji to stay back in the palace for few days so that we could rebuilt the ashram in the due time... I made sure everyone was settled. ..

N made my plans to make a visit to the adjacent kingdom. ..

As expected no one had any kind of objections as it was our neighbourhood kingdom n we weren't having any issues with them... I stated my vist as a general one...

Every thing was set. ... by next day dawn I would reach that kingdom. ...




To be continued. ...


Will give next part in the morning!😃( that is if I wake up early!😉)
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Hmmm!!! What is Maan upto??? And what's with Yeshwardhan now...
I just hope you get up soon and we get an early update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part#14


It was almost evening by the time I reached there kingdom... there whole kingdom was painted white. ...I mean literally white..Every single building n pillar. .. Somehow it didn't give me a pleasant feeling!

I entered the court n exchanged greetings the king asked me to have some rest n we can talk in the morning. ... which I didn't like a bit! Come on now who would like to stay at such a strange place there was silence all around. ...

Even the guards weren't present!

It was late in the night. ..so I thought to take some rest as sleep was far away from me... I was about close my eyes I heard someone enter my room. ...it wasn't too dark so I made out it was some lady ...

She came towards me kept looking at me for a while which I found very creepy... then she picked something from the side table n left in a hurry. ...

God Maan y do u put me in such situations. ... n what did she pick from my table. .. oh the chain. .. she was a theaf!

I woke up with the sound of prayer ...someone was singing n it was so melodious. ..I quickly got ready n walked out in the direction of the voice. ...

They were performing puja so I silently joined them at the end of it both the ladies turned back...

I couldn't comprehend what's going on anymore. ...it was chutki! With someone. ..by the looks of it it think she's some princess. ...

But what was she doing here wasn't she was supposed to be with Yeshvardhan! Babaji y r u doing this to me...

Rani Di!

She came to me running n hugged me tightly n started sobbing. ..

I didn't want to think of anything right now... I took her towards the nearby garden n tried calming her down. .. seeing her in this condition wasn't something I liked ... n this whole palace wasn't giving me any good vibes so I thought it's better we leave early. ..


I guess chutki was tired. .. I took her towards my room n made her sleep assuring her that I won't go anywhere leaving her... she somehow slept for a while leaving me to ponder over my thoughts. ...

I heard someone clear her throat to gain my attention I guess. ..

I'm princess Aakanksha! I know you might be having lots of doubts. ... let me tell u as much as I know. ... we generally have a puja held in the temple which is in your kingdom. ... once in a year. ... after the puja we were retuning back when I saw her lying in the jungle. ... she was unconscious n badly hurt. ... It took nearly one month to heal ...she was all scilent n too scared to speak any thing... I was just hoping that we find her n send her back to her home safely. ...



She was looking out ofthe window. .. facing the other side. ..

She was no doubt beautiful n lovely but should I trust her words was my question..

If I was to trust her then why did she enter my room n stole that chain... there's something you r hiding princess. .. n I would definitely love to know more about it!

It was afternoon I took my leave from them with Leelawathi. .. as I didn't like staying in there place ...

In the middle of the way I asked my men to move towards Yeshvardhan's kingdom. .. something was telling me this was the best decision for now...

On entering the palace I took chutki towards her room n asked the guards to inform there king about my arrival n my wish to meet him now!

With in minutes he was in front of me... he was in a very bad shape. . Though seeing him chutki wanted to go to him but I was strong in my decision... I didn't let her move an inch though she was pleading me I chose to ignore. .. he was supposed to be taking care of her n look at him. ...

No chutki u will not go to Yeshvardhan now I only brought u here to get answers. ... truning towards Yeshvardhan

So how long were u planning to hide hide all this from me ... n how the hell did she reach that jungle that too all injured!

On hearing me he rushed towards chutki n kept checking her with his over flowing tears...

I thought it's better to leave them alone n left the room...

Rajveer! He'll have to answer my questions now...

Before you ask me anything let me tell you Princess Aakanksha in the same one who was waiting to wed Maanveer Singh Khurana! Leeawati is my own sister n not to forget Maanveer is more than my brother a father figure to me though I'm elder to him!

He said as soon as I entered his chamber...

N I know if Maanveer ever gets married it would be to u...





To be continued. ...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Glad u liked!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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