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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Part 1

Awesome start !!

So MSK is a superstar singer & geet wants to be actress ..so basically geet is using maan to fullfill her dreams ..she is somewhere getting success in it coz maan is attracted towards her ..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

superb update !!

So geet is madam succedding in her plan to woo maan & maan has fallen in love with her ..

Precap seems interesting ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Interesting storyline.. It looks like Geet is using Maan to reach the fame ladder..
Eager to read next part.. Please update soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Part 3
''Come tomorrow to my show at 6 a car will pick you up.''
He turned arround and was about to leave, when Geet's voice stopped him.
''You don't know my adress.''
''Tweet it to me.''
He winked at her and walked away leaving a smirking Geet behind. MSK, Geet's jaadu is doing it's charms on you.She went home first thing she did was tweeting Maan.
''Hey Maan here is my adress :****''
Maan smiled getting the tweet. Oh she would love his performance he just knew it. He tweeted back a simple smiley. He need to perpare for tomorrow. Geet was smilling to herself when Sam walked into her room.
''Why are you smiling Geet.''
''Well darling cause I will soon get what I want.''
''And that is.''
''MSK.''
''Oh right dreaming with eyes open huh.''
''You just wait and watch how he becomes mine.''
Sam rolled her eyes.
''So any planes for the night.''
''Honey I am going to the mall, wanna join.''
''Sure.''
Sam and Geet went for shopping. The next day it was Maan's concert she needed to look perfect he needed to be hers asap. She looked like this:
Simple yet sexy. The car came to pick her up. The driver let her to the vip lounge where Maan was. Maan turned around damn he thought this girl blows me away everytime I see her. He walked over to her.
''Hey Maan.''
She said looking down blushing. He put a finger under her chin and made her look at him.
''You look out of this world Geet.''
She smiled.
''Ohh Maan aap bhi nah.''
''Geet I am so happy your here.''
She smiled.
''Geet go and take a seat my BG will lead you to your seat.''
She nodded.
''Maan good luck.''
She leaned forward and kissed his cheek. Maan smiled.Geet faked a blush and walked outside. She sat in the front row. Maan came on stage. he took the mike.
''The song I will be singing is new you girls have never ever heard it before as I wrote it last night itself. This song I have written for a beautifull girl I met who changed my life.''
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w1oM3kQpXRo[/YOUTUBE]
He looked directly into Geet eyes. Who smiled and looked doing acting all shy shy while inside she was smirking how fast her plan was working.
All I knew this morning when I woke
Is I know something now, know something now I didn't before.
And all I've seen since eighteen hours ago
Is hazel collord eyes and dimples and your smile
In the back of my mind making me feel like
I just wanna know you better, know you better, know you better now
I just wanna know you better, know you better, know you better now
He said this lines looking directly into Geet's eyes. Geet smirked well Geet your magic did it's charms on Maan.
'Cause all I know is we said, "Hello."
And your eyes look like coming home
All I know is a simple name
Everything has changed
You'll be mine and I'll be yours
All I know since yesterday is everything has changed
Ofcourse Maan I will be happily be yours Geet smirked if that means bagging movie deals. This perefct Geet simply perfect in a couple of days you will be on top thanks the befkwoof supestar Maan Singh Khurana
And all I feel in my stomach is butterflies
The beautiful kind, making up for lost time,
I just wanna know you better, know you better, know you better now
I just wanna know you, know you, know you
Come back and tell me why
I'm feeling like I've missed you all this time, oh, oh, oh.
And meet me there tonight
And let me know that it's not all in my mind.
When Maan was done the crowed went wild.
''Seems you guys liked my new song.''
Maan sweetly smiled and looked at Geet. Who blushed one of her famous fake blushes and looked down with a smile playing on her lips or should I say a smirk playing on her lips. After the performance Geet walked backstage she went straight to Maan who welcomed her with a smile.
''Maan was that song for me.''
Maan smiled.He walked forward to her.
''What do you think Geet.''
''Maan.''
''Tell me Geet do you think it was for you.''
He said a sly smile playing on his lips. Geet blushed looked down smiled and looked up again.
''What if I say I don't think that it was written for me.''
''Acha.''
''Haan but I know it was written for me Maan Singh Khurana.''
''I would say that you absolutly right. So will you go on a date with me Geet Handa.''
''I would love to.''
''Great why don't you wait for me I will just change and then we will go.''
''Abhi.''
''Haan Geet abhi why any problem.''
''Nahi you go I will wait.''
Maan got ready and came to her he forwarded his hand she took it. Hand in Hand they walked outside only to be clicked. Something started playing in Geet's mind she needed to set her every move very very carefull now. Finally they sat in the car and drove off to their date. Maan stopped by a beach.
''Well we will have some privacy here.''
She just smiled.They walked on the beach hand in hand.
''Maan you where amazing tonight.''
''Thanks Geet.''
''Maan I can't believe you sang that song for me, thank you.''
He looked at her with love filled eyes.
''Anything for you Misty.''
''Misty.''
''Haan Misty as in sweetheart.''
She blushed and hugged Maan.He hugged her back. After a while they seperated and started walking again.
''Maan I can't believe I fell in love with you since the time I saw you.''
''Same goes for me Geet. I fell for you when I saw you dancing in the club. You took my breath away.And you fell for me when you saw me on Aadi's b-day right.''
''No I mean I probably started loving you but I had a crush on you way before''
She said looking down in shyness of course she wasn't really shy but faking. Geet was a to bold girl to have feelings like shyness or to even blush.
''Really.''
''Haan. I even wrote a song about it.''
''Enchanted.''
She blushed.
''That one to but another one to when I first started liking you.''
''Really can I heard it.''
She shook her head and freed her hand and ran away from him Maan ran behind her.She looked back giggled and trew water on him he smiled ignored it and walked over to her and pulled her towards him.
''Sing it for me.''
She shook her head and hidded in his embrace.
''Jaan please.''
''Another day.''
''Hmmm.''
He let her go and turned away in mock anger. She put a hand on his shoulder.
''Maan gusse mein ho.''
''Hmmm.''
She kissed his cheek.Maan smiled.He took her into a side hug.
''Sing it for me nah.''
''I will but not tonight I am feeling to shy.''
Maan nodded a kissed her head.The night ended as Maan and Geet walked back to the car. He dropped her home. They hugged goodbye. While Maan walked to his car dreaming about his Geet. geet planned her next move. Step number one she needed to write a song about Maan. She smirked. Soon very soon she would be in the limelight.
Precap: Superstar😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
oh god
this geet is faking
n maan is falling for her
he took her to his concert n sang for her
the pics are clicked to be in medias..which geet wanted
maan confessed his love n geet too says she loves him..
poor maan will be hurt when she comes to know her intensions..
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Wow great story please update soon
I feel so sorry maan and I hate geet right now
thanks for sharing your story with us
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
nice update
geet is faking to trap maan
very bad

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Hate this geet very much feeling bad for maan waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome updates
geet faking all this !!!
poor maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
superb
bs update thoda fast diya kr

mujhe starting se read krna pda

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