THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 16

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

Amazing part..maaneet are to crazy for each other and geet is trying to come out from her shell and show maan her longing..😳😳..i read it 5 times and feel more addicted..pls cont soon..will be waiting😉

Originally posted by: muskanp

Already read it so many times
Simply amazing

Very beautifully written
Oh my my Munda almost lost it
Blush blush

Jhali gave in so sweetly & her adorable innocent question
😆
Perfect timing 😡
Bechara humara kya hoga

Tara's surprise wAs so romantic
Was missing them seriously
Loved t update

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

will u make this face it i ask u "update do na"😳

Originally posted by: honeygrape

awesommme part Avi...and dev tara is back...

lovee the trust geet has on her maan... she s ready to shed all her inhibitions and is ready for whatever makes him happy😊 lovvv the understanding they share...

and comin to dev - tara part, glad that they are back😃

Originally posted by: spvd

part 74
awesome dear...
lovely...
very very lovely...
Maan and Geet both are not able to control themselves...
but Geet's innocent question made him to stop himself...
so sweet...
wow Dev and Tara...
Tara is a naughty one...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

very beautiful part avi...

loved maaneet's passionate yet tender romance and dev-tara's passionate yet voilent romance

glad that they are back...missed them a lot...thanx

omg...geet to sach me bambi hai...how innocent she was while asking that question...even awestruck maan also...i liked that maan did not go ahead even geet gave in her submission...they both trust & love so much that they respected each other...

awesommme part Avi...and dev tara is back...

loved it very much

cont soon

Originally posted by: fffanatic

Beautiful update
both the couples are too cute
geet is total jhalli and maan toh hai hi maan
I-star came to give dev a surprise so cute of her
maan went to hp to give a surprise there
surprise update..hehe
geet is real innocent and maan is real besharam...truly made for each other
maan go give the laddoos to darji and pataofy him sirf mishty ko patane se kaam nahi chalega
I love this mahi mahi updates they are cute and light hearted enjoy them throughout
keep writing avi
thanku for updating

Originally posted by: SonalikaSingh

god ! it was so passionate. avi, u have a fetish for writing passionate scenes. moreover the first time emotions are so beautifully described. men and women behave differently when it comes to physical relationship. u have so nicely described both the aspects. keep us good work Avi ! waiting for more😛

Originally posted by: LILY111144

geet nd her innocent qs,,,,rdy 2 giv 4 maan

maan ko timely hosh aa gayee,,,,😆😆

lov deir passion ,,,,u r master of such scenes,,,,😳

dev tara back in action,,,,😉

again osm updtt,,,,cngrts dear,,,,👏

Originally posted by: singh24

dear..🤗