THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 29

Originally posted by: jasraj123

sorry for being soo sloppy😆 reader😉

what else u can expect from a reader like me😕😕😕

Originally posted by: punam2712

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MAITHLI FINALLY ANSWERED THE CREEP AND SHOWED WHAT A KEEDA HE WAS

AND HE HAS NO CONTROL ON THEM ANYMORE AS MAITHLI FINALLY DECIDED TO THROW HIM OUT OF THEIR LIVES

AVI I AM BLUSHIING

GEET AND MAAN WERE MAKING LOVE WITH THEIR EYES - ONE COULD FEEL THE PASSIONA ND NEED BETWEEN THEM

AND MAAN COULD SENSE THAT SHE WILL MATCH HIM IN PASSION WHEN THEY FINALLY BECOME ONE

SHE WANTS HIM S MUCH AS HE DOES

LOVED THE GIRLS DAY OUT - THEY NEEDED IT JUST TO LET OFF STEAM

AND IT GAVEA CHANCE TO TARA TO BOND WITH HER SISTER

MAAN'S ACIDENT - IT MADE GEET REALIZE THAT SHE DOESNT WANT ROSES WORDS BALLONS

SHE ONLY WANTS HER MAAN

LOVE IS A FEELING WHICH COULD BE SEEN IN EYES AND ACTIONS

A SUPERB UPDATE

Originally posted by: heytal

Sumeet makes his dirty entry but this Kabir is much stronger

Loved how you wove the entire scene it was so intense

Happy that Maan didn't misunderstand but also witnessed the earnest and sincerity of Kabir😊

But the show stealer was indeed Maithali the way she bounced back and how!

Kudos to her and u

Superb dialogues

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Thanks Heytal. Coming from someone whose dialogues are always superb, it means a lot. From someone who likes gentle rain, thunder does not come easily. Glad it made its mark😃

Maaneet and their piping hot passion!

Haaye paani mein aag laga di

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Geet missing her Maan Thud😭

Girls day out was a pleasant change but the chain incident

Glad Geet could get back the chain some memories associated with the things are more valuable and precious😳

Then the blow😲

I was like Avi😡

But then realized dqno1 hain toh apni Geet ko confess karwane ke liye koi solid dramatic build up toh chahiye na😳

Drama tha, after all mera naam hai but I truly believe in those words.

Bechaari bolna bhi pada toh aise but those three words will like a matter of life and death for both!

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Zabardast update yaara

Loved it totally

waiting for more

Hope u are having a great time

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Originally posted by: priya111111

hello avi

goodmorning for me😆😆

goodnight for u😆😆

Originally posted by: Deelight

lovd d update especially d women power depictd by kabir's mom...kudos👍🏼 as usual maneet moments were awesom👏 👏 👏 👏 lov ur work do keep up d goood work. . . eagerly waitin fa d nxt update!

This FF s juzt purrrfect😊

jz reminds me abt the various love tracks in ur FF... each track is beautifully written

update sooon !! tak care 😊

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Complete mosiac of emotions,dis update was just like d whole FF.

I cant explain d amount of hatred I felt for Sumit and d amount of respect I felt for Maithili.Its pretty obvious that Maan and Kabir wud get aggressive to hear Megha's and Maithili's insult but what wasnt obvious was Maithili fighting for herself,literally.And d verbal ans she gave to her impotent ex-husband...Wow,hats off to Maithili and You.Thanks for the compliment. The type of world that we are living in today and especially with the constant news about women being abused and harassed made me write this character. It would not have been complete for me unless the victim found some satisfaction at last.

And then d Megha-Geet-Tara,part.Seriously only a girl can understand d beauty of that outing.Tara's love showering on Megha,very cute.But the chain snatching incident,does that hold any bigger importance in d story???? Either i am becoming too predictable or you are super sharp😃

And then comes the best part of the Update,the Maaneet niharofying each other part.Bina chhue kisiko mehsus kaise kiya jata hai,wo iss part se pata chalta.I ran short of words to describe the beauty of scene.bas itna samajh lo that I was mesmerised.
There are so many facets to being in love. I wish I had more time to explore each of them here with these two..
And then what????
Maan's accident😲 nooo

but thank God and You that he is fine.

in total,paisa wasool update buddy.

Originally posted by: custodian75

I really hate that Sumit! And I am sorry to say that the world is filled with such guys in different forms. I was really worried that Maithili would go back to her old self and all the efforts of dadi would go to waste. But thanks to you she was able to stand for herself. People like Sumit are full of bloated ego and are really a coward from inside. If you fear them they frighten you, if you scare them they get scared.

The pool scene was OH MY GOD! They were not even standing close, leave touching, but still but effect each other so strongly.

It's natural for megha to feel low after that bad episode, but when you are with good friends, they can really bring you out of the worst mood back to normal. I think that is the strength of good friendship.

So Geet confesses to Maan. Beautiful is all I can say.