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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
prologue
excellent dear...
the description was damn funny at many places...
loved it...
Vicky and Geet are so nice and funny...
Rano is the one who doesnt like this...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
part 1
awesome dear...
excellent...
Vicky knows to see the talent...
and Geet thinks Maan is arrogant...
but Maan was serious occupied with something else...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 2

Maan is the new guy selected for the Indian team...

As usual Vicky is glued to the TV...

He is eager to find out who is retained and who is thrown out of the team...

Vicky was so excited he almost jumped off his chair...

He called Geet...

Vicky: Geeet

Geet comes running...

Geet: kya hua?

Ranno: tum donno thode dher shanthi se beit nahi sakthe?

Vicky: yaha dekho TV mein

Ranno: phir koi match aagaya? Hare bhagwaan kaise bhi mujhe iss musibat se bahar nikhaalo, koi iss faltu cricket ko kaise dekhtha?

Vicky: maa, thode dher chup raho, kitna important news chal raha hai

Ranno: tummara sachin prime minister ban gaya hai kya?

Hadnaji just enters...

Vicky: papa ye dekho, Maan Singh Khurana

Ye naam sunthe hi Geet turns to the TV...

Haan wahi Dhust danav hai...

He is been selected for the next series...

Vicky: Geet, issko yaad hai?

Geet pretends to be not interested...

Geet: kaun hai?

Vicky: hare bhool gayi? Humne uss din ground mein dekha tha na? kaise sixer Martha? Mujhe toh pehle hi patha tha ye zaroor ek din Indian team mein khelega, mujhe toh ussi din isski autograph lena chahiye thi...

Vicky is disappointed...

Geet: itna udaas hone ki koi zaroorat nahi, ye koi star war nahi hai, tubelight hai, jaldhi isski fuse phad jayegi

Vicky: Geet, tum dekhthe raho ye kitne ahccha opener bantha, did you see him running between the wiclets? Kitna tez doudtha?

Geet: haan haan ussi speed mein team se bahar bhi jayega, dekhlo

Vicky: tumme cricket ke barein mein kya patha?

Geet: mein toh sab kuch jaanthi hoon, issiliye toh kehthi hoon ki ye hero nahi zero hai

Vicky: toh tum mujhe challenge karthi ho? woh bhi cricket ke mamale mein?

Geet: haan

Vicky: toh teek hai, mein kehtha hoon ki ye iss series mein kam se kam ek century banayega

Geet: nahi banayega

Vicky: challenge? Mein jeet gaya toh tumme apna scooty mujhe dena padega aur tujhe bus mein jaana padega

Geet: haan challenge, agar mein jeet gayi toh tumme roz mera scooty saaf karna padega

Geet thought that he will never win...

But MSK ke upar bet lagaya hai toh zaroor jeet hi jayega haina?

Though Geet hated to watch Maan playing she had to as she had challenged her brother that he will be a looser...she is faraid that she may have to give her scooty to him...

Actually it was his scooty till Geet joined sanjeevani...

Mr.Handa gave it to her as she needed it to get to the hospital in time...

Vicky ka office toh paas mein hi hai, he can catch a bus...

Moreover it's not comfortable for young women to travel in the over crowded buses...

Ranno didn't want Geet to suffer...

Vicky was mad at her when she offered to drop him at the bus station...

He would better walk to work rather taking a lift from her...

Now he wants revenge...he wants his scooty back...

Geet is not ready to part her scooty...

It has made her travels up and down 8 kms daily very easy...

If not for her two wheeler she had to hop from one bus to another for it takes two bus rides to get to sanjeevani...

It's match day...

Geet comes back early to watch the team bat...

It's is a 3 match series so she prays to babaji that Maan doesn't score a hundred in those three matches only...

The first two matches Maan made 12 and 5 runs only...

So Geet is happy that he will not make a hundred at all...

The last match...

Geet is glued to the TV...

She had done her paryers as usual and today too Maan won't bat well...

So here is the first fan praying against her home team...Geet this is not fair, job hi ho Maan ho toh Indian player, haina?

Par Geet kissi MSK ke liye apne scooty kurban kyun degi?

Waise isske hundred se Geet ki nuksaan hi hoga toh Geet ko jaise bhi ussko rokhna hi chahiye, haina babaji?

So be kind to me as always for I'm your loyal follower not like the others who pray only when there is matches...

Geet is talking about her brother who thinks of God only when there is a cricket match...

But Geet prays daily...in the mornings and before going to bed...

Geet tires to blackmail babaji?

Lekhin koi faida nahi kyunki babaji ne pehle hi inn donno ki taqdeer ko ek banadiya haina...

So despite of all her paryers and curses Maan makes 104 in that last match and India win the series...Maan wins a perth in the next tour of Australia ...

Poor Geet lost the challenge to her brother again...

She should have ernt her lessons from her first loss itself...

She should not have bet againat MSK again...

For MSK is a winner...

Next day...

Vicky: Geet, jaldhi tayaar ho jao warna bus choot jayegi

Geet: tumme toh

Geet gets angry...

She had to sacrifice her sleep just to catch the bus...

