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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

part 4 - so they met again...loved maan's sarcastic taunt to geet which she understood very late...jhalli geet...

her reason for hating rahul & loving geet is so funny...really she is a kid...

so maan got attracted to her...

but she went away towords her table

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

part 5 - lovely end dear...she is really kid at heart and want to live fullest with small small thing and finds happyness in them..

she discovered that she started liking kids..

she was successful for telling karan that both were not appropriate for each other..and meher just saved her from this...

geet was very happy to see maan's note and just happy to join them..

loved it very much...

waiting for more of 'new beginning of friendship'

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mhappy

@mhappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

very nice , sweet and lovely story

enjoyed reading it so much😃

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satyasree89

@satyasree89

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Wow it was superb update.

Hoped that it will be more parts.

Nice ending

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

end !?????
Why so ?

Cute story dear

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Dia Kapoor

@Dia_Kapoor

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Amazing update!

I loved it.

I usually loathe writers who leave their stories on a cliff hanger or end it on an incomplete note.

But yours was as if just meant to be...

Awesome!!!!

Edited by Dia_Kapoor - 11 years ago

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

awesome dear
cute story..
loved it

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Its a beautiful story!! I loved this crazy kiddish Geet!! It's true that we should be with that someone who can be there with us and accept us with everything us...difficult to find such a one though!!! It feels too short..I could have read few more parts of Geet and Maan's story. please please give a long epilogue😃

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

lovely.. very simple and sweet.. Loved the text geet sent at the end.

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Nice part geet's expectations r simplt yet dey r d things which ill keep a relation alive through out bt sad dat ur endng dis beautiful story hope u ill continue date wit 2 hunks nd newly found friendship ill be waitng