New MG FF -Howzzattt...last Part on pg 56 apr 26..... - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
good update as usuasl.. bt can u post date also with yr title so we cn know is it nw or the old1. thnx.. again good wrk dear!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
nice
good going geet😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 6

Maan looks at Geet and smiles...

Woh toh hasega hi, ussi ki jeet hui na?

Lekhin Geet ussko itne aasani se jeetne nahi degi...

Ab issko bhi patha chale ki Geet Handa se panga lene se kya ho saktha? Haina babaji?

Maan:hare, tum yahan? Tum toh mujhe yahan se nikhalne wali thin a? ab kya hua?

Maan teases her...

Geet: yahan se nikaal toh nahi sakthi, par ab delthe hai kit um yahan se bahar kaise jaathe ho?

Maan: what do you mean?

Geet: I mean, aap bahut jaldhi bahar jaa sakthe, tabhi toh mein yahan chain se kaam kar sakthi, haina?

Maan: tum jaanthi haina ki mein kaun hoon? MSK hoon, mujhse bachke jaana itna aasaan nahi hai, samji tum

Geet: just shut up

Maan: kya?

Geet: chalo, shuru karthe hai, kadhe ho jao

Maan struggles to stand on his own...

Geet helps him, Maan puts his hands over her shoulder...

Ek minute Geet is stunned but hse recovers herself...

Geet sambalo apne aapko, ye bhi koi mamooli patient hi hai, aur kuch nahi, Geet statue ho gayi...

Maan ussko dekhthe hi rehtha...

He shakes her up...

Maan: kya hua? Bhool gayi ho kya ki aage kya karna hai?

Geet: nahi, ab issko pakdo

Geet gives him the walker...

Maan: walker? Mein itna budda nahi ho gaya, tum dekh nahi skathi, mein abhi bhi jawaan hoon

Geet: hare, pakhdo isse, warna jawaani mein hi chalna bhool jaoge, issko pakdo, tum mere patient ho, boss nahi, samje?

Maan: tumme dekhke toh aaise nahi lagtha ki tum ek doctor ho

Geet: phir kaise lagtha?

Maan: tum toh chikne chameli lagthi ho

Geet: what? Come again

Maan: kuch nahi, ab aage kya karna hai?

Geet: pehle turn karo

Geet turns him around so that he faces the wll...

Geet ussko galat instructions dethi hai...

Geet ussko sabak sikhana chahthi haina? Waise Maan ko zyada chot toh nahi lagi, ek hafte mein teek ho jayega...

Geet chahathi hai ki ye aur ek hafte aaise hi suffer karein...kissi na kssi ko toh issko punish karna hi padega, haina babaji?

Aaise sochkke Geet Maan se thoda zyzda hi workout karwathi...

Next day...

Maan has developed some complications...

He needs a surgery...

Ye toph Geet ki treatment ka hi asar lagtha...

Chief doctor Geet se poochthe hai ki ye kaise hua?

Geet says that it's not her fault...

But she knows that she shouldn't have done like that...

Ye koi aam aadmi thodi nahi hai, cricketer haina?

Agar Geet ke wakhe se Maan aage khel nahi patha toh?

Geet babaji se dua karthi hai ki Maan ko jaldhi teek karein, Geet aage se aaise galthi kabhi nahi karegi...

Dadi bhi aagaye hai...

Dadi Geet se poochthe rehthi ki Maan kab OT se baahr aayega, Maan kitna bhi galthi karein, lekhin Dadi toh Maan se bahtu pyaar karthi haina?

Geet Dadi ko console karthi...

Kitne pyaare Dadi hai? lekhin potha toh?

Maan ko OT se bahar lekhe aathe hai...

Maan ko aaise dekhkke Geet ko bhi bahut bhura lagtha...

Behare toh kab se bahar jaane ke liye taras raha tha...

Haan haan, kyun nahi tarastha, ussko friends ke saath jaakke pina jo hai...

Aur ussi ke wajhe se ye sare problems kade ho gaye...

Bechari Geet kaise jaanegi ki Maan kal raat kissi ko drinks lekhe aane ko kehtha aur woh chup ke se utakke ussko lekhe jaane ke koshish karkke neeche girgaya tha...

Dadi Dr se Maan ki haal poochthe...

Dr: Savithriji, aap ko fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, aapka potha bahut jaldh hi teek ho jayega..., lekhin cricket khelne mein thoda waqt lagega

Dadi: Dr, Maan ko aap kitne din hospital mein rakh sakthe? I mean, kitne din Maan ko yahan riukhna padega?

