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Posted: 11 years ago
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This ff is specially written on the request of Cherry. I hope you guys and my cherry pie will like it😉
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Prologue
Superstar Maan Singh Khurana fixed his shirt just before going on stage. He was ready to give one of his best performances on the Star Guild Awards. He took a deep breath he knew that his ex Geet would be just in the first row.At one side that was nerve wrecking but at the other side it was good cause this song he had written specially for her. Just then he heard the voice of the host.
He had to go up.He walked on to the stage singing the next set of lines:
You have a way of coming easily to me
And when you take, you take the very best of me
So I start a fight cause I need to feel something
And you do what you want cause I'm not what you wanted

Geet's heartbeat stopped for a moment. She looked at Maan's cold eyes that pierced right into hers. She good see that his pain had left and made place for coldness.


Oh what a shame, what a rainy ending given to a perfect day
Just walk away, no use defending words that you will never say
And now that I'm sitting here thinking it through
I've never been anywhere cold as you
The crowd went wild with the intensity Maan was singing. People could feel ever word. They found him amazing but what thet didn't know, was that he indeed meant each and every single word. The only one who knew was Geet Handa a promising newcomer in the field of acting.

You put up walls and paint them all a shade of gray
And I stood there loving you and wished them all away
And you come away with a great little story
Of a mess of a dreamer with the nerve to adore you
You never did give a damn thing honey but I cried, cried for you
And I know you wouldn't have told nobody if I died, died for you
Past memories rushed into Geet's mind. Yes the words Maan sang where harsh,and she wished she could run away from here. But alas that wasn't possible but Geet also knew she did give him that feeling and perhaps he was right about that Geet. But that Geet had been gone on one faithfull day, a day she met with the knew her!!
She tried her level best to keep a fake smile on her lips. A fake smile that had lately become her best friend infront of the whole world. She thought no she wanted to believe that no-one could see through her fake smile. But even this false hope of her got crushed down, with Maan's next line of words.
Oh what a shame, what a rainy ending given to a perfect day
Every smile you fake is so condescending
Counting all the scars you made
And now that I'm sitting here thinking it through
I've never been anywhere cold as you
Of course her Maan no not hers but Superstar Maan Singh Khurana could see through her fake smile. But if he could see everything why couldn't he see the love her eyes for him.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1
Geet Handa was packing her bags.Mumbai here I come she thought. She would concere Bollywood she promised herself.
At the other singing sensation Maan Singh Khurana was just leaving the studio, he had just recorded his song. While he left hs Phone rang it was Aadi his drummer asking him to come to the most famous disc at night.
Geet had just arrived in Mumbai she was unpacking her stuff when the bell rang. She opened the door to find Sameera standing at her doorstep.
''Hi honey''
''Sam come in''
''Babes what are you doing''
''Kuch nahi Sam was just unpacking my stuff''
''Forget that you can do all that latter let's go to a disc a and party all your tiredness away''
''Not a bad idea, just give me 5 minutes''
Geet went inside and changed into a short dress. She was wearing this:
Maan was sitting at the bar sipping his drink when Geet came in, his eyes went or her. He wasn't all to found of skinshow but he had to admitt she looked breath taking. Geet immediately hit the dance floor.
''I wanna dance all night,
I wanna party to the end.
oh oh''
Geet sang out loud together with the song, while she danced like there was no tomorrow.
''I wanna show to world,
there ain't anybody,
like me,
oh oh
''I wanna dance all night,
I wanna party to the end.
oh oh''
While Geet was moving the music Maan's eyes followed her. While dancing Geet noticed someone was watching her every move. She glanced to that side only to find superstar Maan Singh Khurana looking or better said drooling at her. Geet smirked to herself and kept on dancing not giving him another glance.
''I wanna danceee,
I wanna live my life,
the way I wanna,
Make mine all rules tonight,
''I wanna dance all night,
I wanna party to the end.
oh oh''.
Maan was still looking at her when Adi tapped his shoulder.
''What happened Aadi'
''I think we should leave now, we have to get up early tomorrow''
''Yes let's go''
Maan left from there shaking the images of a dancing Geet out of his head, though the kept popping back in his brains. When Maan left a smiling Geet walked over to the bar.
''one bloody mary please''
Sam came from behind.
''Why are you smiling like a fool Geet''
''Because honey my life is about to change after today''
''What do you mean Miss Handa''
''Nothing dear nothing''
''Seems like the alcohol is showing it's affects already you''
Geet just smiled without replying Sam. After Geet got home she she sat behind her laptop and started following Maan on twitter. She closed her eyes a slept with a smile playing on her lips. A month latter after the disc night Geet was siiting in her room going through a fashion magazine when her mobile buzzed, she was about to check Sam's message when she noticed that Maan had tweeted that he would be attending Aadi b-day party. Then he tweeted another message stating on my way to Bandra.Geet smiled time to crash a party she thought. She looked at Sam's message asking her to go out she messaged her a simple no and got up to find the perfect dress for herself.
She smilled she would meet Maan again tonight and she was sure he would look at her.Geet got in a cab and arrived at the party she sneaked inside while no-one noticed. She stood elaganty in a corner and started chatting with the first person she saw.
''Hi I am Geet Handa''
''Hi Pari, nice to meet you''
''Pleasure is all mine''
Pari smiled at her.
''Sorry I didn't reconize you what do you do movies, modeling
Geet interupted her.
''Singing I am a singer''
''Oh which sang did you sing''
''Well acteully I am a upcoming singer''
''I see''
They kept chatting while Geet eyes fell on Maan. He smiled at her, while she smiled back. Just then a waiter came to Maan, Maan asked him a paper and he left to get it. When he returned Maan wrote something on it and asked the waiter to give it to the girl in the blue dress. Geet read the note:
You look breath taking''
She smiled and wrote back.
''You don't look bad yourself.
'''Thanks, what your name''
''My name is Geet handa, Mr Khurana''
'' Beautifull name just as beautifull as you''
''Thank you Mr.Flirt''
No I am not a flirt but yes he do feel like flirting with you ;)
Oh really
Instead of sending a note Maan walked over to her.
Precap: Enchanted😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX
Prologue above
Part 1 above
Part 2 page 3
Part 3 Page 8
Part 4 Page 12
Part 5 Page 16
Edited by angel-ki-shona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ooo new story
now i m scared plz ab zyada time ke liye gayab mat hona , humari aadat bigadane ke baad
USED who use whom
i think geet used maan to enter in industry nd become famous but in that she fallen in love with him
but maan after sometime will get know the truth nd think all that love were fake nd she only used him so that she can be a part of glamour world😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesia

ooo new story

now i m scared plz ab zyada time ke liye gayab mat hona , humari aadat bigadane ke baad
USED who use whom
i think geet used maan to enter in industry nd become famous but in that she fallen in love with him
but maan after sometime will get know the truth nd think all that love were fake nd she only used him so that she can be a part of glamour world😕

😆Monday seh Mel gayab😆😆😆but will come back jhaldi seh I mean faster then last time😆
That's the million dollar question ke kya huwa kisne jana😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

😆Monday seh Mel gayab😆😆😆but will come back jhaldi seh I mean faster then last time😆
That's the million dollar question ke kya huwa kisne jana😆


dekh abhi se heart attack mat de wapas bhaag rahi hai
but iss baar humesha se booohoot jaldi aana padega samjhi😡
million dollar question hai toh jald se answer dede u will receive million dollors😆😆😆
Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aha back with all stories
just eagerly waiting for next part😉
n ha dont be a mrs India gain.. nhi toh i will complain to jiju😉
me wanna enjoy ur works😆😆😆

Edited by Tia-AFreeBird - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on the new story! Interestin prologue! Fab start! well written, update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tia-AFreeBird

aha back with all stories
just eagerly waiting for next part😉
n ha dont be a mrs India gain.. nhi toh i will complain to jiju😉
me wanna enjoy ur works😆😆😆

like I am scared of him😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesia


dekh abhi se heart attack mat de wapas bhaag rahi hai
but iss baar humesha se booohoot jaldi aana padega samjhi😡
million dollar question hai toh jald se answer dede u will receive million dollors😆😆😆

😆Hum toh aisi hi hain😆
Haan I will month ke andar I hope😆
😆ahaan trying to bribe a lawyerAngry😆

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