STORY OF MY LOST HEART! (Completed!) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
So, its Princess Akansha who's waiting to marry our King... No ways...
Hmm!!! how did Maan knew where Leela was, what's happening... me want to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyasi

So, its Princess Akansha who's waiting to marry our King... No ways...
Hmm!!! how did Maan knew where Leela was, what's happening... me want to read more


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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm really interesting... now what's going to happen? Is Princess Aakasha is involved with Leelavathi's injuries??
Waiting to know..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

hmm really interesting... now what's going to happen? Is Princess Aakasha is involved with Leelavathi's injuries??

Waiting to know..


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Posted: 11 years ago
read both updates
little confusing
why chutki is injured
yashwardhan dint make any efforts to find his wife
aakansha wants to marry maan but what maan wants
where is maan n what is he doing
is rajveer grey shade n he is real brother of leelavati
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

read both updates

little confusing
why chutki is injured
yashwardhan dint make any efforts to find his wife
aakansha wants to marry maan but what maan wants
where is maan n what is he doing
is rajveer grey shade n he is real brother of leelavati
waiting for next


Every thing will be cleared. ..
But a bit slowly!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part#15



Oh! So princess Aakanksha it is... let's deal with her first rest can take a rest for a while. .. I thought Grinning widely!

Making sure chutki was alright I left for my palace. ...I have few arrangements to make ...

It's all because of him I've to deal with stupid people. ... Don't know what is keeping him so busy. ...I thought twisting my lips!

I've invited princess Aakanksha to my place for few days... as I wanted to thank her for taking care of Leelawathi!

I was not wrong she readly agreed to my request n started of the very next day...

I was all ready n set ... I gave her a warm welcome n asked her to make her self comfortable. ..n left saying I have matters to attend at the court. ... in the afternoon when I was with her I was called by the guards stating an important meeting with the ministry. ... same in the evening! I was to have a chat with my mother. ... after all being a queen wasn't easy. ..right!

N moreover I can't be sitting n gossiping as I have a kingdom to take care of...

Next day I didn't even visit her when asked I had my guards to answer her stating I was busy. ...

By the end of the next day I casually graced her with my presence ... n asked her if we can visit the temple n have a chat as I was free in the evening. ..

It was quite crowded today don't know why but I very well know how to take advantage of this situation. ... so walked up to her n asked her to offer her prayers n meet me near the garden as I saw someone whom I had to talk to n disappeared in to the crowd. ...

I knew y she was here n if I'm not wrong she is well aware of my n maan's relation ... now come on every one can guess it who would sneeak in to a guests room in the night! N who would have so much patience to tolerate such ignorance only to know about my lifestyle. ..

She definitely wanted to know what what was laking in her... not my concern though but what I wanted to know was she didn't seem to be bad in any way then what was the mystery surrounding her!

By the evening we were seated in the garden when she suddenly asked me about what would qualities am I looking for in life partner. ...

Typical girly question it thought rolling my eyes. ... but I knew it was coming so I was prepared with the answer. ...

I want someone who is one among others ... who cares about every one around him n would let me take care of him... who would love to be stubborn n would accept me with my kingdom I completed giggling. ..

She was looking at me with open mouth!

Any problem Akansha??

No ! Not at all...

Ok n what about you?

Ummm I ... Don't have any dreams regarding it as my marriage is already fixed. ...

What ! Oh with whom u didn't even let me know. ... I said faking disappointment. ...

Ummm ... Maanveer Singh Khurana!

Oh our king! But I didn't hear any news about it... I said acting all shocked. .

Hmmm... That's were I want your help!

Can we go n meet him... it's been long time since i have met him...

Great now I've to arrange there meeting Babaji tell him I'm angry n won't talk to him! Here im not even blessed to hear a single news about him n look at her... I thought pouting!

Ok sure as I've got to be meeting with his ministers regarding some issue so u can join me... I said with a stupid smile. ...

Ok! That would be great ! Hmmm u know Rani Geetanjali I thought even you were interested in the king but after listening to u I'm so glad I've been provided wrong. ..

She completed smiling widely!

She looked so innocent but what about the other things. .. I think I'll know more in Maanveer's kingdom!

In all these I was happy for my own selfish reasons now I've got to meet him... it's been quiet a while n after what happened with Chutki he would have felt so alone...

Good atleast I would be able to support him to certain extent...

So let's have another meet Maanveer singh Khurana!

This time will have to face the consequences of letting someone enter my story!




To be continued. ...



P.s:Don't worry about the length as tommorrow is my off we'll have lots of parts coming

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy birth day
nice update
aakansha ask geet to help her for meeting maan
is it real that maan n aakansha's weding is fix

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update dear...
hmm interesting part dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

happy birth day

nice update
aakansha ask geet to help her for meeting maan
is it real that maan n aakansha's weding is fix


Thank U aparna!
U were the first one to wish me n trust me I felt so good!

N about the update u will know in the coming parts...

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