'pari' maaneet ss THREAD 1 updated 16 jan 15

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ok another fast paced one..

really couldn't think of another name..

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PARI
PART 1

Rahul - Recess lights all over the bedroom
the guy possessively holding his wife to be in his arms spoke. Remote controlled she added
Maan watched the couple in front of him in disgust & wondered did he look like them when he was sitting & planning his own bedroom.
Thats romantic sasha added
Maan - that will be expensive. U want to spend that kind of money.
He looked at Rahul trying to indicate, he was already shooting way over his budget
sasha - he meant classy
sasha covered up for him.
She passed on a glare to Maan, with a hidden message. The message was clear stop it. Well when ur childhood friends, after some time u could read each others glares too ..he sighed. Now they were even working together.
Maan - no, I meant expensive & u r shooting way beyond ur budget.
He stated as a matter of fact.
Maan - if I had to say classy then I would say classy he said arrogantly.
This time sasha knew there was no point talking to Maan anymore. He had gone over board. Unfortunately he seemed to care a dam about it.
Rahul - is there a problem?
He was definitely annoyed.
Maan didn't care - no, not at all. It is just recess lights. They are so dam expensive.
Dammit he hated them. The whole concept of lovely dovey.
Sasha cut in immediately - so we could have recess lights with remote control system.
I am sure it as awesome idea
rahul chuckled with that dreamy look again - actually she likes them
Maan interrupted - ur the one paying for it. Better choose wisely, its ur hard earned money don't waste it on something u don't like. Waisen bhi recess lights main kya rakha hain, don't u think ur bedroom will look like some shady bar.

Sasha got up from her chair & politely asked Maan step out.
He rolled his eyes watever & came out
the moment they were out of the conference from - Maan what is this yaar
hum yeh wala contract bhi loose kardenge
let me talk to them. Why don't u get a cup of coffee for ueself
Maan - great
he anyway needed one. He poured himself a freshly brewed coffee from the cafeteria.

His thoughts went back to wat sasha was saying. He had to be careful or else the company will ruin its reputation.
Sasha screamed - Maan
Maan jerked back. He put the over flowing mug aside & sighed

sasha - wats wrong with u Maan
Maan - ok.. I am sorry I messed up the meeting
sasha - no.. u just killed the deal
Maan made that cute pout - no I did not
sasha gave up putting up with his all time low temperament - nahi Maan its not just this.. we have been losing all the business. U know its a tough market in America. We worked so hard to build this architectural firm.
Common Maan we build this from scratch. U so much believed in this whole concept of building homes not buildings what happened to u.
Maan looked away
sasha - I have bills to pay Maan. I depend on this job.
Maan rubbed is temple - I could transfer funds from the Indian branch
sasha - we did that last month
Maan - so wat do u want me do
sasha - take a break & come back only when u feel up to it.
Maan - so ur firing me from my own business
he asked raising his brows
sasha - no I am asking u to take a break. A much needed one after she left u
Maan protested - its not because of that
sasha - Maan its been more than a month since all that. U need to
Maan roared in irritation - she didn't leave me ok. I called off the whole dam thing
sasha knew mention of Naintara would bring the worse out in him. She had to, but she had to push him to put all of it behind him.
Sasha - I know what happened.

Maan didn't know what was hurting him more, the fact Nt name still haunted him or the way it was still effecting him.
He hated the way he woke up every morning with the night mare. The sight of seeing his wife to be naked under his own brother dev just few months before their wedding. & the argument over her being pregnant & how to abort it without his notice.
Maan would have never believed the story had he not seen them like that. He had called off the wedding & flew away from every thing.

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He sat up panting when his older sister Sameera softly caressed his forehead, slowly taking his head in her lap. Shhh... its ok.. its ok.. its just a dream
shhh..
a silent tear dropped down his eyes.
He hid himself in her embrace. & she had the sweet knack not to make him embarrassed abt his vulnerability.
They always shared different relation since childhood. Dev was always her best friend types & Maan was the trouble maker. The snob. & she hated him for that. She was 2 years older & Maan refuse to accept she was the older one. Not that she has found any new affection for him now. But the only place he could go after the whole breaking thing was her apartment here in Newyork.
past a month ago

