[Novel Length] Office Rendezvous Chapter 25/26/27 - P 73/74/80

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Doracake

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Waiting for Update

Pls update Sooon

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 3 If Twenty three year old is called Kid, then my horrible hairy younger brother Harry who's nineteen is what, embryo?

this had me in splits 😆 seems like this lanky man holds quite a position in the company to come in & offer Geet coffee , just what she needs.

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 4 : How is that he knows exactly to find Miss Handa 😕 loved the part

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Read all parts I love mysterious Maan .He just happens to know Geet's whereabouts in absolute precision , in a way half sweet , mysterious & irritating way he is helping out Geet .

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Veil

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: kaamchorni
Tehehehehehehehe 😆
Sorry that ^^ is just me giggling away at those two. How perfect and hilarious their conversations are! (Could be too perfect, he could be a psycho etc etc but right now I want to bask in how adorable they are, ok).

You've made me fall in love with fan fiction (and reading, actually) again. I don't say this lightly. I really mean it. For a while, I'd become disillusioned by stories (too much of a good thing...) but you've brought back that initial excitement I used to feel from reading FFs. The exact moment, if you're wondering, was when Maan looked down and smiled. My heart melted.

Thank you, Veil. (Can I call you V?)

That just made my battisi out for so long 😆

Thank you for the comment. Can I share a small secret? Just today evening while my mom came with a smartass comment, and while I looked at her impressed, she did the exact same thing. She looked down with a small smile, and no wonder I fell for that woman who is my mom all over again.

So i think i know about the heart melting part. Mine did too.

I am overwhelmed with the comment. I still revel under the kind and sweet words you said. Thanks a lot. That means a great lot to me.

PS: Of course you can call me V.

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Veil

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Posted: 11 years ago

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New short story:

When Paths cross...

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AshelySpinelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice part bt im confusd abt maan wt is he sm times shows concern towards geet sm times help her nd nw scarng her bt yup love dis maan 4 his crazynees nd geet is such a scary cat nd love ur wrtng waitng 4 nxt part

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Oh God...

One minute for my poor heart, please.

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Was this your way of answering the 'Maan could be a psycho' musings? Done and dusted, I would say! When he sat her on the railing, my heart packed its suitcase and left, saying 'screw you' for all the torture I was putting it through 😆

The last part, about Geet not wanting to face reality, gave me hope. She is perfectly aware there is a reality. Could this be a story where the characters are not wilfully ignorant of the connection they're starting to share? I hope so.

Kavitha... ohhh she makes me mad. She reminds me of a girl I knew who plagiarised 3 Idiots' "college is not a pressure cooker" speech. Arghh to this day! It sucks for Geet but it's a good thing to be aware of early on.

It was worth the wait. Thanks, V :)

Edited by kaamchorni - 11 years ago