[Novel Length] Office Rendezvous Chapter 25/26/27 - P 73/74/80

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

dil dhak dhak karne laga ...lol

Nice update dear

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

nice update

is geet falling on maan

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

fab update! Geet falling4 Maan! bt wt abt him? Well written! update soon

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

nice update... thanx for d pm...

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AshelySpinelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Nice part so maan made all dis monkey tricks 2 distract geet dat bubble blowng part was superb onevshld try until he/she learns 2 blow d bubbles nd finally geet is feelng smthing 4 maan waitng 4 maan's pov update soon

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ramarora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

lovely update
geet thinking maan to be a great guy!!!
love story has started!!!!
awsome! update soon!😊

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Is Geet falling from the London Bridge into Maan's arms?

Geet darling is feeling low, feeling low, feeling low

My stubble guy

Cheer her up with happy bubbles, happy bubbles, happy bubbles

My stubble guy

Happy bubbles will soon pop out, soon pop out, soon pop out

My stubble guy

Take her in your hands, in your hands, in your hands

My stubble guy

Will you stay forever, forever, forever,forever?

Will you fall asleep, fall asleep, fall asleep?

My stubble guy

If you plan to go away, go away, go away

Make her sleep, make her sleep, make her sleep

And visit her in her dreams, in her dreams, in her dreams

My stubble guy!!

P.S. Let me hide beneath the veil, beneath the veil, beneath the veil

My Crayon stics

P.S. No don't hit me, Don't hit me, don't hit me😆😆

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

(Small part of me still wonders if he is not all that he seems. Something's either very wrong or very right with me.)

Pssst! I love the little touches in your story... the car shadows, the fake Nike emblem, the red cap... they're not going unnoticed :)

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

part 9 - geet was hurt with kavita's back stabbing...loved maan's way of stress-buster...loved how you used the bollywood dialogues

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

part 10 - lovely part...some realisation drwa to her...that whatever he did for her just to divert her mind from kavita and how he soothed her ...she reminded a soft kiss...she started falling for him...loved this maan...she should thank him for this eventful evening...