THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

😳 Total BLUSH update... Loved it

Maan and Geet controlling own desires and also respecting others feeling too... Geet actually asked him about ahmm ahmm thing😆 jhalli She is... But one good thing about asking this question is Maan came back to his senses... After so many days they slept peacefully... Loved each and everything... Their Talks, Their romance, Their control, I love the whole package Maaneet+Avi 😉
Maaneet ke package mein Avi kaha se aa gayi..😆😆
Aaahhh after so many days DevTara⭐️ I missed them both... Dev handling maan's work too and Tara working with her father... 👏 Sacrificing for others... Amazingly written

Thank you so much for PM... And Wonderful update

Glad you liked it.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

AVIII

Muahhh
Awesomly awesome lovely Update :)
i liked Dev Tara scene too :)
jhapppiisss

o meri Sona re Sona re Sona..
glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely part. The Maneet scene from the last chapter was like a teaser, and today was the real show. Though Geet was all ready to move forward for Maan's love, he stepped back so as to make the first time special.
Dev and Naina's romance was fun, waiting for more in the next part. I would also like to know about megha's romance and their feelings.

Thank you. Megha's story is still not done. Let's hope her ending is happy.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update so cute how they could not keep their hands of each other oved how both lost control until geet innocent questions made maan realized what he almost did loved how he started teasing her to get her out of feeling sad because they stopped and nt and dev that was so cute loved how she was blowing on his face and loved how she teased him awesome update beautifully done.

Thanks Kathrina😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

another lovely update how geet innocently asked maan and he falling more for her trust on him just superb.Geet without hestitation has kept all her doubts infront of maan 😳


bechara ek hi jhapp tum mujhe pagal kardogi😆😆😆😆


after a long time happy to see dev tara

Thank you hai Priyaji😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Congo for new thread

ooops maan control ,geet fear n tara naughtiness wow
Amazing super duper update loved the maaneet passion n love

Thank you Fairy😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

Mujhe pata tha mere Dev Tara jarur ayenge.😆



Both khuranas behaving like madmaan. but surprise- Maan is more besharam may be because Geet is too shy.

Lovely update Avi.

Thanks Mannu😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

beautiful update
finally got to read dev-tara part, was missing their love story
maan, go slow man😳😳

At last,😆 one reader who wants Maan to go slow..😆
Thanks Pooja
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameeraalikhan

good update avi😊

maan dream came true
geets innocent questions maans love for her
bournvita bb2b
yay dev tara r back
lovely song tumse hi

Bournvita... 😆
Sirf noticed by you...👍🏼
Thanks Ameera
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

🤣 i had mentioned this conversation in my last comment... and see here she did ask him... u seriously are best writer...


Thanks Krati😃 So nice of you to say so...
maan loves her so much... always her happiness comes first for him... blessing of babaji are with them. thats y they have found each other...

a moment of passionate love and in another naughtiness... really bournvita!!!!! next time it would be chocolate... 😆
There is a story for me even in this, so I am going to drag you guys thru' it.😆
Yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi!

iss line par to pura serial tikka tha. aur CHUP, BILKUL CHUP!!! missing those days so badly😭

a peaceful sleep...⭐️ they so deserved it... jab se maan wapas aaya hain london se tab se lekar aab tak kabhi bhi chain se nahi so paye... now they the chance. just hope darji wouldn't come in outhouse or God Forbid pinky!!!! 😆

Avi hai bachane ko😆 no fear..
wait i didn't thank you for sending maan HP too. as brij is already there... thanks . m sure everything will be f9 now

my lovely dev... all the while knew it would be his I-star... so apt para of song for devtara...
Thank you for noticing that. I thought that it would fit Dev better so put in a part for them too.
how much i had missed them... their playfulness love brightens my day..

Thanks Krati. Glad you liked it.

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