Maaneet os 'That one moment!!' final part page 5

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Loved it a lot dear!!!I loved how you showed that negativity can destroy things more than anything else and how you ended it by making it beautiful and positive...😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

oh man had he been late for even a minute she would have committed suicide

and in turn kill him and their baby

thank god he came in time

so he knew she was pregnant and not her

well he had the reports

that was too close for comfort

i shudder to think had he been little late he would have found her dead body

instead of her alive

and that he wouldnt have been able to overcome

phew that moment passed

and he made sure that boss of her and her family never disturbed her again

oh maan you didnt know naa that her sadness was for not just separation from you

but also because of what happened

he was so hurt that he didnt know his geet was this sad

that she was gonna contemplate suicide

but all worked out for them

thank god for that

and now they are happy together with their baby and nakul kaka too

he sure pampered her during her pregnancy

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Lovelyyy update...
Thank god Maan came on right time..otherwise Maaneet would hv lost everything

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fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

lovely part... maan had reached at right time and solved all problems .. loved it ...

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Smily

@angel_smily

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

amazing part

luvd it

thanks god that maan came on time

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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

great update...
thank god maan called and even came at time before anything happened...
omg...geet is pregnant...:D
that boss deserved the punishment as he had tried to harm our maan's geet...
loved the surprise for geet ...their nok jhok is soo cute...
awesome os..
thanks for pm
-anjali (:

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

beautifu;l ending...loved it moni
superbly written

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb intense emotional update! Beautifuly written! Maan came in tym! He called first! Geet feels alone! Maan finds out wt she did wen he sees blood n the letter! First she lies! Geet is pregnant! Maan tells her! He saved two lives! Maan loves her so much! He wld nt have survived without her! Maan takes care of everything! He sorts her boss n family! Everything gng well! lovely end! Thanks 4 a wonderful OS! Pls try n update ur other stories! Thanks!