Dr: kam se kam dus din yahan rukhna padega, phir aap ussko ghar lekhe jaa sakthe

Dadi: nahi, aap Maan ko kan se kam ek mahine yahan rehne dijiye

Geet is confused...sab jaldhi teek hokke ghar jaana chahathe hai, par dadi toh aaise kyun kehthe hai?

Dr: aap chahe toh mr,Maan pura teek hone tak yahi rukh sakthe

Dadi: thank you very much Dr, woh kya haina? Hum unko ghar pe akhele sambal nahi payenge

Dr: no problem Savithriji, hum bhi toh yahan patients ko serve karne ke liye hi hai

Maan ko room mein lekhe jaathe...

Geet is puzzled with dadi's actions...

She goes along with dadi...

Mann abhi bhi behosh hai...

Dadi bahut takhi hui hai, Maan ko lekhe bahut pareshaan jo haina?

Geet: m'am, aap chahe toh mein aap ke liye juice lekhe aathi hoon, aap thoda aaram kijiye

Dadi: thanks bete, aap bhi ortho hai?

Geet: nahi m'am, mein physio hoon

Dadi: very good

Geet: toh mein abhi juice lekhe aathi hoon

Geet dadi ke liye juice lekhe aathi...

Geet: m'am, kya mein aapse kuch pooch sakthi hoon?

Dadi: of course bete, kya poochna chahathe hai?

Geet: thoda personnel hai

Dadi: toh aap bhi Maan ka fan hai?

Geet: kya?

Dadi: hummara matlab cricket fan

Geet: ji nahi

Dadi: phir aap Maan ke barein mein kyun jaana chahathe hai?

Dadi ko shak hotha, koi pyaar ka chakkar hai kya?

Dadi toh hamesha apne Maan ke shadhi ke barein mein hi sochthe rehthi haina? Har ladhki Maan ke bahu hi lagthi, aur Geet toh bahut sundar bhi hai, samajdar bhi hai, physio bhi hai...

Lekhin Maan toh 24*7 pub mein hi rehthe, phir kaise?

Geet: aap mujhe galat samaj rahe ho

Dadi: nahi nahi, aap poocho, kya poochna chahathe hai aap?

Geet: woh... aap ke ghar pe koi problem hai kya?

Dadi is shocked...issko kaise patha apne problem?

Dadi: nahi toh...aap ko aaise kyun lagtha?

Geet: nahi, jo bhi yahan aathe hai jaldhi se jaldh ghar jaana hi chahathe hai, apr aap toh

Geet stops...

Dadi smiles reluctantly...

Dadi: toh aap hummare batein sunrahe the

Geet is scared...ye toh mujhe galat samajh gaye hai...

Geet: nahi nahi

Dadi: kyunke hummare ghar mein aap ke jaise pyaari kudhi nahi hai na

Geet: what?

Dadi: hare, hummare madat karne ke liye koi nahi haina

Geet: achcha?

Dadi: haan bete, Maan ke maa unke paas hothe toh humme koi bhi fikar nahi hothi

Geet: kyun woh kahan hai?

Dadi: woh bagwan ke paas chale gaye

Dadi bahut udaas hothi...

Geet ko bahut bhura lagtha...toh issiliye ye aaisa hai?

Dadi: yahan rehthe toh aap log hummare Maan ke ahcche se dekhbal karthe haina?

Geet: haan, haan, ye toh hummara farz hai

Dadi: issiliye hum chahthe hai ki hum yahi rahe

Geet: aap fikar mat kijiye, aap ko jo bhi chahiye toh mujhe bula sakhte

Dadi gets naughty...

Dadi: par hum patient nahi hai bete

Geet: mein bhi aapki hi madat karna chahathi hoon, iss Dhust danav ki nahi

Dadi: kya?

Geet: kuch nahi, aap kabhi bhi mujhe call kar sakthe, mera no ******, mein yahi hoon, neeche, ab mein chalthi hoon

Dadi: thanks bete

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Nice part

The fight started...let's see what will happen...kuch bhi ho Hume to Maza aayega
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
loved it...
inki tu tu main main start hi gayi 😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
nice update
hope geet changes maan drinking habit!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
part 4
nice...
Maan is destroying himself and also his only career...
well Geet is really so disappointed with Maan...
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part 4
nice...
Maan is destroying himself and also his only career...
well Geet is really so disappointed with Maan...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jung shuru hogayi hai dekhthe hai kaun pehle pyaar karbaitega
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
part 5
awesome...
finally they meet...
Geet is now hating to have liked Maan...
and Maan is so arrogant...
lovely...

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