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I was thinking to write prologue for this story even had written few lines. But for a moment my mind stuck somewhere this is not anything about super humans or extra ordinary people. But related to some where normal people you,me or anyone around us.Yes with the twist called Fiction. A normal human,a common man in depression..suffering from harassment of many kinds. Who might have faced or facing unexpected incidents in life. Those episodes directly hit mind heart n soul turning that normal person to something abnormal/mentally unstable for life long or some time depending upon conditions.That persons forgets almost every thing But not that particular incident or happening responsible for his/her condition .What happens next lets find out...
Starting with Chapter One
Will give in small portions as much as I can write
Chapter 1
'Doctor Doctor ...' a middle age woman in nursing attire screaming rushed inside the room.As per the conditions around this was a hospital and that room Doctor's cabin.
Inside Cabin
'Doctor Verma...plz come fast..that patient !! that patient !! wo Hoshiarpur waali...' breathless she completed
'Woh woh kya Anu...what she did again ?' Surprised lady doctor Verma questioned nurse Anu but looking at her condition she decided to check the patient first instead off questioning nurse Let it go challo..let me handle her first..? whole staff is not able to handle a single patient...?' and she leaves. Nurse followed her tried to complete.
'But Doctor she is really strange' nurse complains making face...
'Strange...I think you might have forgotten Anu this is hospital not for Normal people' Irritated with nurse Dr. replied back and especially not for physical ailments but for patient with Mental Disorders n every patient with such disorder is strange..ok ...aur challo aab' she said
Outside Hospital Lab whole staff has been eye witnessing this drama.All of them trying to knock at the door which somebody has locked from inside and this somebody was the same patient for whom Dr Verma was here.
Making way in between gathered crowd Dr. Verma reached at the door.'Dr. Verma dekhiye na...she again did same and the lab assistant Rahul who was with her..she locked him inside washroom before locking lab's main door.' Lab technician Mrs. Kiran said in one go.
'What she locked him in washroom?'
'Yes Dr...luckily Rahul's mobile was in his pocket n he ringed me. He has been trapped there what to do?If she not opens the door...otherwise we have to take help from carpenter to unscrew the door screws' Kiran narrated whole incident.
'Okey wait you all leave the place..wo darr gayi hai itna shor sun kar...Jaante nahi tum sab...just leave ..and you Ram,Suraj (ward boys) and Kiran stay here for my help' she gave instructions.
Dr Verma gently tapped at door Sab challe gaye..koi nahi hai yahan...just me plz open na door'
No response...'plz open it' she requested
'Nahi nahi.Tum Rahul ko bahar nikaal dogi..and he with other people will give me shock again...You are a liar just like others' girl inside room screamed..'fir mujhe uske pass bhej dengay mujhe nahi jaana'
'No I promise you...I will fire all from job...main..main tumko uske pass nahi bhejungi..I will take you to my home with me' Dr. Verma assured her
'Sachi tum sach keh rahi ho...' a cheerful assured voice came from inside this time
'Ha Geet sachi ...I promise'
'Babaji walla promise'
'Ha tumhare Babaji walla promise' Dr.stamped what assurance she demanded.
Just within a jiffy she opened the door.
Sonia
As I mentioned above I will give chapters in small bits too give more regular updates coz sometimes due to less words or when trying to give long updates these short ones remains without posting.
Plz tell me if it is okey you liked it or not...Comment to encourage me...A different concept and a different approach
Note: According to rules of contemporary writing rules.Verb changes according to situation intentionally...
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hey guys... here is my new thread...my previous threads got removed so links will not be opened... so will pm you update link soon.. wait for a...
WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...
Prologue Chachu am not going marry with gaav ki chori Maan her name is ge Maan : chachi aap hi smjhayo na I mean mein thehra city ka
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