'pari' maaneet ss THREAD 1 updated 16 jan 15 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
loved this shy shy maan n bold geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
who is this Geet ??
Lol
Even i doubt her ...not in a wrong way though
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg muski's ss how did I miss it
I am enjoying it
Geet is very smart
Maan seems to be the innocent one
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update

Sam concerned about Maan. Worrying a lot abt him. How will Geet take it n do wat.
Maan is being Cool. He is falling flat for her.

Everyone impressed by her looks, smartness plus beauty. Liked Maaneet talk. She is doing everything which apparently Maan should be doing.
Getting to know more of each other. Geet can't believe Maan wat he is saying abt himself. That he doesn't go for Girl.
I really like his character.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome as usual
loved it
waiting for more dear
muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 6

All his confidence started to shatter as the flight landed in Delhi. The drive to Khurana Mansion was silent. Every road, every street every thing reminded him of only the betrayal. Reminded him how big fool he was. They were cheating right under his nose & he had no clue abt it. Raghav & sasha went to stay with their respective families. He didn't realize when the car stopped infront of the mansion.

Geet slowly inched closer to him - show time sweet heart
a smiled creped on his lips hearing her words
he took a deep breath & stepped out confidently.
He held the door & extended his hand to lead her. Her soft long fingers perfectly slipped into his like it fitted in. She purposely toppled over into his arms. He held her at once from falling. She winked at him. He couldn't stop himself from smiling as they had that sweet starring session. He didn't have to look up.. but did notice Dev peeping out the window. He pulled her up closer. She whispered in his ears. Is that dev in that window.
Maan nodded setting her duppatta
Maan - is he looking at us?
geet nodded - he is starring shamelessly
Maan felt happy with his plan already working.

Maan cleared his throat seeing his mom approach them. Maan took priya's blessing & before he could say anything, geet took priya's blessing too.
Maan - yeh geet hain maa
he couldn't openly lie infront anyone. Forget his own mom. He fumbled with his words
sam came to their rescue - main ne aapko bataya tha na phone main
priya was delighted & relieved to see geet. The girl who has come like savior in maans life. She blessed geet whole heartedly. Priya took a kajal from her eyes & placed a tika behind geets ears.
Priya - kisi ki nazar na lagen tumhe
& then she hugged both Maan & geet together.


In 3 yrs of relation with Nt, his mom had never blessed them like this. They did like her. But geet seem to relate better with them suddenly. priya seemed treating geet like she would do with sam.

Priya called nakul to take geets luggage to maans room.
Geet - aunty agar aapko problem nahi hain tho main guest room main reh loon


Maan glared at her. He wondered wat is the problem with her. Wat will his parents think. They will surely doubt every thing now because when he traveled with NT, they shared the room. His parents knew all abt it & never minded all that. Infact they will now doubt the whole think now he feared.


Sam cleared her throat asking him to behave. Priya did see her son all in love with this girl already.


Nakul settled geets luggage in the out house. Priya took her to the out house & suggested her to freshen up before she met rest of the family members.

The moment priya left, Maan fumed in. he held her arms & jerked her to himself
Maan - sab kuch tho teehk ja raha tha
why did u refuse to stay in my room
geet - wo.. she rolled her eyes
Maan - kyun tumhe lagta hain I am going to pounce at u once we are in the room.
Geet rubbed her arms softly getting off his grip & then her fingersslipped around his waist, hugging him - nahi boy friend
I am just being nice
mana ki main US main pelhi badi hoon. But I don't think it is still in our culture to live in the same room before the wedding.
Rahi baat .. fearing u
she chuckled mujhe iss baat ki fikar hoti .. I would have not come to India alone with u for 10days.

he could just lose himself in her arms. She so softly held him by the waist. She was so confident standing so close to him, patiently clearing her point.
His tone mellowed - actually I used to share the room with Nt
geet - I guess even ur brother did
Maan sighed sitting in the bed
geet settled her stuffs
Maan - nahi mera matlab tha, my family is cool with all this. They understand.
Geet - I am sure they will understand me too.. just wait & watch


Maan sighed & went into the mansion. He wanted to check with sam if his act was working. He stopped out his her door step hearing priya praise geet.
Priya - kitni pyari hain
Maan smirked
priya - mujhe tho bahut pasand hain
aachen parivar ki lagthi hain. I mean dehko she didn't stay with Maan in his room.
Warna aaj-kal ke bache tho

Maan was on cloud nine. Dam this geet was super cool.

She actually nailed it.

thanks a lot for the comments & likes

lots of love
muskan
NEXT PART 7
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m loving this Geet. amazing story..
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Posted: 11 years ago
She knows him very well and knows how to handle him.
So lovely !!!

He will soon realize his feelings, and I'm sure the feelings will be different from those he felt for NT, and that would help him move on and fall in love.

Awesome chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipppieee *me jumping in exietment* new story.. Nee storyy
loved the concept, owww poor maan ditched so badly by that nt *Grrr hate that cheapo.
and woww first time seeing that maan feel himself not worthy enough for geet.. Else everytime its vise versa.
loved the attitude and personality of geet.
waiting for love to happen
plzzz update next soon and also DA bhi toh dedo yawl :'(
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Posted: 11 years ago
super cool update
love geet so strong.
poor maan always scared

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