maneet with difference #3 new poem add pg21 on 5/2 14

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---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: dqno1

Beautiful..👏

Haal-e-dil Geet ka bohut khoob bayaan kiya Nishu.

Lovely.😃

phool aur bhi hai gulistaan main

nazar un par bhi bayaan karo,huzoor

is tarah na meri

mahnet ko jayaa karo😆

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---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: -Orchid-
nishu...lovely poems

thats it😭

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daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

very nice poems dear...
specially poems on bandhan...
😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

lovely...

u describe Geet's feelings very beautifully...

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Rashmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Nishu I have no doubt about you being a fabulous poetess

why are you asking you now if you are good poetess or not

I admit that m not that brilliant to understand the depth of every poem but still I like your writing

you are superb

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Rashmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

its for bandhan
ff by tellyme

surat-e- haal ,
dil ka mere ,
main tujhe bayaan, kar nahi sakti !

woh koun si hai chah teri
jo phir se,mod degi raha teri
hai ruh betaab meri,
sun ne ko chah teri
main chalne ko shole pe
hu tayaar
agar ,isse mil jaaye mujhe
phir se tera dewaano sa pyaar
aakhiri saans ,bhi meri
na sun paaygi aah meri
karte hue puri chah teri

rok nahi sakti !
ab yeh duniya mujhe
main deewani hu teri
mera aaj aisa hona bhi
ik,
pyaar ki nishaani hai teri!

tu bol,ek baar
har jaayu main ye sansaar
tu dil main rahe
toh jinda hai hum
warna ,yeh saanse kho jaaye
nahi hai iska bhi gum

just superb

these lines are telling about a determined geet who is not going to take her steps back at any cost

and will do anything for her chhote thakur

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sona rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

its for bandhan
ff by tellyme

surat-e- haal ,
dil ka mere ,
main tujhe bayaan, kar nahi sakti !

woh koun si hai chah teri
jo phir se,mod degi raha teri
hai ruh betaab meri,
sun ne ko chah teri
main chalne ko shole pe
hu tayaar
agar ,isse mil jaaye mujhe
phir se tera dewaano sa pyaar
aakhiri saans ,bhi meri
na sun paaygi aah meri
karte hue puri chah teri

rok nahi sakti !
ab yeh duniya mujhe
main deewani hu teri
mera aaj aisa hona bhi
ik,
pyaar ki nishaani hai teri!

tu bol,ek baar
har jaayu main ye sansaar
tu dil main rahe
toh jinda hai hum
warna ,yeh saanse kho jaaye
nahi hai iska bhi gum

Nishuuu jhappiisss
awesomly awesome :)
mindblowing poem yar:)

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---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

@ sona

and for u

lotsss of papisss

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hi dear

how are u

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sona rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: ---nishu---
@ sona
and for u

lotsss of papisss

-------------------------------

hi dear
how are u

me f9 yar:)
but OL frm phn so aaann its :(

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

its for bandhan

ff by tellyme

surat-e- haal ,
dil ka mere ,
main tujhe bayaan, kar nahi sakti !

woh koun si hai chah teri

jo phir se,mod degi raha teri

hai ruh betaab meri,

sun ne ko chah teri

main chalne ko shole pe

hu tayaar

agar ,isse mil jaaye mujhe

phir se tera dewaano sa pyaar

aakhiri saans ,bhi meri

na sun paaygi aah meri

karte hue puri chah teri

rok nahi sakti !

ab yeh duniya mujhe

main deewani hu teri

mera aaj aisa hona bhi

ik,

pyaar ki nishaani hai teri!

tu bol,ek baar

har jaayu main ye sansaar

tu dil main rahe

toh jinda hai hum

warna ,yeh saanse kho jaaye

nahi hai iska bhi gum