MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Mahi ...hi dear...sorry for not commenting on the last update ...dont know how that happened ...love this tapori Maan and his innocent Geet ...it is such a different andstory...Maan about to give her earring and her father comes...the dushman dushman playing in his head...he runs fast but still manages to give the earring to her...his friends teasing him about her elder brother ...Dev the pahelwan...Maan meeting him in the gym...finds out it is his birthday ...gets invited to the ,...instead of the birthday cake ...he gets to deal with the crazy Shakal ...he and his questions....Maan's reply to Marks theory ...he is also no less what a question he asked....Sakal ki bolti bandh kardi ...Geet looking at him from the balcony and giving him a ...Maan is all happy ...thank u so much for this awesome update and for making us smile




hi dear sorry for not reply
actualy khud ke hurt main
itna kho gayi ki , khud ke logo
ko bhul gayi sorry again dear


and beutiful comment daer
love this all smily face going with comment
which making more beutiful this comment
and this thread thanks dear and once agian
sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago



dear you have to wait till
6 sep than i will take some
decison , half to nahi chodungi
lakin kuch to soucana padega
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mahi when ur going to update...waiting to read this tapori language from maan and his effort to pataoying geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan




dear you have to wait till
6 sep than i will take some
decison , half to nahi chodungi
lakin kuch to soucana padega


Mahi 6 sep to bahut dur hai...soucho soucho par indono ki gadi kuch aage badhao...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: icskwt


Mahi 6 sep to bahut dur hai...soucho soucho par indono ki gadi kuch aage badhao...




wahi to agaae nahi ja rahi hai na 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi all i am back
i put this on hold
for some time
i talk with many and they sugges
me may me you all cant see him
like this tapori and all
and upon that many don't get language
of maaneet but that is essences of story
so i took leep of few year
now maan is 23 year and start
his business
and geet ❓

you have to read nexrt part s

Mahi
Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 7


a man in age of 23 standing near window and looking outside , he is so handsome that any girl blow with him , but so much pain on face like did he know to smile it is small office of construction and he start it before 3 year with partner

someone come in his cabin and give painful lok to him and thought ye wahi hai kya jise smile karne ke liye bahana chiye hota hai and look now , I don't remember when I saw his last smile , yes we get education , money etc etc but lost life beautiful life and sbse jada ishne paya aur khoya bhi , why god you take big price for his success his life and his smile I hate you for that

wo soft heart , teen age , jo choti choti sapano main khush rehatata wo to kahi kho gaya hai kahi dur uski jaga ye heartless , stone robot khada kar diya hai ku ... ( that teen age boy who is happy in small small dream just lost somewhere and this ruthless heartless , man standing on his place ) pata hai ander se kitana tuta hai utna hi sakt ho raha so don't get anyone that he is break behind repairing kash wahi teen age ladka mil jata jiske pass kuch nahi tha lakin Full of life to tha

same time someone put hand on his shoulder and called adi chale , adi just weep his tear and say yes Vicky ...and both just say can we come in and that man turn to them , with emotional face both feel pinch in their heart ...

adi - Maan ,maan just glare him adi say sorry sir wo you have two mitting and interview for secretary

maan - just nodded in yes and say mr sharma what is interview time , adi feel so hurt with word mr sharma ...his maan just stop to called them with name , just follow all ethics , manner and all adi give look to Vicky who nodded in no lick saying cool down adi just make himself calm and give ans ,both come out from cabin and went to canteen adi need tea now maan behavior

Vicky - its ok adi jane de na

adi just hug Vicky and cried out I want my maan back ye to wo maan nahi hai , uske pass education , career nahi tha but he is human , ye kon hai koi stone , we share childhood cant see him like this cant see Vicky just hug adi , pata hai adi hum koi bhi nahi dekh sakte lakin kya kare who is his life she just went away like this , he cant handle that , he is broken man just hiding it under anger ...

Both somehow control them self and finish their tea and went to their job , maan just finish his mitting they got new contract , and he need secretary for him who handle all this but his anger , don't know how many just run away and today again he have to take interview he just hate it

and in hour maan just fed up sab ki sab useless , just wan to be closed to him nothing more , their dress and all yuck he just called and ask how many more they informed just one he took breath and say ,please send her inside

maan just turn his chair now his back to door side and he heard same sweet voice an d he just froze in his place , na na it could not be true ...all memory which he want to buried come in front of him he just clutch his hand and turn his chair and both just froze for second ...HI PREAM KI YAATANA ( IS THIS LOVE OR PAIN)

she looking beautiful but so much change he cant point out what but something is missing

she just mummer maan

maan - its msk miss , miss what is your name

geet died hundred death ...he asking her name ,

she somehow control herself and say geet

maan- weleducated family ko belong lagti ho miss and cant you have maaneer to tale your Full name

geet - she wan to reply but same time ,maan phone start to ring and maan just took that and tale her that she wait outside for some time he will called her , geet feel insulated but just went outside , he want to go away from him but , she cant she need this job her last hope

she just went out and sit on chair

maan just took called and he need some time to digest that she is real in front of him it is not dream his all wounded get open again , her dad behavior , her behavior he just want to burn all that memory when he trying so hard again she come in front of him why to see if he is dead or not he just control his emotions and called her again

geet just entered and stand in front of him

maan miss you can sit , we follow that much ethics

geet just sit there , she lost hope that she get job hear because maan tone

maan - so let me see aualfication Maan just make face Just 12 Mohiner handa ki Tha Mohinder handa ki beti and just passing 12 class , strange ... kya hua fail hui thi kya maan ask with tont , eduction is god for your family that decide human character na than only 12 class education .

geet face turn more pale with maan questions ...

maan watch that , and ask do you need water miss kya naam hai apka main phir bul gaya ...

geet - with low voice say geet

maan - you need water take this he offer her glass and say in tont wo kya hai some educated person don't have simple manner to give water to a boy who is guest for them geet eyes start to turn teary she just say no I don't need water ...

precap

deva tujya gaabhaaryaalaa, umbarach nhai

Oh God the place where you reside has no sign

sanga kutha, theu maatha kalanaach kahi

tell me where I should bow as I am unable to decide it

deva kutha shodhu tula, mala sang na

Oh God tell me where I should look for you

prem kela evadhach, maza re gunha

I loved someone that's the only crime I did

deva kalajachi haak aik ekadatari

Oh God just once listen to the request of my soul and heart

deva kalajachi haak aik ekadatari

Oh God just once listen to the request of my soul and heart

majya hya jivachi aag laagu de tujhya uri

my soul is burning all the time hope you will feel those burns

aar paar kalajaat ka dilas ghav tu

why you gave wounds to my body and soul inside and outside

dagadachya kaaljacha dagadacha dev tu

you are made up of stone and your heart is also like stone

so lat me tale

with next part I will try to give present and past also

is it ok with you all just tale me in comment


Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭😭

ye kya kiya😲

mujhe rula diya😭😭

feel so bad bad😭😭😭

maan😭😭

geet😭😭😭

maaneet😭😭

adi😭😭

vicky😭😭

mirror😭😭😭


hush... thread me flood aa gai 🤣

parr kya karu upd hi aisi hai..😛
bt i love this twist😆😆

seems like geet k papa died😲😲🤢

lets wait for nxt...😃

abb ye hui na dhamake wali baat 😛😆😆

SURPRIZE 👏👏👏

ya...

SHOCKK 😭

Edited by p_OO_ja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

😆 mee too res

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