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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
but is it a dream??!!
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Mission Impossible: The Don N The Diva

Part 39


Maan's lips slowly started to play with Geet's, Geet was in seventh heaven with Maan's kiss, her body along with her soul was burning up high in passion, Maan was pinning himself on to her, his one hand pressing her waist and other was holding her hand, Geet's mind asked her to push him away and confront him, make him accept his feeling for her and the reason behind it, but not her heart nor her body was helping her, Geet was so much weak in his passion,

"please don't stop him," Her heart begged, as the minutes moved, Maan's passion and desire increase, Maan stop his kiss and slowly took his lips away from her, just to see her eyes, which was closed, Geet was breathing high leaning on to the wall, Geet got puzzled by the Maan's pause but too scared to open her eyes, Her heart beat was raising up as Geet don't know what's happening, she was turning restless,

But her heart skipped an beat when she felt Maan's strong hands feathering her forehead with his rough fingers, he slowly moved his finger from her forehead to her nose and then to her lips, and moved down his fingers, Geet was dying in pleasure and her mind was screaming at her, she doesn't know how to react, stop him or enjoy the moment and see the later, later, after all it's her warrior, it's their moment,

Maan moved his hands down her neck and proceeded down, but Geet caught his hand before he could go further down and looked at him with her desire filled eyes, Geet moved away pulling him slightly but Maan got her dupatta and Geet Didn't mind to get it from him and went and stood there in a distance, Maan too stood there holding her dupatta in his hands and looked at Geet, who was wait for him there,

"Geet, stop yourself, please don't lose this chance, when Maan comes here and tries to do something, push him away and ask him what's in his mind and what feelings does he have for you, and if he has such feelings for you, why does he run away from you, ok," Geet mind said and the distance from Maan helped her to think ok, Maan slowly walked near Geet with his desire filling his mind,

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As Maan was walking up slowly, but suddenly his phone vibrated in his pant pocket pulling him out of the desire filled mindset and thoughts running inside his heart, Maan shook his head as if woke from an sleep, his head pained up and he slowly took his phone and looked at it, and it was Dev's number, Maan kept looking at the mobile, he felt like caught in between a crime and then the call ended up, Maan then looked up to see Geet standing there breathing high,

"God, what am I doing," Maan said looking at Geet's dupatta in his hands, "how could I," Maan thought, and his mobile again vibrated in his hand and he looked at it, Dev's message was there, and Maan opened it, "Bro, what happened, It's be too long, and you both didn't return home, is everything ok," Maan read the message, and replied him an ok and put his mobile into his pocket again, and looked at Geet,

Geet was waiting for Maan and she didn't know what's taking him so long, Geet suddenly felt Maan's hand on her shoulder and Geet turned around to look at Maan with an courage to accuse, but his face was calm and his eyes was no longer filled with desire, Maan slowly put the dupatta over Geet, covering her up and looked away, "Please go and sleep there," Maan said and Geet looked at him puzzled, "And Stay away from me," Maan said and went and sat on the chair and turned away,

Geet was shocked too much, how could he change like this suddenly, what the hell happened, before one minute was like eating me alive and now, Geet was so confused and went and sat on the couch, Maan was cursing himself for not controlling himself, there was totally silence and darkness there, and Maan was staring at it and after an long hours, the lights came back, and Maan slowly turned back to see Geet's state,

Poor Geet was sleeping there in the sofa with confusion in her mind, and looking at her Maan too was confused, It was Geet's behavior, "she didn't stop him, resist, cry, or even say an word against him, why," Maan asked himself, she didn't even show an slight hesitation or discomfort in his closeness as before, Maan was too much confused, May be his care and concern had created an wrong impression on her he thought scared,

"No, no, it can't be, she can't fall for me, nor love me, she had to love someone else," Maan thought and looked at her sleeping and falling off on the couch, "My love for you is more than my desire Geet, I will control myself for it," Maan then stood up and went near Geet who was falling off from the sofa and was holding herself, Maan slowly removed his shirt buttons to reveal is black inner vest, and sat near Geet and held her hands and pulled her close and put his shirt on her to cover her and put her head on his shoulders and he too laid back and they slept off,




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Morning sun hit Maan's eyes and disturbed his sleep, Maan shook his head and tried to stretch his body, just then he realized Geet was lying on his shoulders and she was holding his waist, then all the last night came to his mind, "God, should be more careful and should take some steps immediately now," Maan thought and slowly placed Geet's head on the soft and he stood up, and looked at the clock which showed 6.30,

