New MG FF -Howzzattt...last Part on pg 56 apr 26..... - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats dear for the new ff

waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
nice prologue waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
awesome start...loving it...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue
waiting for update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the prologue!!!!!!!!
eagerly waiting for more...
me loving it!!!!!!
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nice prologue... Like button not working
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 1

Maneet mulakat...

Geet happened to meet MSK in person at a chariry match held at the kotla grounds, Delhi...

Vicky got the tickets for himself and his father...but Mr.Handa couldn't go with him and so Vicky took Geet instead as none of his friends were in town...

After the match which Maan's team won b'coz of the half-century he hit from 22 balls, Geet fell in love with this man's game, mind you only the game...

As Vicky has got himself a PHD in cricket he knows the nuances of the game and also easily predicts who will shine better...

As you know our MSK's attitude is the centre of attraction on the ground and even while winning the toss he elects to chase which most captains don't...

They all like to set a target for the others but Maan likes challenges...chasing is challenging for a batsman...you have to keep up to the required run rate...

Vicky takes a looks at Maan again...

Geet looks at his reaction and she too stares Maan...

Geet: kitna akkad?

Vicky smile...

Geet is puzzled...

Vicky: tum dekhthe raho, mujhe lagtha hai ki ye thoda alag hai

Vicky had seen him playing at the nets even for a charity match...

You know Maan hates losing even if it's only a fun game...

So Vicky is impressed that this man has got it in him...ek misaal hai...jeetne ki...

Geet totally disagrees...

That's what she always does...just disagree with anything Vicky syas...

Geet: nahi bhai...ye toh shakal se hi loser lagtha

Vicky: mujh toh tumme lekhe aana hi nahi chahiye

Geet: mujhe laga ki Sachin aayega, warna mein bhi nahi aathi

Vicky: toh phir chale jao, meinne kahan rokha

Geet wants to see what this man does?

She wants to see how he loses...

Geet: nahi nahi, mujhe dekhna hai ki kaise tummara predictions glat hotha, aaise nahi hua toh mein manthi hoon ki tum bahtu bade mahaan ho, warna tumme aaise faltu predictions ko band karna padega

Vicky: teek hai, mujhe pura viswas hai ki ye zaroor mujhe niraas nahi karega, tumne usske aaknon mein dekha nahi?

Geet: kya? Usske aankhen tede hai kya?

Vicky: nahi Geet, jeetne ka josh

Geet: haan haan, tum dekhthe raho, itna gamandi hothe toh zaroor harjaathe, haina babaji?

Maan likes pressure...he likes to dominate the innings and crush the bowlers...

And that's what he did...the opposition scored only a few runs and the match was a one sider...

The crowd is disappointed by the slow pace of the first innings and they wanted a master blaster atleast from the next side...

Though it's only a charity match Maan's innings was thoroughly entertaining...paisa wasool performance tha...

He hits those sixes with very little effort and also the classic cover drives he hits for fours...

This Maan is a rare combination of Sachin's class and shewag's flamboyance..(how I wish we had such a player for real...placed my bets on Dawan...hope he doesn't disappoint)

Let Maan be left handed like Dada...he also has Dada's shirt removing aggression and attitude, MSK haina?

While Vicky was admiring Maan, Geet had to accept the fact that he is a class player, very stylish...

Geet too appreciated his batting and agreed that Vicky is right...

She had no other option...everybody was praising him like they have found the next sachin?

That's too much...

Vicky is very happy, not that his prediction is right but we have found a new talent for team India...

Vicky has already started imaginng Maan in the blues...playing for India...

BTW...Maan had not only impressed Vicky but also some of the selecters present at the ground...

Vicky: Geet, ab toh tumme manna hi padega ki ye faltu ke attitude nahi hai, ye toh sach mein talented hai

Geet: haan haan guruji, aaj ka gyaan toh kamaal ka hai

Geet was already upset that her brother won the challenge...

Now he would boast himself as a cricket guru...

Vicky is off to get a closer look of Maan...

Geet had to accompany her brother for she had no other company...

Geet was also thinking that maybe she should get an autograph too for he is sure to make it big one day...this Maan is has stuff...you can't ignore him whether you like him or hate him...

Geet happened to see the worst of him on the same day!

When all the players took their time to sign autographs and take photographs with their fans this Maan just ignored them and left immediately...

Waise koi aur din hotha toh Maan bhi fans ke saath thoda masti kartha, lekhin aaj nahi, kyunki aaj Dadi kkka janam din hai aur Maan toh Dadi ko abhi tak wish bhi nahi kiya hai, damn it...how could he forget dadi's b'day, the only soul who oves him genuinely in this whole world where people love him either as a cricketer or as a millionaire's son, just as the innings ended Adi called Maan to inform about the dinner party...that's when Maan remembered that it's Dadi's b'day...

