MG~ SS~The Torment- THREAD-3 - UPDATED Pt 22/Pg 129/26th Feb. ... ...

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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







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Character Sketch



Maan Singh Khurana -- 26yrs old
A businessman , born n brought up in d cradle of happiness * lost his parents 4

yrs back but handled d business with d help of his Grand Mother who is very

precious to him * Very deciplined, rough and high headed person * have lots of

property and business in India and US * lives life on his turms * well built

,handsome and dream of every girl but he gives damn to them * loves his

classmate and settled in US.



Geet Singh Handa -- 23yrs old
A very beautiful, brilliant ,simple,sober and matured girl * an orphan , lost her

parents few yrs back * an (ECE) graduate, lived in hostel * some selfish relatives at d

name of family .



Savitri Devi
... Maan's G Mother , co-owner of KC.
Brijveer Shingh Handa
Geet's cousin

Rajji / Tito
Geet's cousins


Darji

Meera / Prem
Geet's classmates and friends .

LateYash and Ritu Khurana... Maan's parents , friends of Geet's parents.

Late Mahinder and Rano Handa... Geet's parents .

Sam(sameera)... Maan's GF.



Some others according to story...





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hi babie ,,,😃
cngrts 4 nu thrd
hw r u doing,,??
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congrats for the new thread dear
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi babie ,,,😃

cngrts 4 nu thrd
hw r u doing,,??


Hi lily..
where wr u..??😲
aaj koi nahi hei..


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maan s nw so desperate 2 noe geets mystry
even epmloyd adi 4 dis prpose
nw dadi s in hspital
vil he blame geet again,,??
gud going babie,,,,👏
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

maan s nw so desperate 2 noe geets mystry

even epmloyd adi 4 dis prpose
nw dadi s in hspital
vil he blame geet again,,??
gud going babie,,,,👏


🤗 Thanks dear..
oyeee lily, red ku dikh rahi ho..??😲

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