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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Why is Geet doing this... She is playing with Maan's emotion.. Is she doing this just to be in public attention

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3
nice...
Maan loves her so much...
but Geet is using him...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet is so conniving and clever
and maan is falling forher fake charms
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting story...
pl pm whn u update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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third part was nice i simply loved it😊😊, and geet fake blushes and smirk 😡, and maan falling for her was sad thing. thanks fa pm buddy😊. waiting for your next part eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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(Thank you so much for the banner Naaz baba😳luv ya)
Part 4
He let her go and turned away in mock anger. She put a hand on his shoulder.
''Maan gusse mein ho.''
''Hmmm.''
She kissed his cheek.Maan smiled.He took her into a side hug.
''Sing it for me nah.''
''I will but not tonight I am feeling to shy.''
Maan nodded a kissed her head.The night ended as Maan and Geet walked back to the car. He dropped her home. They hugged goodbye. While Maan walked to his car dreaming about his Geet. geet planned her next move. First she needed to write a song about Maan. She smirked. Soon very soon she would be in the limelight. The next day she texted Maan.
Geet:
I need to talk to you. Where are you.
Maan:
Geet you okay I am in the studio. I have my recording after two hours.
Geet:
Hmm Can I come to meet you
Maan:
Kyu are you missing me that badly
Geet:
Maan I am coming
Maan:
Is everthing alright
Geet:
Hmmm see you in a bit
Maan:
Alright
Geet went for simple yet sexy this time. She looked like this
Maan at the other was sitting in the studio getting ready when Adi walked in.
''Who is this girl.''
Superstar Maan Singh Khurana's love mystery.
Maan looked at the pic that was of yesterday oh maye Geet was worried about this.
''Maan.''
''This is my gf Geet Handa.''
''Oh since when are you two dating.''
''Just a day Aadi.''
''And already the world knows hehehheheh.''
''Aadi.''
''Hehehhehe sorry buddy.''
Just then Geet walked in. Maan signaled Adi to leave.He opened his arms for her. She walked over to him and trew herself in his arms.
''Maan we need to talk.''
She said Maan seprated her and made her sit.
''Are you here to talk about the headlines regarding us two.''
''Haan maan''
''Relax Geet I will tell everyone your my gf so nothing to worry about.''
''Nahi Maan I am not ready. Maan I come from a middle class family my daarij will call me back to HP if they figure out that I have a bf. Maan I love you a lot and want to spend my entire life with you and for that we have to take every step very carefull maan.''
''Cherry what do you want me to do.''
''Cherry???''
''As you blush so much, so your as red as a cherry.'''
What a tacky nickname Geet thought. Yuck cherry is he for real anyway Geet concerate on your plan.
''Maaan.''
She said while faking another blush, he smiled.
'''See I told you.''
He giggled
''Now tell me Geet what do you want me to tell the press.''
''Maan I told my parents that we are working together and it was nothing but a friendly hug.''
''You what.''
''Maan mein kya kehthi Daarij was al set to call me back and marry me off to some guy. Please Maan don't be angry.''
''But Geet what now.''
''Maan I don't know.''
She faked to cry Maan took her into a hug.
''Oh Misty all will be fine.''
''Maan when daarij didn't belive me I told him you will be announcing that we are working together in your next album today to the press.''
she said between sobs.
''WHAT.''
She cried more.
''Sssh Misty it's okay let me think what I can do.''
Just then Maan's label owner walked inside.
''Maan stop hugging that girl as we need to find a girl for your band as Rosy quited.''
Maan seprated himself from geet.
''Idiot here she is crying and you are making things worse.''
''Your acting like I made her cry.''
He said shrugging his shoulders.
''You are searching for a new girl.''
''Yes we are.''
''Can I audition.''
''Well we want a girl who also can write and sing.''
''I wrote a song can I sing that one.''
''Alright.''
Yash sat down Maan whispered in Geet's ear.
''Are you sure Misty.''
''Yes Maan as I love you and the song I wrote about you will make sure we stay together and my daarij won't call me back.''
