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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet is mental patient...
Shr locked herself in room...

Asum update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awesome start
eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme start..oh geet is suffering frm the mental disorder,waiting 4 maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
lovely teaser yar
eagerly waiting fr update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
part 1
nice start...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
nice👏👏




geet in mental hospital😲




update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good start, now please complete this one of your work,all the other of your stories you dropped midway.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2


A hazel eye peeped out from behind the half closed door.Dr.Verma instructed other three people there to hide themselves behind door to next room so that the girl can't find them.As per Dr. Verma's promise to the girl to be alone with her


'Geet come to me, c nobody around us. Jst u and me.' Dr.reassured her

After few minutes of wait a teenage girl much scared off around comes out.Scratching her disheveled hair...taking small steps with her shivering legs.With her head down she was in front of doctor...even not looked at doctor once.

'Geet aayo ...' Dr. grabbed her hand lovingly

'Tumhare ghar ?' with hopeful eyes girl questioned her.

'Ha mere ghar...?' Dr. stamped smilingly.

Holding her hand Dr. Verma moved out of hospital premises towards

staff quarters.

New Delhi

In a Posh Area



A Huge Mansion


A small gathering of people.Screaming aloud each one of them had just one phrase on lips 'Bacho saab ji ko..koi roko'.While each eye at roof top of building. And few of them ran toward the stairs to roof in backyard.

'Ruk jaaea...Chote Saab ruk jaaea' two people chasing a man climbed up the stairs.But not able to catch the young man in white Kurta Pyjama.

'Main aa raha hu...Aanya I am coming don't worry..' he just repeated these lines without paying attention to those who were behind him n reached the roof at last



Inside the mansion


Aristocracy in each n every little thing around .An aged lady seemed much disturbed was there sitting on drawing room sofa.Same aristocracy n elegance was there in her how she dressed up. Suddenly a servant screaming aloud came to her 'Madam Ji... Madam Ji...Chote saab.' but before he could complete another servant breathless came with this bad news 'Madam ji...saab ji is severely injured...totally in blood.Harish Aur Ram unke piche gaye thy...but before they could catch..he jumped'

She yelled 'don waste time call the ambulance fast' jumping from sofa

she rushed outside

'Ambulance is on the way..I had called the hospital to make all

arrangements' much disturbed second servant informed her..while both

followed the lady in hurry to outside.


She reached the courtyard where the man jumped from roof and was on floor on his stomach.Few people tried to give him sport and to make him sit on/in the chair until ambulance reaches. Crimson red with blood ground was approving his condition.'chod do mujhe..chodo..' he yelled even in his unconsciousness

'Maan!!Maan..hamara bacha' in a jiffy lady held him in her arms.'Why you do this always.'...'Why the hell it is taking that much time..call ambulance...no no let him take in car jaldi karo...' looking back she screamed aloud.

'Leave her..chod do Aanya ko..I will kill you damn...' He pushed

the lady away with full force and tried to get up but collapsed again.

'Maan...!!!'

In between this screaming siren of ambulance alarmed all. Premedical

staff without wasting time put him on stretcher n tied him with belts so

to stop him to do any self harm.

Lady also joins them n ambulance rushed toward hospital.


Hospital staff was on high alert. He was taken to the emergency. Doctors

saved him with their sincere efforts of two hours


Senior surgeon Dr. Singh came out of Operation Theater...'Doctor how's my child...is he alright now?' worried lady questioned Dr. with hope filled eyes.


'Mrs. Khuraana we saved him..we saved your grandson once again...per kab takk' Dr. put a question to her in reply

'Kya matlab Dr. ?...What do want to say ?' confused lady was not able to understand.

'Mrs. Khuraana first please be seated' he made her feel comfortable.. And lady sits on the sofa in waiting area outside ICU...

'Maan is fine...but for precautions we gonna shift himto ICU.But Mrs.Khuraana you know his condition. Just due to silly reason why r you putting his life in danger ?' Sitting next Dr. consoled her.

'But Doctor ?' a streak of tears rolled down to her cheek .

'This is fourth or fifth time..Maan ne khud ko nuksaan pahu-chaya hai ja koshish ko hai...Imagine if there is no one around him...kya hoga fir...'Dr.cleared

'Dr. is there any other way for him instead of this...?'

'No this is the final option.You have to shift him to hospital...Don think about society.koi kya kahega.don think about your reputation just think about your innocent child.What is his fault.' Dr. tried to make her mind for final decision.

'You are righ doctor .I have to take final decision.Humko aab kissi ki parvaah nahi...But before admitting him to hospital..yeh sure kar lijiye that the hospital should be of very good standard n safe for him.' she sighed approving what doctor advised.


'Oh don worry Mrs. Khuraana Psychiatric n Mental health section of this hospital provide country's best facilities. And you know this hospital is one among top most names.Even we provide best facilities in our carity section.So need not to worry.' He assured her.


'Kaab admit karegay aap unko? ' straightway making herself ready for this she said.


'Just after he comes out of ICU...instead of shifting here we will shift him to that section..' He said 'Okey Mrs. Khuraana I have some important work.As Maan regains his consciousness staff will inform me'and he leaves the place

Lady also gets up and moves toward ICU where her grand son was now ... Humko yeh din bhi dekhna tha.I have lost every thing...can't loose you my child you are the only reason for me to live..' She wiped her tears 'Aab hum ko kissi ki parvaah nahi...If I have to shift you to hospital...Only your and your betterment matters for me...' so she takes final decision now.

This is second part and hope you will like it.I am trying my best to give long and classy updates.But don know I am getting bad response...It is up to you...I almost has decided not to pm any one but will try...Lets c

Sonia

Note: According to rules of contemporary writing .Verb change intentionally according to situation


Chapter 1 <-----

Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Awesome update
OMG!! wat happing with MG
now theyt going to meet in mental asylum
eagerly waiting for next...continue soon
Edited by -Orchid- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start
maan is also his mental state

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