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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
part 2
poo maan still in his past
waiting for his pari's entry now😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 3


Maan woke up late the next day. He looked out & covered himself again. Latter in the afternoon he lazily went to the living room.
Sam - how r u feeling?
He slumped himself on the couch next to her & snatched her tea.
Sam - I actually thought more of u Maan
this was the first time he had seen his sister so serious. He sipped his tea again & looked at her still rubbing his eyes.
Sam - I know how hard it can get
Maan never knew this side of her. Did she have a heart break too!
He raised his brows
she understood the question - thats not the point Maan
the point is wat u learn from it. I learned to be strong & grow above them
her eyes were determined as she pointed at the wedding invite on the table.
He felt some one just squeezed the life out of his heart. Dev weds Nt
he looked stunned at the invite. How worse could it get. They were getting married at the same dam hotel.


she slapped on his arm - get up & be ready to face them
why r u running away, hiding away when its them who should.
stand up to them.
I feel u should get a girl friend for urself before the wedding.
Just like some shyjadi. Some one smarter than Nt, some one more beautiful than her. Koi pari si


he was still stuck at the invite. He couldn't fathom his brother could do this to him. Forget Nt, wat abt dev. His own blood. He crushed the invite & then tore into pieces.

When he couldn't take it anymore he just went out. He called his friends to join his another whining session. He restlessly paced outsid ethe mall when his phone buzzed. He answered irritated
Maan - abhi nahi ma
priya - beta
Maan wanted to break down, but held him back when he heard her. He couldn't believe they actually wanted him to attended dev's wedding. Don't they know the whole thing. Dammit he slammed his hand in sudden jerk on the wall crushing someone soft between his rock solid body & wall. His senses filled with her scent very feminine. Her skin was glowing. Her curly formed a beautiful waves. She held him trembling back ward. His hand proactively went around her waist. Thats when he realized she wore a sari. He felt a current run down his spine as his eyes spat rage with the aftermath of his talk with priya. His heart seeked her warmth. He so wanted to be loved tenderly. Something so fragile .. just to wat he needed to hold him back together.
Aap teehk ho
he first heard just as a whisper against his chest. & then slowly saw those hazels flutter in concern
aap teehk ho na?
Her brows arched upward. & she softly shook her head.
There was so much concern in her eyes.. though his hand crushed her waist in his rage.
He looked stunned at the most beautiful hazels, plump luscious lips, full br**st pressed against his rock solid chest.. perfect figure, soft skin that burned his fingers. She slowly slipped out of his grip.
U take care she said giving him a warm smile before walking away.
Maan stood still long after

vicky - & I thought u wanted to whine
Maan - did u see her
vicky - white pari
Maan - pinch me
maan spoke still dazed

vicky couldn't miss that opportunity. He pinched him hard on his arms.
ouch Maan screamed

raghav & sahsa just joined them. Maan went on with his sulking session. & finally his frds convinced him to hit the gym & a spa to get a better feel.
Vicky - u really need to get back on track man


next whole week Maan spend working out, pampering himself with some messages & spa visits. He did feel better after a long time.

Sam even teased him couple of times with his looks & try to get a girl frd before the wedding. But Maan just didn't want to think in those lines now.
thanks a lot for the likes & comments

love

muskan

NEXT PART 4
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
hi di...nice concept...
maan poor baby...wah kehte hai na...
jab jiski kwaish ho toh woh milte nahi aur jab hum use bhula chuke hote hai woh nazroo ke same hota hai par hume yakeen nahi hote...
maan concept of sex after marriage is same...once he beleived it now he dn't...
p.s...wat abt my dhundle aks...
even u 4gt my b'dy...pout...pout...pouting
make it up 4 me..
chalo i m whitemailing u gv me updates of D.A as my gift...
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oye teri accidently i came 1st in commenting...
yiipee...
atlast entry of pari...
lovely one
chao..
Edited by lively-piia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
congrats muskan for the new story
arey waah kya starting maan ko nt aur dev ne dhoka diya poor boy abhi tak usse bahar nahi aaraha hai par sam aur uske saare friends trying to cheer him up in all these he has lost the faith in true love and feelings hope he finds his pari sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
😡disgusting dev and nt sam ne sahi kaha why maan should hide he didnt do any mistake jo kiya wo tho sabke saamne aaraha hai
haila pari ki entry hogayi hai😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
so muskan back in muskan mood 😉😉
Posted: 11 years ago
#27
It's so good to see u back...
The whole pari concept is endearing
NT better be a closed chapter now
Geet...what an entry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Main marjawan ghur kha Kay
Updates ki barsaat 😆
So Pari's face off lol
Maan is still sulking ... He is not interested to get a girl 😕
I am now curious to know how you would make Maan to take Geet as his GF and attend Dev's wedding ...
Continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Finally Geet aagayi..
😃
though its really tough to get over the cheating they had done on him, he has to somehow come over it... and move on...
hope this wedding invite along with sam's insistence make him get over the past and face it so that he moves on in his life...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awesome update
dev and nt getting married
so maan pari's has come!!!!
maan is slowy coming out from his past, good!!!!!

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