'pari' maaneet ss THREAD 1 updated 16 jan 15 - Page 4

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Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1 - so maan was engaged to nt who betreayed her by sleeping with his bro, got pregnant & then abort the baby...
he could not forget that incident and due to this he having nightmares, loosing his clients, loosing interest & trust in life...
diff bond bet maan & sam
sasha is right to send him on leave
hope he soon find solace in his life
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome di
so finally mk met geet
hope soon they meet again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2 - due to nt's betrayal he still sulking in his past...how miserable he has become...he need some change...kya friends hai yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3 - so finally dev getting married to nt and this made maan's more worse...
finally geet's entry...he was impressed with her look...
will he manage to take her to dev-nt's marriage...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love your fast pace SS
They are just awesome
They start and end soon n we dont have to wait much long also for updates heheheh
Nice SS
Loving the story
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loving back to back updates

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Muski ...Apt title Ji... I think you are the Pari of IF... Always coming back with a new flavour of love ... Love u for that...
Haaye 'Aap theek Ho na' ... That's all it sometimes needs to make one open his eyes and acknowledge the beauty uttering those words ... Not just her beautiful form in a Saree,not just her concerned filled hazels but her warm heart and smile ... Thats a full fledged Pari you have just described Ji ...

Bohot din baad I read Dev and Naintara in negative role ..and I'm happy hehee... Puraani GHSP waale gaaliyaan yaad agayi mujhe 😆 and I am happy to bless this particular dog of a Dev and his better half here with them gaalis...
Waiting for the next round of rapid chapters ... As always u have got me gripped...

PS... U really love playing around with Sasha and Sameera's character na ... Well I like them already 😳 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4

It was just that week he had felt so much better. To top it up they decided to take him out to get a girl friend. Like usual he was early & had ordered couple of drinks. Sasha just called & said she is running late. He gulped his drink & went to play some darts & then went around the pool table.
The whole crowd was ogling at a sexy girl in red high heels leaning over to hit a shot. She stretched further to reach the right position, while the guys were just sweating watching her. Maan just came around & held her arms in his. She looked at him & the restlessness in him. She smiled taking the shot.

She hugged him in excitement when they bagged the points. All the boys shied in disappointment.
Maan scanned her top to bottom. She was dam hot!! her top hung perfectly to her figure. The only girl he had watched was NT. But she stood no chance infront of this girl. She was so perfect .. he mumbled to himself.
Geet - hi
Maan - have we met before?
She just smiled
Maan turned to leave to the bar. He ordered a drink for himself
geet came around & gave him 500$ - ur share
Maan - u can have it
geet - this one is on me then
she ordered herself a drink - so?
Maan spoke most disinterested - so wat
geet spoke as a matter of fact - wats ur story?
Maan didn't have anything do & this girl was clearly hitting on him. So why not. He did refuse but then just to sulk further he told her abt his story. how he was to get married to love of his life & how it all ended
Geet - thank god
Maan looked at her in disbelieve
geet - nahi mera matlab socho u come to know all about it after marriage! It would have got lot more messier
Maan nodded sipping his drink. One way to look at it, he thought
geet - u definitely deserve lot better
Maan chuckled - thats wat my frds say. But u know its not that easy. How can I just love some one. He pointed his heart it hurts here. I feel some kind of vacuum. It sucks.
Geet looked at him - u still love her
Maan - na .. I don't. But I lost all faith in all this. All I feel this anger in me. She cheated on me, she broke my trust & its me who is sulking. I don't want to. I want to see them hurt the way I am
Geet - then go get ur vengeance
Maan - wish it was that easy
geet slowly caressed his hand that rested on the table - don't worry it will be all fine
he smiled softly - so here I am looking for that girl who can be my girl frd, u know fancy types
then he looked at her. She was way out of his league. But wat worse could happen
Maan - could u act as my gf for 10days
geet was bit taken a back
Maan - I could pay u?
Geet - that will cost u a fortune
Maan - 1cr
geet stared at him
Maan just looked desperate sipping a drink after drink. She smiled .. deal extending her hand
he immediately gave her a cheque for 50lks. Consider this as advance.
They exchanged numbers.
Maan - we will have to leave to India next weekend
My agent will book the tickets

meanwhile u cook up a nice story abt ur education, job & family here
geet nodded.
Maan - also get urself some fancy jewels & dresses. I will pay for all that.
Geet - umm u really are desperate, aren't u?
Maan - oh yes I can't wait to see their faces when they us together.
Ek min wats ur name
geet - Geet
Maan - I am Maan
geet smiled with that twinkle in her eyes - maan


Maan was super excited to tell sam about his plan. He can't believe he was going to fake a relation. But who cares. All he wanted was to stand up in front of them.

Sam & his frds were really happy to see this change in Maan. probably that's wat he needed. They were all for this plan of his. He was suddenly not looking hopeless. Next whole week he spend preparing for the wedding. He coordinated with geet on the tickets & travel dates.

thanks a lot for the comments & likes
love
muskan
NEXT PART 5
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Wow another story congrats di 😛 supperb parts maans on brother and wouldbe wife break his heart aww he is sulkking sam and his friends trying to cheering him he met with his pari😉 waiting for again their meeting awesome parts di 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Supperb maan offered geet fake girlfriend offer and she accepts the deal now both r going to india waiting for next part di 😊

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