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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..maan shocked 2know about dadi thru geet
he pleaded geet 2 b with him
though she is not feeling gud 2 b with him she did..
n now she promised 2 meet dadi till she recovers..
they will meet frequently from now..n geet will know them better..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Babieee beautifully written Emotional update yar:)
loved it a lot:)
jhappiisss yarooo:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update.geet is in a confusing situation-one side is her anger which is justified nd other side her goodness nd she is stuck between the two.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dadima was feeling so guilty after coming to knowing the truth and now that she saw Geet she is feeling the weight of guilt even heavier.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
geet called maan to inform about dadi maan asked her stay there till he comes
maan asked her to stay there for some time when she was going to leave the hospital
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago



LAKSHU,PRIYA,LILY,DONA,MAUAA,SONA AND MONA

Thumper: Whatcha gonna call ‘im? Bambi’s Mother: Well, I think I’ll call him Bambi. Thumper: Bambi… Yep, I guess that’ll do all right. 

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Posted: 11 years ago
hello meri doston🤗
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Hi priya... 🤗
red ku ho..??😲
Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 16


Maan came out and msg Adi to come in hospital to stay with Dadima * Geet came out to go and Maan followed her but she stopped him to come .

Geet: I don't want ur help Mr MK , stay here with ur Dadima , she needs u .

Maan: Geet , plzz, let me drop u .

Geet: huhh, plzz word tumhe suit nahi kerta aur kisi ki help kerna tum logo ko aata nahi .


She moved away from there leaving a disappointed Maan there * her every word pushed him in d pit of guilt * he was helplessly watching her retreating figure and then came back in waiting area with heavy heart thinking how his one wrong decision shattered everything * d life was easy and still before meeting her but now d eagerness to see her and talk to her taking toll on him * his condition was more worsen then before * he sat there lost and came in sense when Adi came close to him and called him after hrs. He asked about Dadima's condition and Maan told him all.


On d other side Geet was also confused * MK and his Dadima's behavior was forcing her to think , why they wr so eager to meet her ? How they knew that i'm dead and why wr they feeling bad now ? The rebuffed her that day then what happened now ?Babaji !! why did u put me in this city to face these ppl? What do u want ? She took few things from near by shop and came back home * she was feeling very low , talked to Meera and slept without taking her meal * next day was working day .


Dadima was discharged after 2 days and wished to meet Geet but Maan said that that she is on her work place so it is better to meet her at weekend at her house and he himself brought her there. Adi gave him all info regarding Geet everyday which eased his aching heart. At fri Maan came to visit d site and met with Arjun but his main concern was Geet * at BM he met her and convey Dadima's wish to meet her if she was OK at her place .


Again these ppl and her past * she was becoming frustrated with all these .. ku fir se ye sab?

Geet: aap logo ka prob kya hei ?

Maan: Geet , for Dadima , plzz.


She threw her hands in air aahh,,, and then replied angrily .. OK, last time and after that don't cross my path .


His heart ached seeing her hatred towards them * how vulnerable he was at that time ? Ppl waited hrs to meet him but here he was fighting for a single wish to meet her once * he returned back with a relief. Geet too decided to finish this drama .. It is better to face d situation and solved d puzzle. That night was very long for all .


Next day Maan and Dadima wr at her home after BF * Geet was all prepared for them but when she heard d door bell her heart skipped a beat in nervousness. They entered in d room and sat quietly * Geet brought coffee for them and settled in front of them .


Dadima: Aap akele rahati hei yahan?

Listening her words Geet thought that still they r thinking about her BF and smiled noddeing her head in disappointment.

Geet: aap logo ke hisaab se aur kise hona chahiye mere sath?

Dadima: koi friend nahi share kerty house?

Geet : friend ya BF ? jo janna chahati hei aap wo openly puch sakti hei.


Maan felt ashamed at her sarcasm and lowered his head .


Dadima:Geet ,hum janna chahate hei ki aapne uss raat ghar ku choda ? essi kya wajah thi ki aako esse ghar se bhaagna pada aur tumhari family tumhe maarna chahati thi ?


Geet: ye sab jaan ker aap kya karengi ? aur jo ho gaya usse aap badal nahi sakti .


Dadima got up and sat near her with teary eyes and placed her hand on her shoulder.

Dadima: Geet , we know that we r guilty and threw u in hands of death in our anger and disappointment * d damage which we had done is un repairable and now we can only repent * we didn't saw ur truth and left u to suffer in our MU * our own blood tricked us (she looked at Maan) and ur refusal strengthened his lie which broke all our hopes* we misunderstood u beta and in that upshot we ashamed d humanity throwing u in d hands of beasts. We can't redo d things but we wanted to assure u that u r safe here .


Geet beta aapko humse darne ki jaroorat nahi hei , agar aapna sach chupana chahati hei to hum kisi ko nahi kahenge , aapko apni zindgi jeene ka pura haq hei .


Geet felt relief listening her words but she can't trust these ppl so easily * somewhere she had a fear in her heart .

Geet: I don't know what is ur intention and why r u here ? Everything is over , u and ur GSon have ur own life and I have mine ,then why r u disturbing me ? plzz live and let me live.


Dadima: we won't hurt and disturb u beta but d dreadful news of ur demise broke us and somewhere we wr also responsible for that * we knew half d truth and wanted to know d rest .


Geet understood that MK had told her about his lie and that's why he was ashamed but it's too late now.

Geet: jo ho gaya wo badal nahi sakta to sach janker kya karengi aap ?

Dadima: plz beta , hum janna chahate hei .

Having no option Geet decided to unveil d past in front of them .


Geet got up from her place and came near d window and started to narrate what had happened behind them bcoz of MK's lie .

She was opening every fold of that night and both d souls were dying in shame and guilt * Dadima was shedding tears and Maan's eyes wr tightly closed * it was unbearable for him * his hands wr tightly fold in fists and he dug his nails in his palm to suppress his pain .


Precap ---chapter closed ... ..



Part - 17



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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