''Hmm good luck Misty.''
He kissed her forhead and sat next to Yash.
''So your gf.''
''Hmmm but no-one can now he quikly briefed him everything.''
''She can't have a bf but she can be a part of the showbizz.''
''Hmmm.''
''Weird.''
Before there convo could continue Geet started singing.
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0CdieJUDdio[YOUTUBE]
This is wrong but I can't help but feel like
There ain't nothing more right babe
Misty Morning comes again and I can't
Help but wish I could see your face
And I knew from the first note played
I'd be breaking all my rules to see you
You smile that beautifull smile and
All the girls in the front row scream your name
Maan smiled looked at a red Geet but she saw with confidence. Yash noticed the dreamy look in Maan's eyes He nudged him.
''Why are looking so happy, is it about you.''
''Yeah.''
''Are you sure as I don't think you have a beautifull smile.''
Yash giggled Maan rolled his eyes and concetrated on his Geet.
So dim that spotlight, tell me things like
I can't take my eyes off of you
I'm no one special, just another
Wide eyed girl who's desperately in love with you
Give me a photograph to hang on my wall, superstar
Maan blushed and when there eyes met me gave her a sweet smile assuring her he loved her a lot.
Good morning loneliness, comes around when I'm not
Dreaming about you
When my world wakes up today
You'll be in another town
And I knew when I saw your face, I'd be
Counting down the ways to see you
You smile that beautiful smile and
All the girls in the front row scream your name
The lines made him reliase she wrote this song before they met that means she loved him long back. He grinned feeling special.
You played in bars, you play guitar
I'm invisible and everyone knows who you are
And you'll never see, sing me to sleep
Every night from the radio
After she was done Yash stood up feeling really satisfied with her performance. Maan walked up to her and took her into a hug.
''I love you Geet. Oh I love you so much and after this song I love you more.''
Geet smirked.
''Heyyy I am still here you two can romance latter.
Maan seprated himself from his Misty with a lot of diffeculty. He shot a glare at Yash. Yash giggled.
''Geet I must say very impressive.''
''So can I be in Maan's band.''
''Yes you are in.''
''Thank you''
''We will have a press meet tonight and we will introduce you after two days.''
''Perfect.''
''You two will have to sing together.''
''Do you have any song in mind.''
''Yes.''
He told him how he wanted their performance to be. They nodded.
Precap: I can do anything to become famous & press confrence
I demand long comments😭😭😭
Edited by angel-ki-shona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
TIA😆
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AAJ MAI UPPER
AASMAAN NICHE
AAJ MAI AAGE
ZAMANA HAI PEECHEEE
WAHAHAHAHHAAH ME FIRST
ME FIRST
ME FIRST
HAYEEE
AFTER SOOO LONG TIA SECURED THE FORST PLACE
YAAR ITNI KHUSHI TOH EXAM BHI NA HOTI🤣🤣
HAYEE IT WOULD HAVE BEEN SO GOOD NA IF EVERY QUESTION IN PAPER CAME RELATED TYO MAANU
MAI TOH TOP KARTI🤣🤪
Edited by Tia-AFreeBird - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
TIA MAANU
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ME SECOND TOOO HAYEEE MAZA AA GYA😆
CHAL FIRST LET ME COMMENT

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grrr ye kamini geet
K A M I N I - S E L F I S H - M E A N geet taking advantage of my maanu's love
here my maanu fully lattu on her
he has fallen badly for her
n she not leaving a chance to use him
my maanu's heart will b broken badly..
i hope kamini geet suffered also breaking my maanu's heart...
she should know u cant ascend the stairs of success shettering someone's heart
i dont want my maanu to forgive her huh😳😳
maanu gave her nick name wo b CHERRY
YE CHERRY TOH BHUT KHUSH HOGI..
n ye geet maanu gave her nick name n she felt it tacky😡
ek toh he gave her cherry name uper se she felt it tacky how dare she😡
i hope maanu found his Tia soon ab he knows na Tia is always there for him😉😆
i cant see him with this traitor geet 😡
hayee rabba aage kya plans hai isss stupid geet ke huh
babaji always b with my maannu hmm

Edited by Tia-AFreeBird - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
TIA KA MAANU JAANU😆😆😆
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ME THIRD ALSO
hayeee sari kasar nikal di😆😆😆😆

so ur naaz made u a banner hmmm
but mind it
Tia love you more huh😆😆😆

Edited by Tia-AFreeBird - 11 years ago

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