And she hates waking up early while her brother si still enjoying his morning nap after his jogging...

Vicky wakes up earlier and always disturbs Geet...

Geet throws the perfume bottle at him...

Vicky catches it...

Vicky: thanks Geet

Geet: ye girl's perfume hai

Vicky: tabhi toh girls ko pasand aayega haina?

Vicky winks...

Geet: tujhse kyun baat kar rahi hoon mein, tu chal hat, maa mera tiffin?

Handaji: Geet, mein tumme Sanjeevani drop kartha hoon beta

Vicky is shocked...

Vicky: maa, kya ye Geet aapke akheli aulad hai, mein nahi?

Ranno: pagal, aaise kyun kehthe ho?

Vicy: itne din mein bus stop daudhthe daudthe jaatha toh bhi inko mujhe drop karne ki yaad nahi aayi, ab dekho issko Sanjeevani drop karenge?

Handaji: Ranno, isse kehdho ki zyada behas nahi kare, warna meri beti ki scooter usse cheating karkke cheene ke liye kahin kal se isse paithal office jaana toh nahi padhe

Vicky: kya? meinne cheating kiya? Aaisa iss chater ne kaha

Vicky gets angry...

Geet: maa, dekho iss Bandar ko, mere baal

Handaj: ranno, tumamre bete se kaho ke mere beti pe haath nahi lagane ki, warna mera haath ko kaam dena padega

Ranno: Vicky, chodho usse, ye toh kitni chalaak hai, aur dekho kitne boli banne ki natak karthi hai?

Handaji: meir beti chalaak hai? tum aur tummare bete chalaak honge meri beti mere jaise bahut immandar aur sacha insaan hai

Ranno: ha ha ha, aap aur aapki sachaayi, ye desh Gandhiji ko bhi tabhi yaad karthi jab munna bhai yaad dilatha, aur aap hai abhi bhi Gandhiji ke zamaane mein?

Handaji: ab imandaari ka raj wapas aaraha hai, AAP ki jeet dekha?

Ranno: woh toh jeet ke aage jaana jaanthe hai, aapke tarah nahi

Handaji: matlab? Mein nakamiyaab hoon?

Ranno: meinne toh aaisa nahi kaha, aap ko kudh aaisa lagtha toh mein kya karoon?

Vicky and Geet leave leaving the bigger Tom and Jerry to fight...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2
awesome...
hahaha Geet is too much...
he was praying like that...
and Maan did score...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
geet lost the bet!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 3

At KM...

Dadi is happy for Maan...

Finally his hardwork has paid off...

Dadi prays to god that He keep her Maan busy in his games like this so that Maan would come out of his bad habit...drinking...

But Dadi has no idea that success too is celeted with alcohol...

Maan comes very late owimg to a party ith his friends...

Dadi is very disappointed...

She knows very well that this habit will put an end to his cricketing career sooner or later...

Maan somehow manages to keep off drinking during matches as he too knows that it's his life now...

He succeeds in getting a permanent place in the one day squad...

Though Geet is not much interested in this Maan, she can't stop herself from admiring his game and style...

And the girls going gaga over him hurts her a little...

She thinks that he doesn't deserve such adulation, after all he is so proud and full of attitude...

This is not a good sign for a good player, sachin ko hi dekho, aaj bhi kitna humble hai...issiliye toh aaj bhi millions like him and adore him...

Babaji, issko jaldhi sabak sikhana, warna ye apne ahankar se hi barbad ho jayega...

Somehow Geet wants him to keep playing...she loves watching him play...

Itna achcha kehltha toh India bhi jeetega, aur issiliye Geet chahathi ki ye aaisa hi khelein, haina? Aur kuch nahi? Personally she hates his attitude and his gamand...haina?

But whenever Maan plays she is glued to the TV, parying for his success...

Just like any other crazy MSK fan she has also become this diehard fan of his...

Little did Geet know where this fanfare is going to take her...

Ranno has spoted the difference in her and she thinks that they should add another line in the matrimonial column when they look for a groom, handsome, well educated, plump salary and should be a cricket fan...but for Vicky she would want her bahu to be a serial lover for she needs to strengthen her team, now it's 3 - 1 minority, after Geet's wedding it would be 2 - 1 and when her bahu comes it should be 2 -2 then it would be interesting to see what Vicky does? Support his father or wife?

Now Geet has become superstitious too waering same earrings whenever Maan plays and so on...

She never thought she would end up doing such crazy things which looked insane for her earlier...

But Vicky says that these are the characteristics of a true Indian fan, welcome to the insane cricket fan club Geet...

At KM...

Dadi is happy with Maan's progress...

And the critics are quick to point out his weakness along with his strenghths as a batsman, Maan's irregular timings, constant absence from practice and preparation camps, his lack of commitment, and his over confidence...

Dadi knows the reason behind this, it's not that he is taking everything for granted or he is not interested in cricket, it's his drinking habit that comes in the way of his career once in a while and that is not acceptable in this gentlemen's game of cicket, you should be a gentleman first on and off the field like Sachin or Captain cool Dhohi, and hone your cricket skills and body staying away fron bad habits and bad company...you have a lot of examples for players ending their successful career b'coz of bad behavior and over confidence and complacency ...

