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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing part
loved it
geet put her life in danger to save maan
hope she agree to stay in KV
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 19
awesome dear...
nice...
oh so Geet pushed Maan away from getting hurt...
but she got hurt...
spouse?
cont soon dear...
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hello , lakshu,priya,lily,dona,mauaa,indu,rashmi,sona N mona...😊

Updating early today .. 😊
going to attend a function .. 😊

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Arre wah...

Jaldi Jaldi dedo...



Me waiting
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arey waah babie chalo ab jaldi jaldi dedo
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 20


Maan was sitting with Dadima in d couch worried * he didn't have any idea how they coax her to stay in KV * it was not to be possible task for them * Geet , who didn't want to see them won't accept this * Dadima placed her hand on Maan's and looked at him , both have same question in their mind .

Dadima: Maan , kya Geet manegi humari baat?

Maan: I don't know Dadima ,,, mujhe bhi yahi darr hei .

Dadima: fir? hum Arjun ko bhi bol chuke hei .

Maan : kuch bhi ho Dadima , mai Geet ko ess haal mei akele nahi rahne dunga.

Dadima: lekin ye asaan nahi hoga.

Both lost in their worries * time was slipping , Pandeyji came and handed GS's belongings to Maan and left after staying few min. it was late eve when Geet opened her eyes * she looked around and find Dadima and Maan there * Dadima came near her , caressed her head lovingly and asked.


Dadima: Geet beta , how r u feeling now ?

Geet was looking at her confused then towards Maan who was looking at her worried in blood stained clothes * she recollected d incident which was happened at d site * she was inspecting d installation of Transformer at d back side of building and then got a call from BM so she moved from there * when she was coming her eyes got that sight * some cemented blocks wr felling down from 4/5th floor where labours wr working * Maan was talking to a client right below there * without losing a sec she ran towards them and pushed them away but few hit her leg and she fell down * her head hit d ground and after that she didn't know what had happened * she came in sense in OT then she felt extreme pain in leg and head * she find some more minor injuries on her body * after dressing and plaster she was sleeping * Maan's condition was showing that he brought her here .


Geet painfully asked Maan: how r u and that man ?

Maan was stunned ,,, still she was thinking about other , he replied : wr r fine , but why u put ur life in danger ? It could be fatal .

Geet just smiled painfully but her smile pierced his and Dadima's hearts * both wr chocked and lost for words.

Geet: I have to talk Arjun and Pandeyji .


Dadima : Arjun was here ,,, ur wr sleeping so we sent him for his work * Pandeyji too came here and handed us ur office bag * u take rest beta and don't take any tension .


Geet was lost in her thoughts ... ab kaise manage karoongi ye sab ? ku baar baar musibaten mere paas chali aati hein ? meri kismet mei sirf dard sahana hi likha hei Babaji ne .


Maan and Dadima understood her worries but didn't say anything to her * they too wr very tense thinking about d next move ,, her shifting to KV. Maan told Dadima to got home .


Maan: Dadima u need ur meds and proper rest so plz go home , I 'm here for her.

Dadima: u too need a change beta , i'll send ur dress with driver .

Maan: hmmm,, OK .


Geet listened their talk and interrupted.

Geet: Mr MK , u did a lot , thanku very much for that , now i'll manage so plzz both of u go home .

Dadima and Maan looked at her hurt , they knew it would come * Dadima try to pacify her.


Dadima: Geet beta , we knew u won't accept this but in current situation plzz compromise with us , OK ,don't relate it to past, think that u got hurt at our site saving Maan and our client and we r doing this for an emplyee * beta tumhari jagah koi aur hota to hum uske liye bhi kerty ,,so plz let us do .


Geet: uske liye aap sab ne jitna ker diya wo sufficient hei ab aap yahan se jaiye.

Maan brought Dadima in d lobby and told her to go * he assured her that he'll handle her . Dadima left from there helplessly .

Maan came back in d room and sat there quietly without looking at Geet * seeing him again there Geet spoke in a harsh tone.

Geet: Mr MK I told u to go then why r u here ?

Maan: sleep Geet , don't think who is here , i'm not disturbing u .

Geet: bas bahot ho gaya , ab aap log yahan se jao, mujhe nahi chahiye aaki help.

Now Maan also was losing his temper on her stubbornness and replied in same manner .


Maan: i'm not going any where , there is no use of argument over it , sleep quietly .

Geet: OK , then i'll go .

She tried to get down from d bed in anger but Maan's loud words rooted her there.

Maan: dare u Geet , don't put ur foot on d floor * he came close to her and in a go * don't move from here ,, samjhi tum .

Geet was looking at him with wide eyes ,,, how could he scold her then her expressions changed in to anger .

Geet: I'll ,,, i'll Mr MK ,, u can't force me and she tried again to get down.

Maan held her shoulders tightly to stop her there and gave a hard look .

Maan: tum kahin nahi jaogi aur na hi mai jaunga ,,, tumhe jo kerna tha tumne ker liya ab mai jo chaunga wo karunga ,,, don't move from here.


Geet fumed over his authority : I hate u and I don't want ur help ,, go away.

Maan: no ,, ,I won't . I didn't invite u to save me ,, why u put ur life in danger to save me if u hate me ?

Geet : tumhari jagah koi aur hota mei tab bhi yahi kerti .


Maan: I know , aur koi aur bhi tumhare liye yahi sab kerta , jo mai ker raha hun * I know u hate me Geet , I know it very well ,,, I deserve that .

Geet mere gunah ke liye tum mujhe sazza de do ,, mujhe maar daalo ,, jo dil kare wo sazza do ,,,lekin apne aap ko ku takleef de rahi ho * Geet tumne ku bachaya mujhe ,, marr jane diya hota , wo shayad jyada accha hota .

Ek baat acche se sun lo Geet , jab tak tum puri tarah se theek nahi ho jati humare sath rahogi KV mei *( Geet opened her mouth to oppose but maan cut her ) chuup , bilkul chup * agar tum KV mei nahi rahi to mai aur Dadima tumhare sath rahenge tumhare ghar mei ,, samjhi tum ab soch lo acche se ,, tumhare theek hone tak ya to tum humre sath ya hum tumhare sath .


Geet: what !!!!

Maan: yes , Arjun se baat ho gai hei Dadima ki ,,, tum kal se humare sath rahogi KV mei aur agar nahi to hum shift honge tumhare ghar .

Geet: No o o o .

Maan: yes,, now sleep like a good girl ,, aur agar mujhe maarne ko dil ker raha hei to bolo kuch du mera ser phodne ko ?


Geet gave him an angry glare ,, she was fuming in anger she didn't say anything but in rage she threw all d things which wr placed on side table * tears roll down from her eyes in extreme rage and helplessness and Maan's heart cried seeing her like that .


That night passed in pain and worries * Geet slept quietly but she was very disturbed coz next day was again a hard day for her.


Precap --- Geet in KV ...


Part - 21


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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🥳kitna garam garam mahol bangayi hai indono ke beech😆😆geet ko manane keliye maan ko angry bird ka avatar lena pada.
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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😆😆valli tu tho galat jagah par first aagayi
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Aaj priya do do Jagat firstaayi bina cheating liye...😉

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