THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: ramarora
really love this understanding maan always keeping geet's wishes and comfort before his
waiting to read more

Thanks for commenting. Please keep supporting Geet writers.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

waise 74th part ka to password dede tab tak... jab baaki threads mein post karungi... tab unka dedena...

btw... do you now reet is back with in love with my enemy... have u read it???

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
Maan controlled himself.. after love confession.. their desires for each other are increasing... Some times feel bad for maan..😛
Kyun? Is he not lucky that he has such a beautiful BB2b? Good things come to those who wait..😳
poor maan has got innocent seductress... 😉 liked it when he understood her silent wish.. n will make everything special for her.. Dev Tara.. khuranas passionate lovers hain.. 😊

Thanks Teju

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romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Chapter 70: Everything I do

Lovely banner!!! I definitely don't mind this song :D I believe every romantic loves this song :)

Thanks for the PM!!

Killer, deadly looks!! Dunno whats gonna happen of Geet but I definitely am going thud thud thud

Be it Chotu, twin connection, choice of song, Dadi, loved every bit of it!!

Geet's dress choice was also a nice one girl!!

This was such a sweet one :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: anant90
nice update..😳😳😳
I like this song..😃

Thank you😃

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romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Chapter 71: Saiyyara

Thank you for the PM once again :-)

What a choice you have got for passwords lol

Aw!!! Chhhooo Chweeettt

No big words, just simple feelings and emotions. Amazingly beautiful. Completely apt selection of song yet again and a bike ride followed by beach! Cute, lovely and beautiful!!!

Loved your use of "statue" :-) your Maan had great control ;-)

Can't imagine how hurtful the parting away is gonna be for both of them!!

Keep writing babes!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Alamelu
Fantastic update loved the romance between Maneet. Loved the chemistry between dev and Tara too. Glad maan got reminded of the trust geet had on him. Also how innocent was geet to ask him about the first time

It is not something she can ask anyone else is it?

Thanks😃

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romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Chapter 72

Thanks for the PM Avi :-)

Wow!!! It is reminiscent of their series days!!! Thanks for the fight :)

Salman Khurana!! SRK fits as it is 😳

So true, happiness does not last long!! Not even in Avi's stories!! At such a moment you had to bring in Brij, din't you!!! What a timing girl!!! Oh so he is not a brother at all, the jerk. Oh damn!!! He is such an arse 😡 and now he is landing in Hoshiyarpur right at the same time as Geet 😲

Finally Dadi knocked some sense in MSK's head. Nice sweet cute update yet again. Loved the way dadi tried playing Mum while being a Dadi and how Maan managed to lighten Geet's mood. Eagerly waiting for time to get to the next chapter but definitely sad, on the other hand to know I won't get to read more on it very soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: gshruti
awesome update
n d song selection was so so so good🤗
its 1 of my fav song.
dev tara part was so short dear .but i like it.
n in maneet part i was blushing all d time while reading☺️

Thanks😃 Shruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: abinaya.m
Hey Avi,
Wonderful, marvelous, fantastic It was sooo beautifully romantic and Its really nice that maan understood so much abt geet and that they head over heels in Love and I must say it was a very steamy update wid both khuranas being really romantic and the song selection was very apt loved it waiting eagerly for ur next
Tc
Abinaya

Thanks Abinaya. It is necessary to have a good understanding of each other which is what I was trying to show. Glad you liked it.