Lucky for him that Adi called earlier, b'coz after 7 you can't contact Maan or disturb him for he is off to his Pub with his so called buddies...

Geet didn't like his attitude at all ...itna akkad?

Abhi toh charity match hi kheltha aur apne aap ko agla sachin samajtha?

Toh first impression is not that good...

As a player he is OK but as a person he is not as good as his batting...

Geet ke nazar mein Maan fail ho jaatha...

Par Maan haven't noticed her as of now...

So it's only half mulakaat...haina babaji?

Hope the next meeting is better...maybe it would be even more worse than this...

Don't expect love at first sight...

It's always like this...Maneet have a bumpy start but they always win the race in the end...

That's what matters...haina?

Geet stares Maan as he leaves and thinks...

Never mind, ye new boys are always like this, full of attitude and no good qualities to make a match winner, jaise ki Sachin ya Dhoni...ye toh bahut hi gamandhi hai, aur Dhust Danav bhi, haina babaji?

At KM...

Dadi is getting ready to go to her charity home which she had adopted...

The children had kept calling her and wishing her from the morning...

They had arranged this surprise party for her and they just called her to inform...

Dadi was sad that her favourite boy didn't wish her today but now she is back with full enthusiasm to meet the children...

Maan had already organized this dinner for her...but just forgot the date...and this match kept occupying his mind for the selectors were present to watch the youngsters' performances...

Though he is a popular ranji player the Indian selectors wished to see him perform live...

Thet's when they will get know whether the rumours about his talents as a gifted left handed batsman are true...

Maan had been waiting for such an oportunity for a long time...

So when it came his way he had to grab it with both hands...it's lke a match winning catch...

Either you catch and save your career or you drop it and you are doomed...

Dadi knew that Maan is working hard for this all these days and it's time for him to shine...

Dadi wabted to attend the children's party and later come and see Maan, hopefully he will be home earlier today...

As Maan comes back Nakul informs about Dadi's party...

Maan wanted to meet her at the party itself, he roo liked to spend time with the kids...

Whenever he had some time he went and played cricket with them, they were the ones always ready to bowl for him and there are a few surprises too who have the capability to knock down his wicket...

Maan likes challenging them to bowl him out and he will take that winning kid out for dinner...

So the kids take their bowling seriously and for Maan it's their love that takes him back to them again and again...

The party had started and dadi is ready to cut the cake...

Suddenly the lights go off and the kids get scared...

Maan comes with the candle singing happy b'day...

The kids are happy to see their Maan bahiya...

Dadi is very happy and she is overwhelmed by Maan's surprise entry ...

Maan: hare Dadima, mere bina aap cake kaise kaat sakthe?

Dadi: aap ko abhi apni dadi ki yaad aayi?

Maan: meinne socha chalo aaj Dadi ko surprise dhoon

Dadi: joote

Maan: sachi dadi, haina guys

Kids: haan, Maan bhaiya kabhi joot nahi bolthe

Dadi: aapne inko bahut achche se train kiya hai

Maan: chalo, sab shuru karo, happy b'day to Dadi

Maan lights the candles...

Maan: come on dadi, lets rock the party

Later they cut and serve the cake Maan dances with dadi...

Maan: dadi, aapko kya chahiye?

Dadi ko ab bas Maan ki kushi chahaiye, aur kuch nahi...

Maan: walking stick chalega?

Dadi: walking stick kissi budhe ko dedo, hum abhi bhi jawaan hai

Maan: hai meri zulfh sakhi...tu abhi tak hai hassi aur mein zawaan

Dadi: ye jawaani hai deewani...come on everybody...

They start antakshari...

Maan is very happy...

But some one is not so happy...aur koi nahi, humamri Geet...

That night Geet kept thinking about this MSK who had already impressed her so much though in the wrong way...

Little did Geet know that she is going to meet this Dhust Danav very soon, that too face to face, at her very own sanjeevani where she is an intern...

yaad hai Geet physiotherapist hai...agar Maan sportsman ho toh physio ki kabhi bhi zaroorat padegi!. Haina?

Issiliye toh Geet ko bhi physio banna pada...ye toh babaji ka khel hai...

After this Geet forgot about Maan completely till she saw his picture in the news...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start...

Maan as cricketer...




Loved their half mulakat...


First impression kuch acha Nahi raha maan ke liye


Ab geet ki baari ...dekhte hain Uska asar Kaisa hoga maan par
Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pehla impression hi bad nikla maan geet ki nazron se.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...
1sr impression bigad gaya...

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