🥱🥱hi dear...i just don't know how i missed this beautiful story...
this is so amazing...loved it to the core...
A entirely different and a strong story line...
have seen a strong geet in some stories...but the originality of the
character always changed after she falls in love...but here she is
the same geet handa even after she met maan...there are so many
scenes which i loved so much...can't add every thing
in most of the stories geet suffers bcoz of maan ...
in this story it is entirely opposite...she is strong...entirely different from every story in this forum👏👏
she is the tiger and she makes the rules...and she even breaks it...😉. loved rough n tough geet👏 and hats of to ur writing..bcoz i think it may be difficult to show a women like this and phir bhi making the readers to respect the character ...and love the character..this is all possible with ur writing
though at times hated her decisions...but the character needs it...
and even maan is also tough...so sharp...loved him
i thought there will be hate track at first between maaneet...
but you amazed me with the track..😲
they get along...and they were so cool about it...
though maan was bit different to geet than what he is at past😉
i loved every thing about them...😊
though they were not serious about the relationship especially geet..
but it is geet..she never was serious...
loved how maan was always supporting her and also giving her space...i loved their understanding..
she found her happiness with maan...
and it was a sweet journey...but but don't no what happened to geet
all of a sudden...she brokeup with maan...may be she was disturbed
with her father's demise...and more over her guilt that she was not
their at his last breath...may be some other reason...😕😕😔
but the every update after that was so heart wrenching..
i was thinking all possible reasons for geet's behavior...
sometimes i thought she is saying truth , that is.. she never was serious about them...
but somewhere i felt she is running from any type of commitments...
bcoz she lost her mother n father and may be now she never wanted to
loss anyone... and still i am thinking the exact reason for her behavior...😳.
OMG!! that arjun...he tried to mess with geet...not once but twice,,
and those updates were so painful...dear don't leave this arjun...he
deserves a severe punishment😡😡😒
and geet's suffering after that...i never ever thought geet will
feel so helpless...and her child like talks holding the doll , that is so heart breaking...was so painful to see the strong geet in that state...
and when she went to maan's farmhouse...OMG!! to tell u ...at 12AM
my eyes were dropping but i was so curious to read the further
updates..and i was like...🥱
beautiful writings dear...u have made a complete plan to mesmerize us by twist and turns in the story
u ended the chapter of geet handa...😭
and the way things turned after that was like a suspense movie...
don't no what happens further...was so curious to find out everything..
and there comes the innocent geet...a complete opposite to the geet handa ...and after then ..everything was unpredictable...
geet lost her memory...unlike all the memory loss tracks...where they remembers everything except the persons in their life.😆..u have
comeup with more reality..though i don't no how that person feel..😕
u have taken the track with so much care...and i loved it so much..👏👏
the way geet even forgot to count...to recognize..to read...to
write...so heart wrenching..😲
and finally maan saw his jaan..😳😊
the way maan tried to forget her behavior towards him...and was so happy to see geet...i so loved this...
was really mad at nisha for hiding the truth from maan..but i was
convinced after her explanation to maan ...she is right..and she only
wanted geet to be safe...love nisha
their starts another sweet story with maan and ever so innocent geet
the way she was happy with maan unknowing to her..
and when she was short of words to write what she felt with maan
around...(after their 1st walk) dear that is so so hear wrenching...😭
and then every thing ..the way she tries to remember everything..
and her happiness when she walks without limping... and to eat the
spicy food...the way she was enjoying with maan with still some
reluctance that he is a guy...😆
i loved every thing...the updates were so so good...
loved their sweet talks...her questions her curiousness...
oh finally she found something about them (the camera) to cherish..
you have written it so nicely...
may be i have missed something in my comment(bcoz while reading i
thought of so many things to write about what i felt while
reading...but sadly i forget most of them😕 )
and a song sequence when maaneet were separated...may be "piya aaye
na"😕 was so superb dear...
love u for giving this brilliant story...
ohh..i just remembered brilliant scene..."abhi nahi aana maan..."i was crying while reading this update... and the line "abhi nahi aana" was painful😭
thank u for giving this brilliant story dear...and hats of to ur writing..will be waiting for the maaneet's journey...
Edited by maaneetmaahi - 11 years ago
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