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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123



keep peeping😆😆

when r u updating next😉😉😉

me waiting for you too 😆😆


before i forget again...
i love all ur comnts... just loveee them
and eagerly wait for them too 😳
thank u

am working on sumthing new ryt now😉... tomm will updt the ss😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 10

It was the wedding day.
Geet was helping Priya in the kitchen in the morning. She had worn a simple salwar kameez. Maan came in lazily & stood at the door frame & watched her. His mood was off with his usual morning dream of seeing dev & nt making out. He just wanted to get out when he heard her voice. His steps carried itself to kitchen. He stood admiring how she had made a simple plat let down on one side. The long slender neck was right their for him to feast. A strand of hair was bothering her again & again.. while she causally pushed it back still lost in track. Priya was busy telling her how to make some thing.
His leg seem to have mind of his own. They carried him yet again to her this time invariably close. His hands slipped around her waist & his lips placed feather lite kisses on her shoulder. She stilled with his touch, but realized may be he is pretending to show to his mom. This was the best morning he thought he had ever. He nuzzled deeper taking in the scent. Geet titled giving access to him, while her hand wrapped over his. Soon his kisses were passionate & demanding. He turned her at once, his breath was on her lips, she quiver a bit with the sensation. It was like they were about to have their first kiss again. Just that, yesterday it was fast & he didn't know wat was happening. But today it was slow & he had his eyes had that intense passion that pierced through her. The knife slipped from her hand, a moment latter his lips were pressing on hers. His lashes closed slowly like he was savoring the moment. She just realized her eyes were wide open. Slowly her eyelids gave in to the passion.
After what seemed like an eternity they pull away, their lips were still together just a bit. She turned cherry red when his tongue slowly swipe her bottom lip.. & before he could take them in again.. they hear daadi clearing her throat & dev starring at them like he was watching some educative movie.
Geet quickly runs away & Maan realizes wat he was doing. Before he could relate to his emotions, much stronger & abhorring one stood right infront of him. He went pass them not wanting to confront any one at this moment. He was confused with his own feelings right now. He didn't have that feeling of punching Devs face right now. He wanted to speak to geet before she thinks he was taking advantage of her. The deal never meant all this.
Then a voice in his head stilled him.. wat is this.

He just barged into the room not realizing.. & then immediately stepped out. He closed his eyes. Where is ur manners Maan. He hit his head on the wall.. calmed himself & knocked the door.
Maan - wo kitchen main
geet bit her lower lip invariably tempting him to look at her lips. It took every inch of his control to stop glaring at her lips shamelessly.
Geet knotted her duppata - I know aap priya aunty ko dihkane ke liyen
she held her breath
Maan didn't know wat to say. It was not that.. he didn't even know ma was there.
Maan - I am sorry
geet immediately changed the topic - wat r u wearing for the wedding?
Do u have anything like black & red shervani

Maan just nodded
geet - plz wohi phen na
Maan shied & left from her room.
For a person like Maan, kissing was way to intimate. He felt little lost as he walked pass Sam
sam got worried instantly - kya baat hain Maan
he starred blankly at her
sam - is everything alright?
Maan just left to his room. Instead of thinking of the night.. he was bothered abt wat just happened between them.

Every one was mesmerized to see geet dressed in a deep red saree. She wore exclusive kundan set. Her hair was long cascading in front.
Priya called geet to help her with saree.
Priya - tum tho saree aachen se phen lethi ho
geet sat down & helped her with the pleats.
Maan came rushing in his moms room asking for some buttons.
Priya - u r not ready yet Maan?
Geet felt really shy to look at him only in his pants. She blushed stealing glances under her lashes. Maan had not realized yet geet was the one helping priya..
Maan - nahi mama mujhe red wallen buttons nahi mil rahen
priya - geet udhar drawer se inkalke ussen dedo
Maan was first embarrassed she saw him like this.. & then he was lost in the enchanting beauty infront of him. Geet flushed under his gaze.
Priya - baad main kale na apni aank micholi.. abhi ready ho javo
Maan bushed his hair back, heading to his room
geet took the button from the drawer & followed him.
He didn't have to look behind to know it was her who just walked in the door. He slipped into the shervani. She quietly came & helped him with the buttons. His hands just slipped around her waist. Her bare skin burned him alive.
He leaned closer - ur looking ravishing
she dipped her head into his chest - aap bhi
they would have probably lost in another round of kisses had sam not come in.
THANKS SHRUTI FOR THE BANNER
thanks for the likes & lovely comments
very motivating
lots of love
muskan
NEXT PART 11
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
r
ok let me scream first..
OMG OMG OMG can't believe i am first...after such such such a long time di...
the last tym i had been first was probably during khamoshi...
*dancing like anything*

loved it...loved the updt
they r so much in love..
perhaps already realized each others attraction towards each other
maan seriously cant keep his hands off her..😆
if without realizing things are going this way..
i wonder what will happen when they realize😲☺️
its been a long time whr am reading a light hearted romantic story from u🤗
i want another update dii
pleeejjj pleeejjj
pretty pleejjj

okie..*back to dancing* me first yuuhooo me first..dhinka chika
Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update 😳 😳
They have come so close without them realizing it...hope they undetstand it soon...
Specially maan..don't want him to mess everything up due to his anger...
Beautiful update...she is the first person that comes to his mind..when he needs solace or peace...
That was so sweet..how he tried to make her understand.. And she understood without him even saying it...though it was different 😉
Last part was too cute..button 😆
Waiting for more...
Please update soon..just can't wait for it...
Edited by -misty--love- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haayyeee that was a super awesome update di dreamy types fill with their love n passion😉
Sangeet was fun with geet being centre of attraction
Maaneet danced n that too on dilli wali girlfriend what a selection di lovely part continue soon
Love u
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


before i forget again...
i love all ur comnts... just loveee them
and eagerly wait for them too 😳
thank u

am working on sumthing new ryt now😉... tomm will updt the ss😉



thanks aashu
that is all I can doo naa comment😆
so do try my best to comment

omggg something new😊😊
will wait for it and I am sure it will be amazing as the others your work are

but me tooo eagerly waiting for it takes two 😉😉😉

that concept just amaze me sooo much for some reason😉😉

but I am loving the abhi naa aanaa too but worried about twist now😆😆😆

pls update that soon tooo
warna mera weight kamm ho jayegaa🤣🤣 worry mein😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous...

Hope ke buddhu Maan can understand his emotions,

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome di
Long part
Awww mk feelings too much fr Geet
And Geet to submitted
Waiting fr one more part
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing one di

dev saw them kissing...Maan can't control seeing Geet

loving Maaneet aankh micholi

waiting for next continue soon


Edited by -Orchid- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
O my God u updated again
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