Maan then took his mobile and called Adi, "Adi Come to the office, I am in the Blue prints room and the door got jammed again," Maan said freaking out Adi, "What, Sir, I will be there in a minute," Adi said and cut the call, and as he said Adi came there so soon and opened the door, "Maan sir," Adi called out loud as he came in and Maan silenced him, and turned towards Geet, and Adi too looked at her,

"Sir, When did you and Geet, came here," Adi asked slowly, "Yesterday Night and the door got jammed" Maan said, "Oh My God, sir, why didn't you call me sir," Adi asked feeling sad, "Whole night, you both were sleeping in the sofa, in this room, why sir," Adi said sadly, "Adi, it was too late and I don't want to disturb you," Maan said and Adi shook his head, Geet got disturbed by the sound and got up and looked at Maan and Adi talking up,




Geet got shocked to see Maan in his vest and his shirt on her, Geet then slowly she got up, looking at Maan and Adi, Geet felt hell embarrassed to see Adi there, she was feeling what he would think now, "Good morning, Geet," Adi said with a smile and Geet looked at his clear face, which was as usual kind, "Geet, you have your back pain right, and sleeping like this, atleast you would have told Maan sir right," Adi asked worried,

"OMG instead of doubting he is worried, and Baba ji only knows what happened yesterday, I was in no mood even to think anything," Geet thought and smiled an silly smile, "Ok Adi, let's go," Maan said and went out getting his shirt from Geet and wearing it and Geet and Adi followed him, "Maan sir, your guards," Adi asked looking around, "No Adi, yesterday I didn't call them," Maan said casually, "Sir, please, You can't be this careless, after what," Adi started and stopped looking at Geet, "Sir, please, don't do like this again," Adi said and smiled and went away with a nodded.

Geet looked at Maan, who signed her to see inside the car and Maan started the car and drove up, the drive was so silent, and as soon as they reached Khurana Mansion, Geet went towards the outhouse and Maan didn't stop her, Geet's silence made Maan worried, "She looks upset, maybe she is feeling guilty again on herself, why the hell am I making her sad again and again, had to do something," Maan thought as he went in,

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"Maan, what happened," Dadi maa asked as Maan entered in, "Nothing Dadi maa, we got jammed inside the room, so," Maan said, "And where is Geet," Dadi maa asked looking behind him, "She had gone to the outhouse," Maan said and went away with waiting for Dadi maa's reply, Maan went to his room and we was so hell confused, day by day, minute by minute, his love for Geet is increasing, his desire was overcoming his love without his permission,

Maan Can't stay away from her, as it will hurt her feelings and it was becoming impossible for Maan to stay away from her too, nor he can't get close, Maan was thinking for an solution, How will Maan make her understand when he himself wasn't able to understand, every minute he was staying away from her was like hell for him, his mind started to think if there is an way to take Geet in to his life, but the Danger was too high, he got confused as he stepped inside the shower with his thoughts,

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Geet was standing under the shower, cursing herself, "What the hell was I thinking, what was I waiting for, I should have pushed him away the moment he kissed me and confronted him, but no, Baba ji, what will I do now, he gets back his control again in no minutes, and he acts like he has no feelings, now, He is the one in control and I am the one who is out of control, Geet you better stay away from him, you can't reveal that you know the truth, till he says it,"

"But what if he says it, I have to act fast, already Breej is thinking that I am trying to save Maan, and what if they try to taking me away from the mission and that's all, and also I have to prove Maan's innocence, but how, "I am an don,"" Maan's voice screamed in her ears, "wait, what if it's true," Geet thought holding her heart, "I knew My Warrior, but situation can change anyone, if he is an normal business man, then why he had to run away from me," Geet thought suddenly feeling tensed,

"But there must be an big reason, Breej said it's family rivalry between Khurana's and Rathore's but Maan is not an born Khurana, then why, why is he taking up the rivalry, what's happening Baba ji, what is happening," Geet thought feeling restless, "guess I need to find out the truth somehow, which might be in this house," Geet thought, and came out of her shower and walked into her room, "enough of this hide and seek game, I am tired of this, now I had to push him as much as I can to break his control, to yell that he is my warrior, and once he said that, then I can ask him everything in need with my right and ask him to do as I say," Geet thought determined,

