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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 12

SORRY GOOF UP.. last update.. it was maans parents(Mr & Mrs Khurana)
geets parents r not in the picture yet
Latter on daadi called him aside & gave him the ring that belonged to khuranas badi bahu.
Daadi - phena do ussen
Maan reluctantly took the ring he was not sure if it was ok. He was not confident to go so far with the act. He didn't have the option & after seeing that burn in Nts eyes he couldn't stop himself.

Yes Nt was jealous. She did love Maan. He was sincere. Little to perfect to find. She can't believe she made the mistake of sleeping with dev. He actually charmed her into it. After the pregnancy she didn't know wat else to do. She had even tried to seek his forgiveness but he refused to even talk to her. That ring her heart burned.. she had heard all about it from priya & Maan in past but never got to see it. Daadi never gave it. Though she was supposed to be the badi bahu back then.. still daadi never took out. Now the ease with which daadi nudged Maan to give to geet, her eyes welled.
Dev held her arm bitterly - wat r u doing?
R u regretting the marriage already
he was super pissed right now. First Maan looked so happy with this girl supposedly his girl friend .. dam this girl is hot he thought & then everyone in the family suddenly seem to not function with out her. Even his wife is looking at Maan standing in the alter with him. How bad can it get?
**********

Well it was time for the kill..
geet knelled down unexpectedly & took his hand in hers. He looked at her in utter shock. She sweetly winked. A grin spread instantly on his face. He couldn't believe wat she was doing. Every one was looking at them.
They were at the far end of the hall little secluded. But soon people just turned curious to look at the act.
Geet had to make it special & as sincere as it could be. She took a deep breath
Mr Maans Singh Khurana ur the most handsome man I have ever met. Ur strong inside out she smiled
he shook his head in disbelieve but her voice was genuine he didn't want to dampen her spirits.
This girl had some zeal he thought.
Geet she said softly making sure no one heard her - I am not saying because u paid to me say this
he chuckled
geet - when I see ur deep eyes, she blushed I just feel my soul losing into it, ur that pure & consuming
by now Maan slowly pulled her up into his embrace. He was feeling this knelling down over the top.
She leaned on his chest - can u promise me something
she slowly pulled away just to meet his eyes expectantly. He couldn't deny
he looked at her lovingly & nodded
promise me to emerge strong
& u will never stop chasing ur dreams
& once u have done.. u will find me. Without any pretending, not for any deal just start all over again
.
He nodded with a smile
& the whole crowd cheered for them.
He leaned closer as her hands went around her neck & then came around his
this a little something to remind u of the promise.
U promise?
she asked in a whisper
Maan placed a kiss nodding.. I promise to emerge stronger, promise to chase my dreams & once I have put everything behind I promise to come look for u

the crowd cheered for them.
They didn't know wat she said.. but it all seemed like a proposal to them.

Maan smiled & slipped the ring in her finger. She jumped & kissed him shamelessly infont of every one instantly hid herself in his arms.

Soon the 7 pheras started & every one was looking at the other direction.. still gossiping over the romantic proposal.
After the ceremony was completed every one wished the couples.
Geet held his arm - time to keep up ur promise
Maan slipped his hand around geets waist & walked upto the alter to wish the newly weds.

Maan - congrats
dev - congrats to u too
nt smiled weekly
dev was super irritated - so she is Geet Handa ur girl friend
geet took over sliding her hand around Maans waist & leaning her head on his arms - his fiancee now
nt - so he finally said yes
geet giggled - I would wait for life time for this
nt - oh he is good with waiting things
Maan knew wat she meant. His idea to wait for sex is wat she hinting. He had told geet everything not the sex bit. Well she didn't have to know that.
Geet - I thing it was worth the wait, she spoke so dreamily ogling at Maan.
Dev had enough of all this he wanted to put him down
dev - so I heard u transferred funds again this month to the US branch
geet smartly cut in & spoke to maan - darling don't u realize couple of 1000$ means a lot when u convert in Indian rupees.
Maan had to bite his cheek to stop himself laughing, after seeing devs pissed off face.
Dev - wat now u will be taking money from her
geet laughed - shaadi ke baad waisen bhi he has to run the business
Maan was not liking the way things were turning out. He just smiled
geet adeed - actually double congrats
do u know its boy or a girl yet

dev Nt & Maan all were shocked.
the reality .. oh that's why they hurried the whole wedding thing. he can't believe it.

