STORY OF MY LOST HEART! (Completed!) - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Great update dear...

hmm interesting part dear...


U liked it!
Well then thanks. ...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part#16



Situation took a complete u turn as we reached his kingdom. ...i still remember While talking to Guruji yesterday I got to know that it was Akansha's grandfather who was behind me all the while the attack before the war or the fire accident. ... may be even with Leelavathi's injuries too!

Though guruji was quite doubtful but even I felt the same...

Seeing princess Aakanksha I know someware my doubts were true...

There kingdom needed a successor n who would be better than Maanveer!

If Rajveer was true then may be it was him who saved me from drowning n Yeshvardhan misstook him to have planned it all!

Akansha was all smitten by Rajveer. ... n by the evening they wanted to get married. .. now I didn't know what to take of that!

People took it to there ego... now y won't they as the princess who they thought would be there future Queen choose his brother over him!

How insulting can it get... so they all switched to the very next available option n that was me!

In all this drama I didn't find the person whom I was actually here for...when his ministers asked me about my opinion ...I just smiled n said I have my mother to take decision regarding my life...

On reaching back I found whole palace decked up as a bride...

As u all might have guessed I was married that night to Maanveer Singh Khurana!

Now I am waiting for my dear husband to show up lost in thoughts I couldn't help ponder over how every person has a little bit of negetivity to there lives... be it Rajveer he wanted to be the king n he got it through Akansha , Yeshvardhan who wanted to gain the trust of his people by standing by me in the war against his oun relatives, Akansha who wanted every one to love her more or her grandfather who did everything possible for his kingdom!

I somewhere know this was coming as Maanveer was way too smart to slip such a golden opportunity!

I still had my doubts but then what's life if every thing gets cleared in a day!

So babaji from now on don't feel bad if I ignore u c I've to give importance to Maan na!

Before I could continue with my thoughts I heard him call me ... oh god I was feeling soo shy to even look at him!

He slowly reached me n gently took me in his arms. .. carried towards the all decked up bed...n placed me on it he kept admiring me for a while n there was only one word on his lips

Geet!

Now I wish to keep rest of my story a secret as I don't like sharing my personal life with everyone you know!





The end!






Hay people!
I know most of you weren't expecting the end so soon but this is how it is... when a princess gets her happily ever after! There's nothing more to it ... 😳

May b u will be wondering about the rest of the characters but when maan n geet r together y worry about all of them!😛

This story is for those precious three people who supported me when I almost thought it was a stupid decision to write. ...n read all my stories however illogical they might be...so a big wala thanks to u !🤗

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great end (beginning) to a great story Sporthy.
I really enjoyed it and thank you for this story. Keep on writing & we love to read your work.
Thank you for those three people who made you write dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Great end (beginning) to a great story Sporthy.

I really enjoyed it and thank you for this story. Keep on writing & we love to read your work.
Thank you for those three people who made you write dear.



i thought one of them was u!😃
n thanks for your support..
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank u so much for being with me though out!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi sporthy
read the eentire story in one go and enjoyed reading it
princess geetanjali and king maanveer singh ..
cute fairy tale..
thank u for different and nice story
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28



i thought one of them was u!😃
n thanks for your support..

Me one of them😲
Don;t worry I'll be there with you always.. So you better think about another story my dear friend..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
superb story
finally maan n geet got married
truely a fairy tele
loved so much
⭐️
👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi sporthy

read the eentire story in one go and enjoyed reading it
princess geetanjali and king maanveer singh ..
cute fairy tale..
thank u for different and nice story

Thank U for liking! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice update

superb story
finally maan n geet got married
truely a fairy tele
loved so much
⭐️
👏


Thank U so much aparna!😳

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