MG~ SS~The Torment- THREAD-3 - UPDATED Pt 22/Pg 129/26th Feb. ... ... - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
kya itna jaldi peechha choot jayega...

superb n beautiful update...

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thank u very much fr d lovely update...

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Lakshu,priya,lily,dona,mauaa,indu,rashmi,sona N mona 😛


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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 18



Days started rolling and life came on normal track for all but Maan and Dadima's souls wr in burden * Maan became more reserved and limited to his work but one thing became an essential part of his life .. Geet and her care * every morning and eve he rang Adi to get d news about Geet * he instructed Adi to take care of her * now Geet,Adi and Pandeyji wr well knit buddies and this thing was a big relief for Maan that she had some caring person around her .

Dadima was getting calls from d servant of haweli that Brij was troubling new care taker of lands but coz of her health prob she didn't call Adi regarding that and at eve she got again same complaint * she called Adi but his number was switched off * Dadima was unknown that Maan had placed Adi at his SF project.


Dadima too didn't talk much with Maan after that day but she was witnessing his all activities and knew that he was also repanting for his guilt * d motherly heart can't resist her child's pain * at night when Maan was doing his tai-chi Dadima came in his gym to talk to him . Maan saw Dadima there and sat quietly with lowered eyes * Dadima sat near him .

Dadima:humne kabhi nahi socha tha ki hume esse nazzre jhuka ker rahana padega aur tumhe bhi esse dekhna padega .

Maan hugged her and pleaded : I'm sorry Dadima , I disappointed you .


Dadima: it's too late beta , I warned u but u didn't give any heed to my words even u overlook ur late parent's wish and see what had happened * OK, leave it , i'm here to talk u for some work * I'm unable to contact to Adi do, u have any idea about him , his phone is switched off.

Maan: Adi ? why ? Is there any prob in Delhi?

Dadima: not in delhi but in HP * he appointed a caretaker for our lands but now he was refusing now do that * I talked to him but he is refusing to continue * d servant of haweli informed us that Brij was troubling him and threatening him that's why he wanted to leave this place * we wanted to send Adi there to find out some solutions .


Maan became furious at d name of Brij and this was d good opportunity to teach him a good lesson .

Maan: Dadima , let me handle this prob * i'll talk to Adi and that caretaker and if needed we'll find some other man to look after d lands .

Dadima , mai Adi ko contact kerta hoon aur jaroorat padi to mai India chala jaunga.

Dadima: theek hei , hum chaltey hei , dinner ke liye aapki wait karenge , hope u won't disappoint me.

Maan: je , aap chaliye mei fresh hoker aata hoon.


Maan got up lost in thoughts and murmured .. Geet to tumhare samne aa nahi aasakti lekin mai to aa sakta hoon Brij Handa , ab dekho mai tumhara kya haal kerta hoon... He took dinner with Dadima and retired in his study * called Adi and discussed for long .


Here in Arjun's house Annie was going to India for a month and she would come back with her parents * Arjun's marriage date was fixed with Annie after a months* after d by pass surgery Annie's mom wanted her marriage ASAP and she requested Arjun's parents to come US for this . Arjun also wanted his Dad support in his spreading business and insisted him to take VRS.

Geet was busy in her work and settled properly * there was one more month for her work here and to decide to shift in hostel again or to live in PG * this full time work gave her good amount of money and she could do part time after her classes if Arjun agreed * now she was enjoying her work .

Maan's mind and heart wr completely addicted to Geet's thoughts * his life divided in two parts work and Geet * when he got lil time between work his thoughts went to Geet and he rang Adi to get some news about her even he asked did she take her lunch or not and Adi was surprised at his ruthless Boss who never bother who is standing beside him but for this girl his care had no limits. Unknown to all sometime Maan followed them to make him assure that she is fine and doing well * her smiling face and antics sooth his heart * he captured many pics and moves of her in his phone and watched them at his bed time before going to sleep * only that time his lips taste a sweet smile .


Maan was very relieved bcoz Adi was around her but for that B****** Brij he needed Adi for few days though Pandeyji was as good as Adi but in Adi's absence who would give him news ?


He called Adi in his office and discussed about d HP prob told him to get a person from Brij's gang who could go against him in greed .

Maan: Adi , "Iron cut iron", stay there and try to find out d right person and leave rest of on them * their greed dug their graves. I won't spare that ppl who tried to kill Geet .


They wr engrossed in their talk when Sasha opened d office door to came in and heard Geet's name from Maan . Both became silent at once and Maan shoot an angry glare at her .


Maan: yes Sasha , why r u here , I think we don't have any meeting ?

Sasha: yes MK , but we got some mails from investors who wanted to visit d site before their next instalment of payment .

Maan: OK , fix a visit and arrange meeting at d site office.

Sasha: OK., but when ?

Maan thought for a sec and replied : day after TM , Friday .

Sasha: OK, she left giving them a sheepish smile .

She came out but d word Geet was ringing in her mind * after long she heard any girl's name from Maan's mouth * at d time of his affair with Sam she heard her name many times in a day but after his brack up she never heard any name * that time also she burnt with that B**** name * she was on cloud 9 after knowing Maan and Sam's break up and started spreading her wings to get d attention of her hotty Boss OR Batchie * Sasha knew Maan's family but she didn't hear Geet name before.


Adi went after after some time and booked his ticket for India * He informed Geet and Pandeyji that he was going to meet his parents in Delhi * All became busy in their respective works and d day of meeting arrived * Geet was unware about d meeting bcoz these type of investors meeting belong to KC not to Arjun's Co.


Maan was again going to face Geet at d site and he was restless from morning * he was in d site office of KC and investors wr coming one by one * Manish-a was attending d clints and providing d details of progressing work * all came out to take d inspection round of d work * Maan was with d team but his eyes wr searching Geet ... kahan ho tum Geet?


All wr at Gr floor and busy in talking * some wr standing in stilt in 2-3 groups and few wr in open * Maan was busy in talk with a client when both got a strong push , they moved away from there trembling and tried hard to control their bodies then all heard a loud sound followed by painful cry .


Precap... Maan in hospital ..


Part - 19
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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daadi and maan ... pachtaave me doobe jaa rahe hain... good... but i do feel sad for them too... they hadnt anticipated such hurtful things would happen... though that doesnt decrease there sins...

dadaima ki yeh waali pic achi hain...😃

maan ki pic... just superb!!🤢

ab aayi hain baari brij ki dhulaai ki... yes... ab aayega mazaa...

sasha ko kyu laayi ab?? dekha jaay tho aise namoonon ke kartooth se maaneet aur paas aathe hain😉

maaneet going to meet again... but beech main yeh dhamaka kyu?? ab kya geet phir maan ko le jaayegi hospital like dadi???
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hii guys... hw r u all??
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Posted: 11 years ago

hii.. do u read/follow ff- winter's end by mina420?
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Originally posted by: mauaa


hii.. do u read/follow ff- winter's end by mina420?

no dear

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