Maan just pulled geet from there to the dance floor.& pushed her & turned her harshly in his embrace
geet - do u always have to be so harsh in embracing me
she said ever so sweetly pouting against his chest
he instantly softened his grip. Then tried to recollect .. he has never been like this
Maan - always??
he raised his brows
geet smiled - this is not the first time ur doing this
Maan looked at her confused.
Geet -Uss din mall main
he recollected the whole fiasco. oh dam her scent that instantly filled his senses & before he knew was crushed onto his chest. that feel ...dam.. wow it was her - no wonder u looked familiar
she let out a chuckle
he was so embarrassed - I had just got a call from ma. She wanted to me to come for the wedding.
Geet - well that turned out well
Maan chuckled pulling her into the dance steps
geet - u know she was looking at u all the while
Maan - really!!
geet - I am sure she was regretting her decision to let go of u
he spun her & danced as the music changed to a softer number
THANKS SHRUTHI FOT THE BANNER
thanks for the comments & likes
trying to give faster updates.. pls shower me with ur comments
love
muskan
NEXT PART 13
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
šŸ‘šŸ‘ Again wonder ful upad and me first so... ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø
Edited by krsh07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


ITTšŸ˜‰
will try to give three updates today instead of 2...hopefully😃



wowww me waiting eagerly

how many part you think this ss will be if you don't mindšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

nothing really urgent to ask just want to estimatešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
but pls pls dooo make maaneet romance toošŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123



ohhh me sooo waiting for itt tooošŸ˜‰

you said you are going to ur aunty house for week
willl you be able to update from therešŸ˜‰


first thing... aunty wont make me work at home like mom does
*devil face..ha!!*😈 so all time on lappy without disturbance..
am her favourite na...😳
but if cousins also come with me..then i have to think😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
r
loved it diii
my my..this is geet..i just cant stop loving her
she indeed is a pari
loved the way she proposed..well kinda proposed..
and maan gave that ring
nt baby..its ur fault for being so despo abt sex before marriagešŸ˜†

loving this maaneet...but me yet again still waiting for geet;s pov.
her family and bg..maan doesn't know everything yet..so thts going to be another surprise i guess!!!
i want another update diii😃
this is just sooo addictive...
Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
another lovely update
haila what a proposal. just tooo good muski
I could never imagined geet kneeling down and proposing but u did make it truešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

then her asking him to find her after he is all set šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰ was wowww and that too not because of deal but due to lovešŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

haila jealousy ka dhuaan udh raha hain aag lag rahi hain dhaun uth raha hain
dono dev nt r jealous and nt already regretting her decision
ufff geet is tooo good to get eqaul with devtara and showed them their place

now maan knew where he met her first but still there is something more with geet it seems like itšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† may be I am over saying itšŸ˜†šŸ˜† but this is what i am feelingšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

waiting for next update
now even more eagerlyšŸ˜‰
Edited by jasraj123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123



hiii I am good and how are u. sorry I missed this before and left after reading the update
yehhh all are back in muski's update marathonšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

how r things with you



All is well ..
Started my new job as Physician's assistant ...got very busy
but never left this forum in spite of all my busy schedule ...
Missed Muski and are old days of Stalking ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome di
so NT was jealous
and they proposal also
wowww
so now they are real for couple or still acting
just say na
and yes waiitng for one moe
pls give soon
cant wait for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 11
Feel so sorry for maan everything reminds him of his efforts which he put for his wedding with that characterless nt but i m happy that geet was there with him love their moments
loved how he wish for evrything to b real
Soon maan will realize that everything is more than real
Edited by zeeenu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg..its super fast with dadi
she gave the khandani ring n made maan eet engaged
oh girl nt is burning in j n dev is pissed off with his wife looking at her ex bf..
geet way too romantic asking maan to promise he will be strong always
she has made him already stronger to face dev n nt..n all medias..
geet answered superb to dev making him piss off...
maan n geet dancing..
his hold n her saying about mall he remebered it is geet

awesome part..
again a very cute part with cute maneet fully

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