Dadi wants someone to keep him in check, someone to take the responsibility of his mother and who has that right to question him, correct him, and punish him when he is wrong, you need some one to point out his mistakes, and that would surely be his better half...hare ab toh Dadi apne sare zamidariyan apne bahu ko sopna ki intrezaar kar rahi haina?

Dadi has pampered Maan and spoilt him too much that he takes her for granted now, he knows the art of fooling her with fake promises...

"Dadi, kal se dekho, mein ussko chootha bhi nahi, choona kya uske taraf dekhtha bhi nahi"

Next day...

"sorry Dadi, woh meinne toh ussko chooa bhi nahi, woh karan haina, ussne zabardasthi mujhe philadhi"

And he makes another promise..."ab dekho, ye aakhri vada hai"

Dadi knows that his promises only hold in the mornings and when the evening comes they vanish into thin air...

Some of his team mates and seniors who have true affection and who really care about his career try to advice him but Maan hates advices...though he tries hard to keep himself under control he has become so addicted that he has lost control on himself now...

And the team for the Newzealand tour is announced...

Maan is part of the team now...

He is very happy...

He has proved himself as a strong opener in India and he has to prove that abroad too...

It's more important to win abroad, we need a good opening stand, and the team has high hopes on him, this is a huge responsibility on his shoulder and he is ready for this, he has awaited such a challenge and he likes challenges, and the wickets in Newzealand being bowler friendly Maan has a tough task ahead...he is committed and he keeps his friends and his dear drinks away for the past few days and is serious with his cricket...he hates failures...he is here to win, never has he lost in his life before and that won't happen in the future too...

*Don'y compare this with our Newzealand tour L ...any cricket fan here?*

Maan had a rough start but he is backed by his captain...

He is confident that he can get back to his form and he works hard at the nets which is unusual...

Btu someone is not that much happy with his performance...

Geet feels as if she has failed...

She is so frustrated...

She knows that it's not in her hands to change someones fortunes, but how she wished to see him winning, and scoring like he used to do in the beginning...

So is Maan, staying away from his bad company and under the watchful eyes of his manager and most importantly his cricket has kept him away from his bad habit...

Though there are many chances for him to drink he knows that he is a new member and he respects his seniors and he also loves his game, and his bad form doesn't help him to relax...

He concentrates in his practice and in the last game which is a series decider Maan has to prove his critics wrong who had already written him off as a failure abroad...

And guess what? It's Geet's b'day and she is not in a mood to celebrate...

Ranno makes her laddu and asks her to have a darshan of babaji before heading to Sanjeevani...

Geet gets ready earlier...

Vicky has forgot her b'day as usual and is thinking about India's match today...

It's a crucial game, the last match...

Ranno is still busy preparing her lunch...

Breakfast bhi tayaar nahi hai...

Geet ko bhi khana ka mann nahi laga...

She leaves without having her breakfast...

At the gurudhwara she sincerely prays to god for Maan's success...

Apne b'day ko bhi bhool gayi...

Sirf Maan ki jeet chahathi...

She never knew how she became such a Maan maniac...

She often laughed at people who worship their idols and treat them like god...

She would never do that...

But she has got addicted to this man's style and attitude and his game...

She wants him to win always which is not possible...

If he returns without scoring in this match too then his cricketing career will end and maybe he won't be able to make it to the team again...

Then she can't see him on TV...

Then what will she do?

Then how will she watch cricket...

She got hooked to cricket b'coz of Maan you should say...

She was not so addicted before that...

Now she had become so crazy even Vicky is left behind...

She loves watching him...

She wants to keep watching him...

She wants to see him at the top...

She wants him to play for many many years so that she can keep watching him...

It's just like the Maneetians who love to watch them forever...

Geet Maan ke naam ki pooja karthi...aur Dhoni aur Indian team ka bhi pooja karthi...

Apne janam din pe kissi anjaan aadmi jiskko sirf TV pe dekhthi usske naam ke pooja karthi, toh ye toh pagal ho gayi hai...haina babaji?

You have so many fans praying and holding poojas for their stars to perform well...

This is quite common atleast in our country...

And Geet's prayers don't go waste...

Her babaji had fulfilled her janam din wish...

Maan hits his maiden test century helping India win the series and bagging the man of the match for himself...

His teammates are very proud of him,,,,,

Vicky apologises for forgetting Geet's b'day and promised to get her a cake if India wins...

India had won and Geet is very happy...

Her star Maan has won the match for them...

It's all the more special for it's her b'day...

It's really the best b'day gift she had ever got...

And she falls in love with this man instantly...

This is just a love for his game...and nothing more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update
geet has became a full maan manic!!!!!😉😆
eagerly waiting for maaneet meeting!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pagal hogai h geet😆
Are ye maan tho piyakad nikla!😲
Chado geet h na use maar maar k rastepe layegi!😉
Waiting for the next !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet maan ki cricket ki deewangi bangayi hai
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nice update...
geet to full maan deewani hai...

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