Sameera hugged him - I had tried to warn u!
Maan -
how long have u known
sam - does that matter
this definitely doesn't make u my favorite brother suddenly. I still hate ur arrogance she tried make him feel lighter. But yah wat dev did is totally wrong. Since childhood he had been jealous of u.
Maan - but I thought he was every ones favorite
sam sighed - u still did well in everything, may it be studies or business or .. she left it not wanting to say further.
Maan - yah so he decides to sleep with my fiance & make her pregnant
past emds

its been couple of months since then. Maan is still not able to get over the whole thing.
Sam - hello u can't be living in my apartment for every
Maan gave his lopsided smile
sam - seriously Maan, just get out.
Don't keep sulking like this. Go out, party with ur friends, get laid .. swear won't tell mom
sam - waisen mom wanted to talk to u
Maan - mujhe nahi baat karni
sam - its been a more than a month since u spoke to them
Maan hid himself under the duet - mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni.
Sam sighed & pulled the duet away - stop it Maan
just get out. U can't shut urself like this
Maan - I am not
he mumbled dragging himself to the shower
hating this feel. Hating to be awake. Hating to have loved this person who didn't think once before cheating on him. Worse his own brother.
thanks a lot for ur love & comments
hope u all like this one too
love
muskan
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awsemm start nt bi... with dev bas... cheating on maan poor maan heartbroken
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sounds awesome...looking forward to know how the story shapes up😃
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Welcome back Dear ...
what a unique concept ...
Maan's ex Dev's present lol
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Where have you been ?😉
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Kya baat h
New story again!😃
Interesting start... hope geet would help maan..😕
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wow new story!
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Nice start...waiting for next part..continue soon
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PART 2

All his friends were already bored hearing him whine. After all that push from sam he had decided to come out with Sahsa, Raghav & Vicky. His childhood friends who had moved few years back to Newyork. They were the reason why he could open the dream architectural firm in US. He had managed the operations from India while Sahsa took care of it here. He had visited them once in a while & had great time.

But last one month all he could do was sulk.


Vicky - Maan look around yaar.
Raghav - yaar u could easily find another person
Maan rolled his eyes
sahsa - listen I don't say it is easy to move on, but u can't ruin every thing over it right.
Vicky - ur wat 28
Maan finished another drink
raghav - u can easily find another girl
Maan - 3 yrs .. u know 3 yrs. It takes a lot to build a relation like that for that long.
Vicky mocked - especially with no sex
Maan glared - wats wrong in waiting for sex after marriage
sahsa - well she didn't think that way
raghav - wats the point all this Maan
Maan - I wanted it to be special
vicky rolled his eyes - hogaya na special
sasha warned vicky
sahsa - she is not worth it yaar. Teri liyein to koi pari honi chaiyen
Maan crushed his face in his palm
raghav - wo dehk.. ek dam sexy hain

Maan drank another drink & whined more - I did the whole dam arrangement. Dream home, dream wedding, dream honey moon. Spend every last penny of my hard earned money on that girl.
Vicky - all she needed was that 6inch thing
he spoke winking at the obvious
Maan groaned in frustration.


He still couldn't understand this whole thing. He knew people had relations before wedding. His friends too have had few flings but nothing had been serious. Some lasted longer than a year or some like Vicky going steady for 5 years now.

Maan had always believed in sex after marriage. He wanted it to be the best gift he could give to his wife. He believed in all that until he saw wat he saw.

Sasha tried to make him feel better. All in wane. He couldn't believe in another person that easily. He couldn't think girls existed with that concept of after marriage sex types.. one man types.. He couldn't believe in himself.

Sahsa herself had an affair last year. She going pretty steady but then after they broke up, she seems to have moved on. He knew, he could never find a person in life his pari.. only his.. that concept died that night for him.

& the way he looked now dam.. no chance.
He doesn't even know how it all happened with Nt. After his frds group had moved to newyork. He had found companion in Nt. They were frds for couple of years & then things became better. He had felt she is the one. Then they went around & he had proposed to her for marriage. Every one was happy with her. She intelligent, beautiful graceful everything he could think in a bride .. khurana family was more than happy to have her as daughter -in-law. They also let her join Khurana Constructions.
Daadi even presented her the khaandani haar


She did want to get close he remembered. They would get passionate.. hugs & kisses. He would hold himself. Dam he broke a glass hurting himself ..

Raghav took him to the wash room & helped him clean up
raghav - did she try to call u after that
Maan - I threw the engagement ring on her face & kicked her out of the house.
Raghav - it could have been just an one time thing u know
Maan - yah right
thats why they were discussing it over another one night
he punched the wall in anger


He had come home really late totally wasted. Sam removed his shoes & tucked the spread around him. She didn't know how to help him. He looked worse every passing day.

thanks for the likes & comments

love

muskan

NEXT PART 3
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago

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