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Posted: 11 years ago
that was awesome piece

so sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh I loving the very bit of it.
Especially Geet character. It something different, something special.
How she guides Maan in everything. N Maan bas pagal ki tarah dekhta rehta hai. So cute. like a small boy.

A very Romantic proposal ever by a girl. N Dadi ne ring bhi de di. Nt n Dev jealous. lol.

Geet Dev n Nt ki band Baja rahi hai.

One request pls. Don't make this a fast forward SS. I want you to take it slow n show more of Maaneet relation. Pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my my what a proposal!!
Nt got what she deserved for ditching maan!
Geet is too amazing love her characterization and she's bold while maan is captivated by her!!
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Muskan This is the sweetest story you have written!
Totally loving every update and every scene is just so colorful n full of love...

Yeh fairytail with roles reversed :P I wish i were Maan now😆
Koi ithni fairy ho saktha hain kya?! Omg! I couldn't think of another title for this story :) hayee...

Totally, wholly loving Pari <3333
Good you compensated for the sadu Maan in Guroor! This Maan is the cutest and sweetest of ll your Maan's ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update their passion NT "J"
ooops I loved the way geet take promise from Maan n reply to dev
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
diii
post dinner...it will be stalking time🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 1 to 3 feeling sad for maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 13
he spun her & danced as the music changed to a softer number
Maan suddenly became little stiff, she looked at him
Maan shied - did I make a mistake letting her go
she did ask for a second chance
geet - she didn't deserve one jaan
Maan - why does it hurt so much
she rested her head on his chest - it will take some time to heal
Maan hugged her closer. He could surely hear sadness in her voice when she said some time.
They ditched the hall reception & went to the bar. They had drinks & danced crazily.
******

His head felt heavy trying to open his lashes. A smile crept lips oh my!! geet really has a beautiful body, he could feel himself hard just getting the images of her full br***t.. the pink buds. He smiled at his own thoughts. Thank god for once in months he was not waking up dreaming about Nt & dev.
Wait how does he know, how geet looked dammit.. no... he squeezed his eyes shut recollecting last night incident waggly. They kissed crazily walking into the room. As they were getting passionate, geet shied saying something like they should stop.. he was no where to stop. Like he was drugged.

He closed his eyes tightly .. did she cry.. did I force her
dam no.. he turned to other side & was shocked to see her watch him with so much admiration.
Geet - Good morning jaan she pecked his lips
Maan - no dammit
geet - I know it hurts, u had little too much yesterday jaan
she spoke holding the spread close to herself
Maan - stop it geet.. just stop it
we are alone. U don't have to act any more
.
Her expression turned painfully
Maan - wat did I do.. he held his head in frustration
wat did I do
dammit
she just held the spread close to her & kept quite letting him speak
Maan - this was not supposed to happen. I never meant all this when I said to act as my GF
she was still quiet
Maan - I know I forced myself. I remember waggly u stopping me & I was being demanding. I know u gave in because u didn't want to hurt me.
shit
he groaned
geet - its ok Maan she tried to calm him
Maan - its not ok geet
3yrs of relation with Nt we never got close, because I wanted it all be after marriage
& look wat I did. Pounced at u the very night.
Wat was the point of all that. I could have just given in to her then & nothing would have ever gone wrong. only thing that was lacking in our relation was sex. I lost myself to u in wat fit of lust.
she softly caressed his cheeks - I feel proud of it
she was sincere to every word she spoke, he could see that
suddenly he was paranoid - how was I?
She blushed inspite of the pain in her heart
Maan - Ididn't have a protection
r u on pills?
Oh god tum chavo tho hum abhi shaadi kar sakten hain

he said wrapping himself in the towel
geet - relax Maan.
Maan - wat if u get pregnant
geet - there is something called after pills
Maan - ok.. he sighed
I am sorry..
he was so disturbed he had no clue wat he was saying to her
Maan - but I am serious if u want we could get married, yah but why would u want to marry me
he just crushed his face in his palm
geet - I don't want to marry because we had sex
she said coldly looking away

Perfect now she doesn't even want look at me.. Maan thought. He hated to see her like this. He so wanted everything to be the way it was before sex. Maan u need to get ur head straight. He cursed himself & went into the wash room.

The shower only reminded of the passion they shared last night. He had love bites all over. Dam did he say something wrong. Why did she look so cold suddenly. He shouldn't have lost himself. He cursed himself again & again. He came out & changed into the spare cloths that were in the cupboard.
Geet didn't look at him when he came out to the room. She had just gathered her cloths & went in.
Maan couldn't bare to see this drift between them. He simply kept the cheque for remaining 50lks on the dresser & left.

Latter in the evening they took blessings from everyone & headed to the airport.
The flight journey was painfully silent. That smile that reached her eyes was gone. The naughtiness, flirting was all gone. But again it was all part of the deal. So now everything is over then she doesn't have pretend any more. He also didn't know wat to expect anymore.
Before bidding a good bye she tiptoed & kissed his cheek - don't forget ur 2 promises she said giving him an envelope.
He nodded since he couldn't find words anymore. he will not forget any of them.. even the third one he promised silently.
the thought he won't be able to see her again. He won't be able to hold her again just killed him.
THANKS SHRUTHI FOT THE BANNER
thanks for the comments & likes
trying to give faster updates.. pls shower me with ur comments
love
muskan
NEXT PART 14
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome di
oh they had sex
and geet is cold...feeling bad for maan
hope they meet soon
will be waiitng for it
and also update
pls give next one soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazingg and i love it a lottt

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