THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read the update titled "Tigress". Geet indeed has become a tigress in her own way. Loved her way of opening up to maan and her feelings expressing them so beautifully ..statue...hmmm...That is so sweet of maan to almost always go with the way geet would want things and follow her and to obey dadi's advice of not going to her room tonite and thus keeping her with him at the beach. what a serene sight that would be to see...maaneet together cocooned in each other's embrace under the starlit sky...
maan is definitley to going to freakout when geet mentions to him about her going to HP...wonder how they both will live without each other ...

absolutely loved the maaneet scenes you have thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry .. i forgot to press like button for last update...
n today's update ... " beautiful " ..
i never thought in my dreams dat geet would drive da bike ..
its soo surprising ..
n he took full advantage of it ..
her love for him was clearly shown in dis update ..
da confusion dat y she is not able to express herself just for him ..
but after "statue" thing wat happened b/w dem especially geet .. she took a bold step towards him .. da emotions flowing over through deir eyes were fabulous..
deir unconditional love for each other can see through dis update ..
with her maan is always carefree n naughty ..
loved it ... 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
Once again a lovely well written part that had me drawn into the story sighing at all the emotions flowing between the two.😊 Geets love for Maan is growing stronger and stronger as time passes and she is stuck between her upbringing and society and her shyness not realising that these very traits are what Maan finds attractive in her.😳
Loved the beach scene where Geet lets go and explores her love for Maan and they end the day talking and binding their love, thus making their bond stronger.😃
Maan I'm sure will be upset when he finds out that she is leaving but I'm also sure that he will be supportive when he knows the reasons why.
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
though i love all ur updates... but when u give that maaneet thud waale parts... am just gone😳... may be u write what i want to read... hayeee avi pls dont stop this silsila... mera thud waale wishing updates tho aur bhi kaiii hain 😳
being a gal... we can really understand geets state... how much this world goes for equality between men and women... there r some aspects especially for us indians... where gals are bound by some rules and traditions...from the time we r born we are hearing, seeing and are told about all these ... and we tend to follow them... i love how u portrayed all this through geet...'

the bike ride..😳 what more to ask... am still in dream mode

each gesture of geet and her effect on maan was so dreamy... ki words nahi hain to describe ...

i just loved this uopdate so much..thnka u avi😳
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww dear that was so cute
poor maneet though
well she wants him just as much as he does
but her morals and her upbringing wont let her disclose those desires for him
and she hates that
she can see how much he is suffering due to this
but of course for maan her happiness and comfort comes before anything even his desires for her
hmmm well that was pretty interesting
the bike rise with geet driving back
more like riding the wind
but more than that what she could feel from him sitting behind her
bless overwhelmed her didnt it
not that i blame her
and then her making him a statue and well then him trying to control hismelf as she touched him like never before
waise by the time you guys get to Switzerland am sure she wont want to stop you either
ahhh she is going back is she
and he dont know yet
but she didnt wanna tell him either and ruin his night
am glad this geet came out too the one who loves maan without any inhibitions
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.. Really loved the way how they both feel about each other.. Cant describe it in words..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome supeb mind blowing update Avi!

hats off
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Posted: 11 years ago
So the sher has atlast trapped the doe but surprise surprise...the sweet innocent doe had changed into a tigress 😆
loved Maan's plans nd attempts to seduce Geet nd then Dev nd dadima teasing both of them leaving behind an irritated Maan nd blushing Geet 😆 I had really good time imagining the whole scenerio 😃
loved seeing Maan controlling himself even though Geet had atlast even ithough if not fully but had got over her inhibitions. .but his respect for her nd her values had increased my respect for him 😊
now waiting to see how they'de manage staying away from each other 😔
thanx for the pm nd sorry again .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
While the main part of this chapter for everyone else might have been the romance, what I really felt for was how Geet was torn. It pinched my heart to see how she thought of herself and her expression of love lesser in front of him. She is a girl raised with traditions and customs ingrained into her deeply and standing at the threshold of what her mind tells her to do and where her heart wants to lead her is pretty depressing. She somehow reminded me of WH's Geet. TL's Geet is the opposite. She is strong enough to reach out for her love and stand firm for it while at the same time not letting go of her Darji's teachings. She is a blend of heart and mind and I love that about her!

I have heard, and read, that when alcohol goes down the system, it makes one lose coherent thoughts yet clears up some specific things. Even if the minutest, champagne did play a part in her... uhh... boldness. Pardon me, I don't know how to put this properly. Anyway, it reminded me of the holi chapter where they were both high on bhang and had some wonderful moments. The statue thing was obviously a result of the champagne. And kudos to Maan for playing along, no matter how difficult it was. 😆

Oh yes, Maan let her drive while she was slightly drunk? Bad bad! Though I know nothing could have gone awry with him right there. 😳

I am glad, though, that even if it was the champagne which pulled her shyness away and let her act on her own desires, that she expressed herself more openly. It was important for Maan to know she loves him as deeply as he does, and for both of them to express to each other that they accept the other just the way they are.

Along with Geet, I was also struck (again!) with the realisation of how much and for how long Maan has loved her. And it reminded me of why I love him so much! ❤️

Something that you have been astonishing me with, is variety and the sense of fulfillment of this story. It is a complete package with all flavours of life. Hats off for pulling it off so well! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

While the main part of this chapter for everyone else might have been the romance, what I really felt for was how Geet was torn. It pinched my heart to see how she thought of herself and her expression of love lesser in front of him. She is a girl raised with traditions and customs ingrained into her deeply and standing at the threshold of what her mind tells her to do and where her heart wants to lead her is pretty depressing. She somehow reminded me of WH's Geet. TL's Geet is the opposite. She is strong enough to reach out for her love and stand firm for it while at the same time not letting go of her Darji's teachings. She is a blend of heart and mind and I love that about her!

I have heard, and read, that when alcohol goes down the system, it makes one lose coherent thoughts yet clears up some specific things. Even if the minutest, champagne did play a part in her... uhh... boldness. Pardon me, I don't know how to put this properly. Anyway, it reminded me of the holi chapter where they were both high on bhang and had some wonderful moments. The statue thing was obviously a result of the champagne. And kudos to Maan for playing along, no matter how difficult it was. 😆

Oh yes, Maan let her drive while she was slightly drunk? Bad bad! Though I know nothing could have gone awry with him right there. 😳

I am glad, though, that even if it was the champagne which pulled her shyness away and let her act on her own desires, that she expressed herself more openly. It was important for Maan to know she loves him as deeply as he does, and for both of them to express to each other that they accept the other just the way they are.

Along with Geet, I was also struck (again!) with the realisation of how much and for how long Maan has loved her. And it reminded me of why I love him so much! ❤️

Something that you have been astonishing me with, is variety and the sense of fulfillment of this story. It is a complete package with all flavours of life. Hats off for pulling it off so well! 👏


so basically you didn't like it😆

I am amazed at the way you evade👏 or skirt around the entire update

Talented Mari👏 Jai ho!

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