MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan

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vandy28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Hey grt part...loved it
End was suprb...hw maan qustn bck geet fathr ...hahaha
It was funny to c maan afrd of dev...lol
It was nyc move to b frnd wd dev...
Geet wrrd fr maan n dre momnt is gud too...geet is feeln attrctn twrds him...

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vandy28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Abt note...
I cn commnt only on my behlf...m lovin ds stry truly...n i do commnt regrly
I loved ds maan...vry dffrnt frm all other fictions...pls contue ds stry

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KReyAS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

awsom updt

loved it

maan is try to bedrinf with dev

cont soon

thnx fr pm

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

awesome part
maan question to GF superb
loved it

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Ratna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Mahi ...hi dear...sorry for not commenting on the last update ...dont know how that happened ...love this tapori Maan and his innocent Geet ...it is such a different andstory...Maan about to give her earring and her father comes...the dushman dushman playing in his head...he runs fast but still manages to give the earring to her...his friends teasing him about her elder brother ...Dev the pahelwan...Maan meeting him in the gym...finds out it is his birthday ...gets invited to the ,...instead of the birthday cake ...he gets to deal with the crazy Shakal ...he and his questions....Maan's reply to Marks theory ...he is also no less what a question he asked....Sakal ki bolti bandh kardi ...Geet looking at him from the balcony and giving him a ...Maan is all happy ...thank u so much for this awesome update and for making us smile

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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

maan shocked geet talking language

he get it she scared her father

he went to her house in short cut before geet reach her

she get the ear ring from maan both hand touch maan feeling some thing

maan went to god pray she falling him

maaneet danced geet father scolded her

she caring him speech to her mother she asked his health geet smiled his answer geet feels some thing close him dev invited maan and his friends his father don't like him lovely update

little dough understanding words