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Maan got ready to office and came down and suddenly he heard a sound from the kitchen, "Dadi maa," Maan thought rushing towards the kitchen, but he stopped surprised when he saw Geet, "Geet," Maan called up looking puzzled, he thought she would be upset but not smiling and working in his kitchen and Geet looked at him shocked, "What the hell are you doing here," Maan yelled, "What will I do in the kitchen, Cooking," Geet said making Maan amused,




"Geet, now get the hell out of the kitchen now, and get ready for the office" Maan yelled up and Geet looked at him coolly, "I had already told you, I am your secretary in the Office only, and that too only after 9 am, now I am your guest in your house, so it's my wish to do as I wish," Geet said, "Today I am going to cook lunch myself for all," Geet said sweetly, "What, that means you are not coming to the office," Maan said suddenly feeling a distance, "sure, will come but in the afternoon with your lunch," Geet said,

"what" Maan yelled up, "Maan what happened," Dadi maa came in, "Dadi maa, Maan sir is not giving me an single day off, and keeps yelling at me," Geet said with a baby face, "Maan, it's not fair, can't she take an day off," Dadi maa asked, "No, not like that Dadi maa," Maan said but before he could finish Geet started up, "And Dadi maa, I wish to cook lunch for all, can't I cook for you Dadi maa," Geet asked slowly, "Oh, why not dear, if you wish you can cook daily too, it's your house too," Dadi maa said with a smile,




"Great, now Dadi maa too is taking her side, now what can I do," Maan said, " Do whatever you want, no need to come to the office, I will go alone" Maan said with a stern look, "Dadi maa, I am leaving to office" Maan said and went away, "Dadi maa, thank you," Geet said with a smile, "No problem dear," Dadi maa said, "Dadi maa, sorry I came to cook here without your permission, can I," Geet said with a smile, "Geet, this is also your house only, you can do whatever you want here, ok," Dadi maa said and Geet smiled big and started cook up,




Dadi maa saw her cooking up and smiled big, "So Geet, this will be your home with all rights, as Maan's wife, my Daughter-in-law" Dadi maa thought and went away, "Maan, let me see, without seeing me, how will your day go well in your office, this short distance will make you realize how strong is your love for me," Geet thought with a grin folding her hands,
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Maan went to his cabin and sat up, he looked at Geet's cabin and seeing it Empty made him feel more restless, "What is this, why am I feeling like this, why did I want to see Geet now, why," Maan thought, "Maan, control yourself, anyways you had decided to pull her out of your life, then why are you feeling this tensed, with this small distance from her," Maan thought,

Maan took his mobile to call Geet, but kept it down, "what the hell am I trying to do, all I wanted was Geet's safety and happiness right, now she is happy in my house and safe too, then why does it matter whether she is before my eyes or not, where ever she is she should be fine right," Maan thought, "Maan," Geet's voice echoed up the cabin and Maan stood up to see her smiling at him, "Geet" Maan said as he stood up, "you came back," Maan asked as he went near and Geet smiled big,

"I know you would miss me," Geet said and held his hands, "and I missed you too, so I came back to you," Geet said and Maan smiled big, and hugged her close immediately closing his eyes tight, and after an few minutes he opened his eyes and got shocked, as he was staring at the blank space before him and he was still sitting in his chair, "it's a dream," Maan thought and looked into Geet's cabin and was staring at the emptiness,

Precap: coming up next on MI, "Maan- Geet's cute nok-jhok, see what all Geet does to pull Maan close to her and make him accept his feeling but Maan is Maan, will he ever give up his secret, and Vikram to pressure up Maan and Breej to pressurize Geet... and the truth to be revealed at the 50th part"

(next update on Thursday)
Edited by Maya_Maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVED THE SWEET UPDATE👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
WAITING FOR PRECAP AS IT IS SO INTERESTING😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
Haha loved the hide and seek game. But I cannot wait for the truth to be revealed. The suspense is killing me :D
superb update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice episode...waiting for more maaneet scenes..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update👏👏👏Loved Maaneet Romantic momentsMaan missing Geet😳Precap is interesting...waiting for the Maaneet cute moments
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update !!
geet determine to knw all truth so staying away frm maan making him restless ..
precap is very interesting ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
like the way how geet is trying to make maan confess
and bechara maan is too much caught up in between his heart and mind

waiting for geet's plan to woo maan😆😆 and make him confess😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting precap. maneet nok-jhok.
wow😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab part.. Love what geet is doing to get maan confessed.. Bt maan is maan hell stubborn. Geet hv to work harder

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