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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
And Thank you for such a lovely, light-hearted story...enjoyed very much reading it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
I have a full ticket reservation here veil.
No half tickets in sight😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very sweet SS. Loved and enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Lovely story it was. A big thankyou for writing this one.
The naughty boy smarter than his name i think his name suited him perfectly ...Rahul falling for girls from now only.
This story must have brought smile on many lips..in fact it had many humorous incidents :
one f them being the washroom fiasco. You really made the her heroine meet in a men washroom . He...he..he.. Suppose they marry and their chidren ask of their first meeting and he will say i met ur mom at a very private place so that no one could disturb , where everyone is too busy to disturb others, where ladies are prohibited , a place where your mother would have never visited if it was not for the conspiring universe and destiny. Ha..ha..ha
now baccha log you guess on ur own.
Coming back to the story well in the whole washroom thing i loved rahul 's reaction. To be seen by a beautiful girl in such a state. No doubt he screamed.
Anjali was a sweet girl. I could understand her pain of sitting beside bunty. I had to bear the same pain in 6th standard. No he didnt pick nose . Its just that his shoes used to stink like a rotten rat.
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Romance is not always about sharing kisses , holding hands, expressing each other how much love they have for each other.
Romance has many forms..
It is so romantic when the eyes meet and when it converts into a stare you dont seem to realize...
When the heart jumps at every little thing the other does making you feel that you are special to him...
When he dosent say straightway that he likes you rather puts it in a twisted way.."It takes more than that for someone to hate you."
When your eyes keep searching for him , when you are talking with someone else but thinking about that special one.
Its so romantic to find an invitation to Captain america not a direct on but still a prposal fr date.
So for me it was a romantic story .
I wish it had not ended so soon but then it was the demand of the story. ...When paths cross.
Keep writing and bye till our paths cross again.
Edited by ardentfitzcy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Lovely story...
Loved their al interactions... n all their moments...
N also rahul n anjali...cuties...
N u hv written it sooo nicely. .
U r an aweome writter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
That was the cutest thing I have read❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
love the story
Simple and sweet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
i loveddd the story !!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼
love the humour sense ...and the 3 kids are sooo damn cute ... ( hehe ofcourse i included geet she comes more in the kid category than adult ) 😆

it would have been nice if u continued it more ...
did u write anymore os or ff
if so plsss can u post the link here ... i love ur way of writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
That was one damn cute cute story with funny n witty lines. I laughed or either had a smile playing on my lips. Geet in men's washroom scenes were hilarious and Geet with Anjali was just adorable. Loved Maan's way of approaching Geet.




-Sanjana!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Hey just read all 5 parts together & let me tell you I Loved this SS a lot ..
There were some unique & small small moments which we rarely see in other stories of maan ..
Starting with maan & geet meeting 1st time in mens washroom 🤣
rahul n anjali bro-sis well which is crime in geet's view :P
Loved maan & geet's interaction ..geet & anjali's interaction & geet & rahul's also ..
Geet's view abt date or abt ur partner were really sweet which she relates with kkhh's pyaar dosti hai concept ..
End part was really nice ..Geet on a date with two hunks & one best friend 😊

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