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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 10
awesome dear...
excellent...
Pinky's story telling was so nice...
hehehe...
so Arnav was like that before...
but now hes changed but Khushi still sees only that Arnav in him now too...
still Arnav is behind her...
this ASR is different...
good for him...
and wow Maan awesome reaction after seeing Geet...
Geet is his PA now...
cont soon dear...

Thanks for the review dear!
Happy that you liked the narration style of Pinky!😃
Khushi will see what she wants to see not what is the truth!😉
Happy that you liked Maaneet scene!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi dear! Thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Pinky tells Geet everything! She is late n Maan angry! Geet admiring Maan! Finally they meet again! n have eyes only 4 each other! Pinky is stunned! Geet nw his PA! update soon, well written

Thanks for the review dear! Glad you liked the update!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 9:

Pinky is lat and I feel like maan is not going to shout at her once he looks at geet. Geet handa is in the building and maan singh khurana you better prepare for the item bomb hahah.
When khushi and Arnav came and khushi Called maan her boyfriend i was like nahii! Like I know she's is his sister and all but geet doesn't and she would've been so sad. Which she was but thank god to pinky who told her the story about maan and khushi. If I was in geets position I would've for sure killed someone if I saw someone I love in another persons arms. Ahhha.
Damnn violent much. But the orphanage story of khushi and maan was just inspiring. He fell so attached to khushi and that when he left her tahts when he realized he can't live without her and decided to adopt her. It Amazing how some people would not even care, because they're too young to have to came for someone but maan did it.
Thanks for the update and I'm sorry for the late reply.
Now off to chapter 10 :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 10:
Well what can I say, I can understand khushi because arnav basically came out of no where and started demanding things and saying that he likes her, and wants her to be his. But now that arnav has changed I feel like khushi should change her perceptive of arnav as well. He is doing everything for her, what guy would go crazy after a girl. If she keeps this up I feel like he'll loose hope of making khushi his forever. But I don't know why I have a feeling that geet will help arnav in this situation. Since all arnav seems to do is follow khushi and when he stops that's when khushi will realize what she has done and geet will be there to help arnav, Paka plan banega too make khushi khurana to fall in love with arnav singh raizada.

Omg I thought he wouldn't shout when he looks at geet and that's exatcly what happened. Once he looked at her all his anger just bam gone away. Ahah what magic have you done to MK sir geet. But it was just so cute how he was so mesmerized by geet. He didn't even care about what was going around his.he even let pinky go and what a job he gave her. His secretary, but he's right geet will be different than all those secretaries he had before who would run away seeing maan in anger.

Thanks for the update!
Love you
Rafia
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Matlab I replied your review in DFL regarding the song choice!😃



ahh now i get it
am too confused at times
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally updated DFL 67
now only 68A to go
that will take time dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
a wonderful update...looking forward to reading more
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flowers4u

a wonderful update...looking forward to reading more

Thanks for the review dear!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

Chapter 9:

Pinky is lat and I feel like maan is not going to shout at her once he looks at geet. Geet handa is in the building and maan singh khurana you better prepare for the item bomb hahah.
When khushi and Arnav came and khushi Called maan her boyfriend i was like nahii! Like I know she's is his sister and all but geet doesn't and she would've been so sad. Which she was but thank god to pinky who told her the story about maan and khushi. If I was in geets position I would've for sure killed someone if I saw someone I love in another persons arms. Ahhha.
Damnn violent much. But the orphanage story of khushi and maan was just inspiring. He fell so attached to khushi and that when he left her tahts when he realized he can't live without her and decided to adopt her. It Amazing how some people would not even care, because they're too young to have to came for someone but maan did it.
Thanks for the update and I'm sorry for the late reply.
Now off to chapter 10 :)

OMG! My lil sis reviewed! I woke up and the morning and got a surprise when I saw that you updated! Made my morning!😃
Item Bomb?😆 Funny!
You must have been shocked to see Khushi call Maan her boyfriend? Ab Geet kaisi react karegi you must be wondering? Actually I was planning to show a jealous and angry Geet but that would have happened only if she was sure of her feelings but this Geet did not go through the kidnapping by Dev so she is still not ready to face her feelings! So she reacted very sadly! If she was crazily in love with him then she would have tore Khushi apart for calling Maan her boyfriend!

Happy that you loved the orphan story! And even I thought that Maan had to be mature enough to care for a younger sibling but Khushi also should not be too grown up as that an older Khushi would not have bonded with Maan the way I wanted to. So after thinking and rethinking I made them bond when Maan was 20 and Khushi was 13 so she is young enough to get close to him the way I want and that is why Maan went to do MBA so that by the time he is back he is 22, old and mature enough to take care of a younger sibling!😃 See, how much calculation a writer has to do to get the scenes right?😆
Thanks a lot for the review! Made my day!
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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