THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 15

Originally posted by: paponecon

same comments from the previous part..reminded me...kya kahu..all these moments...

Originally posted by: jasraj123

lovely and passionate update😳😳😳😳
both brothers r on go avi😆😆😆😆
love the way geet accepted what maan was doing eventhough her mind was trying to stop😉😉😉😉

and her question will i bleed alot😆😆😆😆😆omg shows how naive she is and was enough to put mr msk's passion on hold
seriously i love them the way they r and how they can hold themselves back with so much love and passion

it was nice to read devtara after so long

yeh to dono hi besharm hain😆😆😆

omggg maaneet romance on stop now😕😕😕 can't really say much as story has to move but as i said before i can never get bore of reading maaneet.

i tried sooo much but alas did not work😆😆😆

Originally posted by: micky11

Lovely part.

Though Geet was all ready to move forward for Maan's love, he stepped back so as to make the first time special. the trust and love goes with each other. They missed each other but this is the way lovelife is.

Dev and Naina's romance was fun

Originally posted by: crazydream

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Geet aaj kal kuch jyaada bold ho rahi hai. ;-) Sab Maan ka asar hai.
N Maan iss mauke ka fayda utha raha hai. Loved Maaneet scenes. They were hot.
Geet thinking it as a,dream. Woh bhi fayda utha rahi hai Maan ke shirtless hone ka.

Maan teasing her a,lot. N then her Pov abt Maan's looks. Maan pleased to hear that.

Maan understood that he has to take things slow.

Dev-Tara part. Tara upto some naughtiness. Want a little more of them. Pls

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: annbell

very romantic update ..

maan n geet .. dey are just awesome ..

geet's dialogues were superb .. 😆 ..

i loved it wen maan silently prayed to god to get dem married asap .. 😆 ..

n dev .. tara .. dey are back ..

loved it ..

Originally posted by: chavvi16

oh my things are getting heated up
not only for maneet but dev tara too
phew that was close call for maneet
but of course he wouldnt have taken that finaly step
he would have snapped outta it
and he did with her question
thank god or was it
nah i rather they not rush to full intimacy yet

Thanks for understanding the depth of their love. He won't do anything until she is fully ready for it.

let them take time to get used to this
though not too long
there is only that much maan can control himself
and with her being there sure dont help his control
like he keeps saying yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi
mujhe toh lagta hai yeh already pagal ho chuke hain
aur kya pagal honge right
dont know why you were so worried about this chapter
did it beautifullyI was nervous that people would not get what I was trying to show here but as always my readers have surprised me by their understanding and love for these characters.
their passion and love for one another
and also how they reined in that passion
haiyye what a scene that was by end of it
dreamy hot passionate sizzling what not
not to forget dev tara yaar
their romance was back on track too
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: vandy28

once again a beautfl n romantic updte...was missing dev n tara...loved dre part...

no words fr maan n geet love n d way u wrttn it so beautfly...

n beautfl song tum se hi...apt fr d updte...thnx fr accss

Originally posted by: muskanp

Going to read again 😉